My own celebrity! Updated. 9/01 pg4 - Page 3

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Posted: 8 years ago
#21

Originally posted by: -Thabassum-

Wow ek hi update Mae majnu khanna and khadoos Kumar ko deknae ko mila ...

Update bahut acha tha shwetz !!!


Hey thanks, Iam glad you are liking it. I personally cannot choose between khadoos and majnu khanna, so tried to maintain the both. 😉
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Posted: 8 years ago
#22

Originally posted by: Shamrouz

Lovely update Shweta...


Thank you so much Shamrouz. 😊
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Posted: 8 years ago
#23

Originally posted by: vimikrao

Kya baat hai is admi ne meri saari shak ko galat sabit kar di.. I was thinking something else & he made me surprise with his over sweetness behaviour...

I hope he is really loves her... & feeling bad for his actions... But Mehek didn't reply her...

Continue soon

Vinu




Thanks for such lovely words. I think Shaurya loves to prove everyone wrong that what make this character more interesting. 😃. I have both negative and positive story line in my mind, but will try to end the story on a good note as I love happy ending. 😉
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Hi shwetz...reading all parts of this ff and I m in love for this story u r terrific...kuch acha or hatt k hai is me...khadoos Kumar ka to jwab nhi...but in last part when shaurya confessed his love like"kab tumhe pasand kia KB tumhe chahne lga" it sounded same like "Zindagi gulzar hai" I love that show zaroon and kashaf chemistry are best in that and kyuki mje Usk mostly dialogue yaad hai so I told u...means I like this ff too but it reminds me mostly similar😛
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Hey friends,
Here comes the next part:


As soon as he entered the cooking area, he looked for the ingredients to cook paav bhaaji. He was in a full Masterchef mode and nobody dares to doubt his cooking skills as he has done masters in cooking any type of dishes. Making paav bhaaji for her beloved mehak was a left hand task for him and he was quite happy to make the dish for her with his own hands.
Meanwhile, mehak was continuously looking at him and was behind him asking several questions 'kya kar rahe ho?, tum bana paaoge na?, zarurat nahi hai main or kuch khaa lungi?, main kuch help karun? kahin tum khud to paav bhaaji khana nahi chahte?'
'Shhhshhh... Kitna bol leti ho... Saans lelo thodi... Or jaao wahan jaake baitho. Waise bhi tum mujhe disturb kar rahi ho.' He pushed her softly towards the table with his angry young man look on his face. She left from there.

