My own celebrity! Updated. 9/01 pg4

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Posted: 8 years ago
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Hey peeps, today is my first day here and trust me I am really happy. Although, I am not a daily soap kind of a person but this show is attracted me a lot. Thanks to its male lead Karan vohra. I don't know about Mehak, but I find him quite hot and dashing.

So, I am very keen on writing an OS, so here's attempting one. Hope you guys like it and enjoy it. Criticism is always welcomed.

Here it goes:



They say, to be in love is a surreal feeling that can make this earth heaven for the people who are in love. But, the new romantic and oh-so fully in love Shaurya Khanna made Mehak really confused. She was not sure whether to go for this marriage or not as his new romeo avatar was making her uncomfortable and curious at the same time. On the other side, Shaurya was completely driven in love with this middle class girl whom he never thought to see even in his dreams. Laying on his bed, he was happy and excited. It was getting difficult for him to stay away from Mehak, so he decided to message her. 'Hey soon to be mrs. Khanna, kab tab jagogi?'
Mehak in her room was lost in her own thoughts and came to senses when her mobile beeped again. It was Shaurya. 'Waise ignore acha kar leti ho tum. I mean kaafi talented ho jo Shaurya Khanna ko ignore kar paati ho.'
Again, she chose to ignore the message. 'Pata nahi isse shaadi karna sahi faisla hai bhi ya nahi. I mean hum dono mein kuch bhi common nahi hai. Pata nahi aisa kya dekh liya jo mujhse shaadi ka khayaal aa gaya isko.' After a while, her phone beeped again. 'You know what, aaj humari engagement mein tum bahut achi lag rahi thi. Nazar tumpe se hatt hi nahi rahi thi. I fell in love with you all over again.'
After sending her so many messages and getting no reply, he felt lil disappointed. He thought to drope her last message of the night. So, carefully, in the hope of reply, his clever mind thought and messaged her. 'Chalo ab so jao, neend aa rahi hogi tumhe. Waise bhi kal milna jo hai. I am very excited for tomorrow. Good night my love.'
This last message of Shaurya now made her clueless and a little worried. She tried hard to not revert but at last gave up and messaged him back. 'kal kya hai?'
Seeing her message, Shaurya smiled and took a sigh of relief. (at least she bothered to message). Now, the ball was in his court. It has his turn to take the revenge.
Mehak messaged him again. 'I mean aisa kya hai kal jo itne excited ho rahe hai.'
Seeing her restlessness, he grinned and bursted into laughter. After completing his laughing session, he took his mobile and replied 'kal humari date hai.'
Mehak's mobile dropped out of her hand after reading the message. She immediately messaged him 'main nahi ja sakti kisi date wate pe. Or waise bhi ghar mein sab mana karte hai. Kisi or ke saath chale jaana.'
'chala jata agar tumhari jagah kisi or se pyaar hota. Or waise bhi tumhare ghar mein sabse baat karli hai maine. Kisi ko koi problem nahi hai. So, be ready. Good night darling.'
Mehak was furious and tensed as how to avoid this date or what excuse she could make now to get out of this problem. She murmered 'Samjhata kya hai apne aap ko. Mujhse puche bina hi mere plan bana liya. Meri life ki apni koi choice hai ya nahi. Shaurya khanna, tum bahut selfish ho. Sirf apne baare mein sochte ho. Koi or kya sochta hai, kya feel karta hai and kya chahta hai, ise tumhe koi matlab nahi.'
She was sad as she was not happy with this commitment. She was unable to think what's right and wrong. Being in a relationship with Shaurya Khanna will take her and her life in which direction. With so many thoughts and questions in her mind, she fall asleep.

Waiting for the feedback!

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Posted: 8 years ago
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That was absolutely beautiful ..
SK being in love and mehak being curious is okay ...but she is confused abt him is new ...tat too after engagement ???
Wud like to kno more ...

Oh bdw ...welcome to this crazy forum ...hope u have more fun !!!!
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Welcome to the forum dear.One more fan added in our fans list.Glad to see you here.

Starting is interesting.I am curious to know about the futher story so update soon dear.
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Hey sweta gud to see ur first OS..
So one more Revenge story...

Plz update soon..
Eager to know Kal kyaa hogaa😳
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Posted: 8 years ago
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First of all, a warm welcome to this forum. The story seems very interesting. Shaurya head over heels in love with mehak n mehak being a confused soul. I understand her dilemma. It seems hard for to digest the fact tht a guy like Shaurya Khanna could fall for her... Pls continue...
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Welcome to the forum do give us an update soon
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Thank you guys for such a warm welcome. And I am glad you are liking it. It's really encouraging! I mean I am not master in writing, but always wanted,so just trying. Would love to hear the feedback from you both positive and negative. So, here's the next part:


