My own celebrity! Updated. 9/01 pg4 - Page 2

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Posted: 8 years ago
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👏Pls continue dear! eagerly awaiting next update.
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Posted: 8 years ago
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So he is taking her to jungle...For first date...
Chahta Kya hai Aakhir.,...Despo kahin Kaa...😆

Wonderful update Shweta ...PLZZ update soon
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Posted: 8 years ago
#13
Wow Shwetz awesome .. so Dashing Despo brought her to a jungle ..
yeh Banda harkat hi Aisi karta hai ki sammne wala chah kar Bhi rely na kar pai
Very interesting story.. Hon
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Hey guys, thanks for so encouraging responses. I really appreciate it. Since Sunday is super busy, but I found some time for the update. So, here it is.



He stopped the car, stepped outside and headed towards mehak. All the while mehak was watching him and was thinking about his dating plan. He came to her, opened the door and gave her his hand to take her out. 'aao' he smiled. She hesitantly replied 'na nahi main yaha theek hu. Mujhe nahi aana bahar. Or waise bhi kya hai yaha? Mujhe to kuch bhi nahi dikh raha.'
He gripped her wrist and forcefully took her out.' kya, kya problem kya hai tumhari? Kabhi to koi baat maan liya karo.' after taunting her, he took out a piece of cloth from his pocket and tried to blindfold her. Mehak while protecting herself 'ye sab kya hai? Kya karna chahte ho aap mere saath? And dare you come close to me, main, main chillaungi.'
Shaurya responsed after folding his arms 'ek kaam karo, pehle chilla lo. I mean aakhir main bhi to dekhu ki kitne log ikatthe kar paati ho. Come on, chillao. Ab kya hua?' after few seconds 'ab agar drama zyada ho gaya ho to main apna program shuru karu?' He holded her hand and pulled her closer 'main tumhe kuch nahi hone dunga, I promise.' and then, he blindfolded her, 'or jab tak main na kahoon ise kholna mat.' He guarded her to the way by holding her shoulders. There was a beautiful place in the middle of that jungle surrounded by a beautiful lake, which was designed and decorated by him, only for this date which was very special for him. He was taking mehak there only. He instructed mehak 'aaram se, aage ek seedhi hai'. His hands was on her shoulders and mehak was holding his hands. After taking her to that place, he made her stand there for few seconds, and he left the place.
She was standing there for almost 2-3 minutes and was absolutely clueless about the place. There was a still silent, after hearing no voice, she started getting scared. 'shaurya? Sh.. Shaurya? Aap yaha hai na?' Hearing no response from his side scared the hell out of her. 'shaurya?? Main.. Main ye patti khol rahi hu... Shaurya??' And she took off the fold from her eyes only to find herself in the dark, scary night and nothing was actually visible there due to so much of darkness. She was about to cry, in fact her eyes got little wet. And then suddenly the lights turned on, she saw the beautiful decoration of that place right in front of her eyes. There was different kinds of flowers everywhere. The walls, floors, pillars, ceilings were decorated with beautiful flowers and the lightening was enhancing there look. The view she was seeing was absolutely stunning. Then, after few seconds, so many rose petals started raining on her, which brought a lovely smile on her face. She was enjoying it and was twirling in that rain of rose petals. And when she turned, she found the man behind her this smile, shaurya khanna. He was looking at her only with his folded arms. The happiness and smile on her face gave the satisfactory look on his face. 'Wowww, this is so beautiful. I mean koi soch bhi nahi sakta ki is jungle mein itni khoobsurat jagah bhi ho sakti hai.' She immediately turned back again and started to explore the place. After moving a few steps ahead, she found so many colorful balloons right above her feet. And she started playing with them. Seeing her so happy and joyful, shaurya felt satisfied and relaxed. Wherever she was going, he was behind her only. He couldn't took his eyes off of her. He was happy, very happy.

'Mehak, I love you!' he said suddenly as if the words got out his mouth without his concern or control. It was straight from his heart. Mehak who was playing with balloons suddenly stopped after hearing his words. She looked at him surprisingly and blushed while looking away from him.

