You Are My Heart Beat ...Two Shot On MehRya part 2 is updated on PG 4 - Page 6

Originally posted by: stellaV

Shamz 😭😭

Cliffhanger 😕 Tension nahi sahen ho rahi mujhse aaj

It was too emotional. Shaurya ki kya condition rahi hogi jab mehek ne usse bola that she's gonna die in his arms 😕😕 Thank god they have reached the hospital.

Agla part please jaldi. Double tension ho jaegi varna mujhe. Vaise bhi aaj to din hi nahi nikal raha h, aur upar se i won't be able to watch the episode too 😭

Originally posted by: vimikrao

May be in the show also we would be able see this kind of scene 😲

Shaurya's condition was hopeless, he was broken the way he asked his mother to pray to her God because he wouldn't listens to him. 😭 my heart goes for him. 😭 Sharma family is angry on him but couldn't say anything at this time 😕

Waiting for next chap 😃

Thanks for PM 👏 beautiful OS 😛

Vinu

Originally posted by: sudha_

Emotional update shams.. 😭
Beautifully written dear.. 😊
Hope so aaj yeh sab serial Mai bhi ho..liked the way shaurya was asking her mom to prey to her god..
Waiting for the 2 nd part..continue soon.. 😊
Thanks fr the pm..
Lots of love nd 🤗
Sudha.. ❤️

Originally posted by: Khushi_Dillse

Kya kar rahe ho aap shammu...2nd part kan update karoge..?

I can't see Shaurya in this state and our poor mahek in danger...Please please update soon...I want to confess Shaurya what mahek for him...

Dekhkar palke meri kehne laga koi fakeer...,

Inn pe barkhurdar sapno ka vajan kuch kum karo...!!!

Originally posted by: CinderellaGirl

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Koi mujhse kehta tha ki teri stories rula deti hai. Tu bohot badi wali draamebaaz hai. Apni stories ko thoda kam emotional banaya kar.. but ab yeh sab kya hai hmm??😲

Didu yr.. rula diya yr aapne. SK ki condition dekh ke na mujhe kisi ki yaad aa gayi. 😭

You penned it down very well yr. Every emotion every scene was just perfectly penned down😊

Keep it up for the best work you did👏⭐️

Thanks for pm😛

Give next part soon!!😉

See ya!!😆

PS - Give this story title from OS to TS (Two Shots). As there are just two parts only na so😛

Originally posted by: Shamrouz

Awww Meli I was worried about u when. Writing the dilouges. ..Glad you liked it and understood it 🤗

I always write what we all wants to see. ...If iam getting half as per my expectations also than iam happy...😆😆

After such a horrible episode this lifted my mood

Wow Sham kya ending thi fabulous. 👏

Even though she was in coma she heard him, Shaurya kept his words he didn't come to meet her as soon as she gained her conscious. But Awara & Vicky played Cupid here. 😉 because of them Mehek came to know Shaurya leaving for London. Our Khadoos finally confessed he can't live without her & missed her single day since she left him 😳 That kiss was much needed to assure himself he got her, barpayi jab tak poori tarah se uski na ho jaye. 😆

Thanks for PM & waiting more from you

Vinu

Lovely , Cutie and Happy wala story

Originally posted by: thilss