'Tu pagal ho gayi hai kya? Kis baat ko leke itna pareshaan ho rahi hai? Arre you should consider yourself lucky. Shaurya khanna se shaadi hone waali hai teri. Celebrity hai vo, star hai. Jagah jagah bade bade hoardings lagte hai uske.', Sonal explained to Mehak.
'Aisa kya bada celebrity hai? Salman khan hai kya? Huh.' Mehak defended.
'Pata hai kitna famous hai vo. Logo ke friends hote hai, uske fans hai. Ladkiyan marti hai uspe, or wo tujhpe. Tujhe to khush hona chahiye.'
Mehak in a frustrated mode 'tu meri side hai ya uski? Or fans wans ka mujhe nahi pata, par tu to meri friend hai na, to uski side se kyu bol rahi hai.'
Sonal tried to explain mehak softly,' teri friend hu isiliye bol rahi hu. Shaurya se acha ladka nahi ho sakta tere liye. In fact, kisi bhi ladki ke liye. Dream man hai vo, haath se jaane mat dena warna baad mein pachtati rehna. Or waise bhi tujhe problem kya hai?.'
Mehak tried to put her point and said, 'problem ye hai ki achanak usko ho kya gaya hai. Pehle to meri shakal usko aalloo ke paranthe jaisi lagti thi. Ek moti, boring, middle class ladki ke alawa or kuch nahi thi main uske liye. Or aaj? Pehle ke or aaj ke shaurya mein bahut fark hai.'
'Mehak tu kuch zyada hi nahi soch rahi? Zarurat se zyada dimag mat chala, or ja jaake taiyar ho ja, hamare jiju aate hi honge tujhe date pe le jaane.'

It was 7 in the evening, shaurya came to pick mehak at her place. Everyone was happy to see him but his eyes were searching for only one person, Mehak.Ravi chachu said to shaurya in a teasing manner 'or khanna saahab aaj khush to bade honge aap. Kya planning shaaning kar rakhi hai bhai.' Jeevan chacha interrupted 'oh putra ek kaam kar mujhe bata de, maine kisi ko nahi batana.'
'Arre lo, meri laddoo aa gayi' PD said putting an end to the conversation they were having in the hall.
Wearing a peach coloured churidar salwaar sameez with her long, straight hair fully opened, she was looking breathtakingly beautiful. Seeing her elegance and beauty, shaurya was awestruck. He kept staring her with a slight smile on his face. He was lost in her love till nehal clicked her fingers and made him come to the reality 'arre HJ, I know aap di ke saath date pe jaane ke utawale ho rahe hai, par apni aadhi gharwali ko ignore karna achi baat nahi hai.'
Mehak was standing close to kanta chachi and was holding her hand tightly. She was nervous and slowly headed towards the car with shaurya guarding the way. Like a true gentleman, he opened the car's door for her and made her sit inside the car comfortably. 'Main mehak ko jaldi ghar drop kar dunga, safely.' told shaurya khanna to everyone there. Nehal responded 'Arre chill HJ, take your time.

Shaurya was driving the car and in between was also giving a loving look to her would be wife. She was very nervous and was looking outside the window. There was awkward silence in the car.' You are looking beautiful'. She looked at him and responded thank you with her beautiful eyes. 'To kitne ghante lage tumhe ready hone main?' 'What'? She shouted. Shaurya laughed and said 'waise main tumse already impressed hu to itni mehnat karne ki zarurat nahi hai.' She smirked and thought how overconfident this man is and rolled her eyes. 'I want to spend my rest of life with you mehak. I will always keep you happy.' Mehak looked away shying. She couldn't deny the fact that she loved what she heard just now. They were reaching towards their destination. Music was playing. *main baarish ho jaunga, tum baadal ho jaogi, dekh lena...
Itna tumko chahunga tum paagal ho jaaogi, dekh lena...
Kehta hai sun ye dhoop kinara... Tera hua main sara ka sara... *
Love was everywhere! The feeling they were experiencing was completely different. Mehak was nervous but was now happy as shaurya was taking all the pain to make her feel comfortable. Nobody did that for her earlier. In just 15 mins, she started liking his company. That was the charm and magic of shaurya khanna. She started accepting the fact that he is not khadus anymore. She was smiling and then looked outside the window only to find that they were in some kind of jungle area. The place where the car was heading was quite far from the city and absolutely isolated. Her smile turned into fear and she started worrying. After gathering some strength she said to shaurya 'ye kya hai? Ye yee kaha le ja rahe ho? Or or yahan to kuch bhi nahi hai. Koi kisi ko date pe jungle leke jaata hai kya. Tum car ghumao, mujhe nahi jana yaha.'
'Shaanti se baithi raho, seat belt lagalo and enjoy the drive.' Shaurya smirked.
Mehak was in a real stress, she murmured 'hey bhagwan, iske dimaag mein pata nahi kya chal raha hai. Pata nahi kaunse ghane jungle mein leke ja raha hai mujhe. Or pata nahi kya karega mere saath. Rakshas kahi ka'
' Sab sunayi de raha hai mujhe, behra nahi hu main' shaurya teased her. 'Is rakshas ke upar trust kar sakti ho waise.' He laughed.



That's it for now, will comeback with the next part soon. 😉
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Hi dear welcome to ZKM forum...

It's nice starting quite different from other stories...Shaurya is more sweeter than required sometimes I m getting confused like Mehek...how did he turn so sweet after all he is khaddos Kumar...

He took her for their first date...they are heading towards some isolated place away from city near jungle...kahin jungle mein mangal karna toh nehin chahta hahaha...or will he leave her in the middle of the jungle...i m really sounding crazy sometimes...don't mind my rantings...

Keep writing

Vinu
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Kuch zayad hi makhhann nai laga raha hai shaurya ??
Mehak ko ?? Lol !!!
Great part ..the end was funny ...mehak itna zor sae " mud mud " kar rahi thi ki even SK cud hear it ..lol...

Good part girl !!!
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Welcome to the forum dear🤗
Nice update😊

Continue soon

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