He continued 'Mehak! Sabse pehle to sorry, har us baat ke liye ya shikayat ke liye jisse tumhara dil dukha ho. Main janta hu, meri purani ki gayi galtiyan or stupidity ki wajah se tum aaj bhi mujhpe vishwas nahi kar paaye ho. Par is waqt main tumhe apni achayion ka yakeen to nahi dila sakta, haan lekin ek cheez tumhe bata sakta hun. Mere dil mein tumhare liye jo feelings hai uski wajah se main majboor ho gaya hu, kab tumhe pasand kiya, kab tumhe chahne laga or kab mujhe meri zindagi tumhare bina adhuri lagne lagi mujhe nahi pata. Bas itna pata hai ki main tumhe khush rakhna chahta hu, tumhare saath rehna chahta hu. Tum bahut khaas ho mere liye, miss sharma. I see my family in you. I love you so much. '
All the while, mehak was listening to him silently and was looking at him. She was speechless and didn't knew what to say. After a while, she looked back at him and said 'wo.. Mujhe bhook lagi hai.' Shaurya smiled and took her towards the dining table. He made her sit and asked 'so, miss sharma, batayiye kya khana pasand karengi aap. Because aap meri Yaani shaurya khanna ki date hai, aap jo bolengi wo sab milega.' Mehak laughed, after thinking she said 'paav bhaaji'. 'Ok my highness' shaurya replied.
'Sandeep' he called the servant.
'Yes sir'
'Madam ke liye ek paav bhaaji'
'Sorry sir, paav bhaaji to nahi mil paayegi. I mean ye hamare menu mein nahi tha.'
'What the hell ? Tumhe pata hai tum kise mana kar rahe ho? Arrange it now anyhow. '
Hearing their conversation, she wanted to laugh at shaurya as he was quite confident about his' tum meri date ho, jo chahiye milega' thing, but somehow she controlled.
'Koi baat nahi bhaiyya, jo hai vohi le aao' she interrupted them.
'Nahi, tum paav bhaaji hi khaaogi.' 'and you, just get lost aur apni shakal mat dikhana.' he shouted at his servant angrily.
He got up from his chair and went straight to the area where all the food were cooking. Behind him, mehak also followed him.

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Posted: 8 years ago
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Wow ek hi update Mae majnu khanna and khadoos Kumar ko deknae ko mila ...
Update bahut acha tha shwetz !!!
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Posted: 8 years ago
#16
Nice update. Want to have a similar date in the show too
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Nice update seriously wanted similar date in the show also BTW shaurya's dialogue about kab tumhe pasand kiya, kab tumhe chahne laga or kab mujhe meri zindagi tumhare bina adhuri lagne lagi mujhe nahi pata. Is somewhat similar to zindagi gulzar hai show l loved that show specially self-respect of kashav I hope mehek doesn't leave her job after marriage and shaurya to support her. Looking forward to next update
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Posted: 8 years ago
#18

Originally posted by: nmn6

Nice update. Want to have a similar date in the show too



It would be great. I think it will look good on-screen (of course with their improvised version, I mean I have written it quite roughly). Thanks btw. 😊
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Kya baat hai is admi ne meri saari shak ko galat sabit kar di.. I was thinking something else & he made me surprise with his over sweetness behaviour...
I hope he is really loves her... & feeling bad for his actions... But Mehek didn't reply her...

Continue soon

Vinu



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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: richasharma0991

Nice update seriously wanted similar date in the show also BTW shaurya's dialogue about kab tumhe pasand kiya, kab tumhe chahne laga or kab mujhe meri zindagi tumhare bina adhuri lagne lagi mujhe nahi pata. Is somewhat similar to zindagi gulzar hai show l loved that show specially self-respect of kashav I hope mehek doesn't leave her job after marriage and shaurya to support her. Looking forward to next update


Thanks a lot. Hey, btw I have also watched ZGH but in instalments and it was awesome. I have heard somewhat kind of dialogue in an old hindi movie (akshay Kumar in it) and loved it, so used here (as I am not good in writing dialogues) 😕. And thanks for such kind words. 😊

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