Mehrya SS : One Last Chance Part 16 Updated 30/5

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melissaR

@melissaR

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Posted: 8 years ago

#611

Originally posted by: shristi0706

@bold really?? you think so...oh god i giess i ll have to few lessons from someone who is a pro at throwing insults...let me guess!!!

Our very own "The Shaurya Khanna"😆
Letting you know Mel tht I have not written the next chapter yet so there will be a delay in the next update..sorry dear!

Aww Shristi in bold... I was just repeating what he said. I find that line was sooo funny 🤣 please don't learn any insults. Go see Handsome for any other reason except that. Ok...I'll wait patiently... This is the only time I am ever patient! Waiting for updates. I'm so impatient! 😆 Shristi do take care. The squad will be lurking with their bombs and I saw a particular one got a torpedo machine 😲 cough cough* 😆

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Shristi

@shristi0706

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Posted: 8 years ago

#612

Originally posted by: stellaV
Awesome update Shristi 👏
Shaurya is indeed a kid 😆 Irritating and cute at the same time, one who is so curious to get answers without searching for them inside his own self 😊 Mehak knows how to handle him, she is making it a real difficult task for him. Loved the lift scene,and the element of innocence it had.
Waiting for the next part, and thanks a lot for the PM dear 😊

Hey Stella thank u so much dear... Glad u liked the update. He isn't evil as the world claims him to be or he assumes himself to be. He is good at heart something which he hasn't realized yet

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Shristi

@shristi0706

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Posted: 8 years ago

#613

Originally posted by: Niha1999
nice update shristi...

Thanks alot niharika

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Shristi

@shristi0706

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Posted: 8 years ago

#614

Originally posted by: melissaR

Aww Shristi in bold... I was just repeating what he said. I find that line was sooo funny 🤣 please don't learn any insults. Go see Handsome for any other reason except that. Ok...I'll wait patiently... This is the only time I am ever patient! Waiting for updates. I'm so impatient! 😆 Shristi do take care. The squad will be lurking with their bombs and I saw a particular one got a torpedo machine 😲 cough cough* 😆

Oh my bad I misinterpreted ur comment... Sorry!!!!!!!

Yes I know what the bombers did in tibs's ff... My poor tibs!!! 😭

I know they r getting dangerous now using nuclear bombs n missiles... Ab yeh log gun n goliyon se baat bhi Nahi karte... Thanks buddy for being concerned for me... Ll take care..

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thabassum

@Thabassum19

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Posted: 8 years ago

#615

Speak of the devil and devil arrives 😈

Hum donno ko yaad kar rahe they kya tum donno 😆 ?

Ya we just moved a step ahead and attacking the threads with missile's too...

I'm planning to bring in the bazooka if u r not gonna be ready with the update this weekend shri ...mind it 🤣

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Shamz15

@Shamz15

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Posted: 8 years ago

#616

Shri ru testing my patience???

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Shristi

@shristi0706

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Posted: 8 years ago

#617

Sham I m out of town for few days n ll b coming back next week. Also, I hvnt written the next chapter... Still hv to work on it. Sorry yaar.. Hoping to update it this weekend.

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thabassum

@Thabassum19

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Posted: 8 years ago

#618

Originally posted by: shristi0706
Sham I m out of town for few days n ll b coming back next week. Also, I hvnt written the next chapter... Still hv to work on it. Sorry yaar.. Hoping to update it this weekend.

Their tho ...😡😆