While waiting for few minutes, she saw shaurya coming towards her with a plate in his hand. 'So mam, here is your paav bhaaji, made with love by your favourite and of course personal chef Shaurya khanna. Here you go.' He placed the plate in front of her. With his such lovely efforts and gesture, a loving smile came on her face. She looked the food he has made especially for her and then looked at him. She was feeling happy and loved which was clearly visible on her face.
'Kya hua ab bhook nahi lag rahi? Chalooo.. Jaldi khaoo.' shaurya said in a loving manner. She took a bite in her hand and moved it towards shaurya, near his mouth. Shaurya felt happy and moved her hands towards her mouth with his hands and made her eat. 'So, kaisa laga?' Shaurya questioned. 'This is the best paav bhaaji I have ever had. Thank you!.'
Shaurya was not expecting such a heart warming compliment from her. This made his day and took him on the seventh heaven. 'Thanks to you. You know na its very hard to impress you.' He joked. 'I am glad you liked it. Toh? Or kya laaun aapke liye? Champagne, wine or something else?' Mehak gave him a surprising look and said 'Main alcohol nahi peeti.' 'Really? Main bhi nahi peeta. Chalo, kuch to milta hai hum dono mein.' Shaurya smiled. 'To phir kya mangwau?' He questioned. Mehak after thinking for a second 'hmmm... Coca cola?' Shaurya was continuously staring to her and was smiling at her 'sandeep, 1 coca cola.' Mehak interrupted '1 kyu? Aap nahi loge?'
Making a weird face, he replied 'No ways, main caffeinated drinks ko haath bhi nahi lagata. Tumhe pata bhi hai kya kya use hota hai ise banane ke liye. Kitna unhealthy hota hai. Meri to maano tum bhi chhod do ye sab, better hai.' Mehak felt as if she committed a crime by asking for coca cola in front of him. She felt little embarrassed. 'toh phir bhala koi kya pee sakta hai?' she asked irritatedly. 'Dhoodh peeyo' he replied with a broad smile on his face. 'what?' 'Haan, meri tarah dhoodh peeya karo. Healthy or fit rahogi. Ok ok.. Come on, let's have milk, main tumhari health ke saath koi risk nahi le sakta. Sandeep, 2 glass of milk, fast!' Mehak was laughing on his demand of milk, that too on his date. Within a few seconds, sandeep brought 2 glasses of milk and placed on the table. Seeing the glass of milk, she started laughing uncontrollably. Shaurya gave her an angry look 'peeyo'. She was still busy laughing. He made her hold her glass, took his glass and said cheers. Mehak was staring at her glass of milk. Shaurya looked at her 'hold on, tumhe isme milane ke liye bournvita ya horlics to nahi chahiye na? I mean chahiye to uska intezaam bhi kara sakta hun main.' She started laughing very hard and said 'nahi nahi, main manage kar lungi.' They both drank their milk and looked each other, while shaurya was smiling, it was still hard for mehak to control her laugh.
All of a sudden, soft, romantic, light hearted music started playing. Shaurya got up from his chair and kneeled down right in front of mehak 'can I have a pleasure to dance with you?' She smiled and said yes. They both started dancing. Shaurya can't get his eyes off of her face, she was blushing and smiling. She was happy. Something was changing in her. She was experiencing the feeling of being in love for the first time.
'Mehak, yeh meri pehli date nahi hai.' The smile on her face started to fade after hearing this. 'Maine aaj tak bahut ladkiyon ko date kiya hai. Par tum sabse alag ho. Jaise tumhare liye mujhe feel hota hai, aaj tak kissi ke liye bhi nahi hua. This is the most perfect date I have ever had. Thanks to you.' After hearing such kind words from his mouth, she relaxed and smiled again.
After spending some quality time together, shaurya dropped mehak home. He opened the door for her and she came out of the car. Shaurya smilingly 'I had the best time of my life. Goodbye, until we meet again.' 'Bye' said mehak and turned around to go to her home. Shaurya also headed towards his car.
'Shaurya' mehak called him. He turned around and saw her coming closer to him. After staring him for few seconds she confessed 'I love you too, shaurya.' and hugged him tightly. 'tum bahut ache ho and I don't want to lose you. I love you so much.'
At last, he won her heart and the feeling he was experiencing was beyond words. They both found solace in each others arms. They were experiencing the most powerful and best feeling in the world, Love. Yes. They were in love. They were madly, deeply in love!

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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: Shwetz1

Hey guys, thanks for so encouraging responses. I really appreciate it. Since Sunday is super busy, but I found some time for the update. So, here it is.



He stopped the car, stepped outside and headed towards mehak. All the while mehak was watching him and was thinking about his dating plan. He came to her, opened the door and gave her his hand to take her out. 'aao' he smiled. She hesitantly replied 'na nahi main yaha theek hu. Mujhe nahi aana bahar. Or waise bhi kya hai yaha? Mujhe to kuch bhi nahi dikh raha.'
He gripped her wrist and forcefully took her out.' kya, kya problem kya hai tumhari? Kabhi to koi baat maan liya karo.' after taunting her, he took out a piece of cloth from his pocket and tried to blindfold her. Mehak while protecting herself 'ye sab kya hai? Kya karna chahte ho aap mere saath? And dare you come close to me, main, main chillaungi.'
Shaurya responsed after folding his arms 'ek kaam karo, pehle chilla lo. I mean aakhir main bhi to dekhu ki kitne log ikatthe kar paati ho. Come on, chillao. Ab kya hua?' after few seconds 'ab agar drama zyada ho gaya ho to main apna program shuru karu?' He holded her hand and pulled her closer 'main tumhe kuch nahi hone dunga, I promise.' and then, he blindfolded her, 'or jab tak main na kahoon ise kholna mat.' He guarded her to the way by holding her shoulders. There was a beautiful place in the middle of that jungle surrounded by a beautiful lake, which was designed and decorated by him, only for this date which was very special for him. He was taking mehak there only. He instructed mehak 'aaram se, aage ek seedhi hai'. His hands was on her shoulders and mehak was holding his hands. After taking her to that place, he made her stand there for few seconds, and he left the place.
She was standing there for almost 2-3 minutes and was absolutely clueless about the place. There was a still silent, after hearing no voice, she started getting scared. 'shaurya? Sh.. Shaurya? Aap yaha hai na?' Hearing no response from his side scared the hell out of her. 'shaurya?? Main.. Main ye patti khol rahi hu... Shaurya??' And she took off the fold from her eyes only to find herself in the dark, scary night and nothing was actually visible there due to so much of darkness. She was about to cry, in fact her eyes got little wet. And then suddenly the lights turned on, she saw the beautiful decoration of that place right in front of her eyes. There was different kinds of flowers everywhere. The walls, floors, pillars, ceilings were decorated with beautiful flowers and the lightening was enhancing there look. The view she was seeing was absolutely stunning. Then, after few seconds, so many rose petals started raining on her, which brought a lovely smile on her face. She was enjoying it and was twirling in that rain of rose petals. And when she turned, she found the man behind her this smile, shaurya khanna. He was looking at her only with his folded arms. The happiness and smile on her face gave the satisfactory look on his face. 'Wowww, this is so beautiful. I mean koi soch bhi nahi sakta ki is jungle mein itni khoobsurat jagah bhi ho sakti hai.' She immediately turned back again and started to explore the place. After moving a few steps ahead, she found so many colorful balloons right above her feet. And she started playing with them. Seeing her so happy and joyful, shaurya felt satisfied and relaxed. Wherever she was going, he was behind her only. He couldn't took his eyes off of her. He was happy, very happy.

