Mehrya SS : One Last Chance Part 16 Updated 30/5 - Page 60

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Posted: 8 years ago
This was awesome. SK, the chatter box and MS, the sherni. The lift sequence is adorable. But he did not get the answer of the all important question. Hope you continue with this tone for a couple of chapters. BTW, I am just curious how long will this FB run and whether you are going to continue the story in present as well after the broken marriage, which I know he will succeed by hook or crook. Wonderful update. Eagerly waiting for your next one.
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Posted: 8 years ago
Nice chapter Shristi! I'm liking the fact that even in the next chapter they'll still be stuck together. I hope Handsome offers to drop her home and she doesn't hurt his feelings by refusing.

Coming to the chapter itself. The way Mahek scolded him 😆 She gave it to him good. I love how he describe how vile his family is 🤣 you have to be innovative with your insults 🤣 🤣 🤣 I find that really funny. But you make a very good point my dear. Just some day I was thinking how lucky Mahek is to have some many people around her who loves her whereas Shaurya only have 3. The one who loves him the most he treated her terribly. Made me think if its the environment he grew up in made him so despite the love Maa and Nanz gave him?


I'm looking forward to the upcoming chapters with more Mehrya scenes. They have so much to work out. Shaurya really played with her. The day he confesses his love I can see her laughing at him. Thank goodness Handsome wasn't this bad in the show.

Edited by melissaR - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: Shamrouz

Res

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Loved the chapter shri...there was no romance but still loved their nokjhoks and MS scolding him like a sherni and making him sit in a corner 😆😆

Ufff kuch zyada bakbak nahi karta hai 😛😛
Koi bhi ladki paak jaygi 😆

End part was emotional ...loved the way he talk about his family and compared with her family 😊

hope soon he realizes his feelings 😳😳


Update the next part soon shri ...🤗


Thank you Sham so much...see i gave u a long update..hai na😳
Yes, even in the show I like it when Mehak goes all out in the sherni mood screaming n shouting at him...Hope to see few more nok-jhoks in the upcoming episodes too!!!
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Posted: 8 years ago
Frustrating Mehek was scolding Shaurya like he is small child doing some mischiefs. 😆 😆 Shaurya was hell irritated by her cold behaviour so he purposely involving her in his conversation 😉 He is comparing his family with her family. 😲 lift ka scene was nice there is no romance or any light moments of MehRya fir bhi acha tha. 😛

How many days we should wait for next update 😉 & thanks for PM 👏

Vinu 😊
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: crtkelly

I have been waiting so long for this Shristi, but realize how busy we all get from time to time, so no worries.

It was so well worth the wsit: just perfect! The humor we all anticipated from the teaser suddenly and transformed into such a poignant moment with Shaurya's revelation. Such a complex man.

I cannot express how much I loved Mehek in this chapter.

Thanks for the PM. Looking forward to the next update.


So glad n happy that u liked the chapter.very happy Kelly..Muahhh lots of love to u😳

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Posted: 8 years ago

Thank u so much Richa😳
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: -Thabassum-

Okay ...

Read your update 😉
It was as usual


I felt like SHAURYA has changes a bit ...
He is not yelling anymore and still indulged in mehaks thought ...
Thier lift momenta we're so adorable...
Shaurya nervous and mehak shushing him up 😆
I can imagine the whole scenario ...😳
And shaurya being nice and opening up to mehak was just
...
I'm sure even mehak might not feel so much hatred for him from now on ?!?!?

Very well written...shri 😎


Thank u my lovely n cute ZKM Bomber...😳
Thabs i really like ur dp...yaar i need to change mine too..Could you please help me with it????
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: chandrima02

This was awesome. SK, the chatter box and MS, the sherni. The lift sequence is adorable. But he did not get the answer of the all important question. Hope you continue with this tone for a couple of chapters. BTW, I am just curious how long will this FB run and whether you are going to continue the story in present as well after the broken marriage, which I know he will succeed by hook or crook. Wonderful update. Eagerly waiting for your next one.


Thank u so much Chandrima!!!!
Another chapter hopefully n then it will be the present sequence for sure...
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Posted: 8 years ago

Thank u so much Mystic😳😳😳
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: melissaR

Nice chapter Shristi! I'm liking the fact that even in the next chapter they'll still be stuck together. I hope Handsome offers to drop her home and she doesn't hurt his feelings by refusing.

Coming to the chapter itself. The way Mahek scolded him 😆 She gave it to him good. I love how he describe how vile his family is 🤣 you have to be innovative with your insults 🤣 🤣 🤣 I find that really funny. But you make a very good point my dear. Just some day I was thinking how lucky Mahek is to have some many people around her who loves her whereas Shaurya only have 3. The one who loves him the most he treated her terribly. Made me think if its the environment he grew up in made him so despite the love Maa and Nanz gave him?


I'm looking forward to the upcoming chapters with more Mehrya scenes. They have so much to work out. Shaurya really played with her. The day he confesses his love I can see her laughing at him. Thank goodness Handsome wasn't this bad in the show.

@bold really?? you think so...oh god i giess i ll have to few lessons from someone who is a pro at throwing insults...let me guess!!!


Our very own "The Shaurya Khanna"😆
Letting you know Mel tht I have not written the next chapter yet so there will be a delay in the next update..sorry dear!

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