'Mehak, I love you!' he said suddenly as if the words got out his mouth without his concern or control. It was straight from his heart. Mehak who was playing with balloons suddenly stopped after hearing his words. She looked at him surprisingly and blushed while looking away from him.

He continued 'Mehak! Sabse pehle to sorry, har us baat ke liye ya shikayat ke liye jisse tumhara dil dukha ho. Main janta hu, meri purani ki gayi galtiyan or stupidity ki wajah se tum aaj bhi mujhpe vishwas nahi kar paaye ho. Par is waqt main tumhe apni achayion ka yakeen to nahi dila sakta, haan lekin ek cheez tumhe bata sakta hun. Mere dil mein tumhare liye jo feelings hai uski wajah se main majboor ho gaya hu, kab tumhe pasand kiya, kab tumhe chahne laga or kab mujhe meri zindagi tumhare bina adhuri lagne lagi mujhe nahi pata. Bas itna pata hai ki main tumhe khush rakhna chahta hu, tumhare saath rehna chahta hu. Tum bahut khaas ho mere liye, miss sharma. I see my family in you. I love you so much. '
All the while, mehak was listening to him silently and was looking at him. She was speechless and didn't knew what to say. After a while, she looked back at him and said 'wo.. Mujhe bhook lagi hai.' Shaurya smiled and took her towards the dining table. He made her sit and asked 'so, miss sharma, batayiye kya khana pasand karengi aap. Because aap meri Yaani shaurya khanna ki date hai, aap jo bolengi wo sab milega.' Mehak laughed, after thinking she said 'paav bhaaji'. 'Ok my highness' shaurya replied.
'Sandeep' he called the servant.
'Yes sir'
'Madam ke liye ek paav bhaaji'
'Sorry sir, paav bhaaji to nahi mil paayegi. I mean ye hamare menu mein nahi tha.'
'What the hell ? Tumhe pata hai tum kise mana kar rahe ho? Arrange it now anyhow. '
Hearing their conversation, she wanted to laugh at shaurya as he was quite confident about his' tum meri date ho, jo chahiye milega' thing, but somehow she controlled.
'Koi baat nahi bhaiyya, jo hai vohi le aao' she interrupted them.
'Nahi, tum paav bhaaji hi khaaogi.' 'and you, just get lost aur apni shakal mat dikhana.' he shouted at his servant angrily.
He got up from his chair and went straight to the area where all the food were cooking. Behind him, mehak also followed him.

Thank you dear for such a lovey update. Cv should read this and realize what they have missed. Loved Shourya's lines.
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Posted: 8 years ago
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It's a different kind of date where couples drinking milk as their bevarages...who will have milk on date...coffee or tea ok can be...ok he doesn't like cold baverages...cola or Pepsi...understandable but milk...he is fitness freak & healthy conscious...Not Mehek I was also laughing like her...Finally Mehek confessed she loves him...I hope he won't break her...this is his true love for her...

Continue soon

Vinu
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Posted: 8 years ago
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It was lovely yaar found that milk scene very funny .
Plz update soon I want light romantic moments in the show also
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Hahahahaha...I loved this chapter...Khanna Sahab aap date par milk peeyogy..
Atleast fresh fruit juice banwalety...
PLZZ continue soon sweta...
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Did they just had milk in their date ???? ..omg !!!
Shaurya khanna aur milk ?? 🤣
Least expected ...!!!
Great update dear...
And ya thanks for keeping his majnu and khadoos avatar together 😉
So they are sincerely in love ??? 🤔...??
Let's see !!!

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