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Shristi

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Posted: 8 years ago

#541

Originally posted by: -Thabassum-

What an curious soul 😆

Thabs😆

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Shamz15

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Posted: 8 years ago

#542

Originally posted by: shristi0706

Thabs😆

Tabu tum aisy bol rahi hoo...Ulta iam handling all alone today...Aaj lagta Hai koi wasoli nahi hogi 💔

Sanjh ki update raat ko aaygi...

And iam getting bored at sitting idle and alone at home 😭😭😭

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desiangel24

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Posted: 8 years ago

#543

Oooh, I need a moment!

Goodness, your story is absolutely wonderful!! I want to apology, I'm not very active on the forum, so very rarely do I get to read and comment on everyone's stories.

This is just amazing. I love the way you created Mehak's character in your story and still kept Shaurya, the same Shaurya that we love and hate! I love their scenes together. You've done such a great job showing Mehak as a strong independent women! I can't help it to feel warm inside when he is just craving for her attention. I would love to see more of those scenes, you have such a creative mind! I can't wait to see how the story develops further.

Cheers!

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Shristi

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Posted: 8 years ago

#544

Originally posted by: desiangel24
Oooh, I need a moment!
Goodness, your story is absolutely wonderful!! I want to apology, I'm not very active on the forum, so very rarely do I get to read and comment on everyone's stories.
This is just amazing. I love the way you created Mehak's character in your story and still kept Shaurya, the same Shaurya that we love and hate! I love their scenes together. You've done such a great job showing Mehak as a strong independent women! I can't help it to feel warm inside when he is just craving for her attention. I would love to see more of those scenes, you have such a creative mind! I can't wait to see how the story develops further.
Cheers!

Hey desiangel thst such a unique id name...I m elated that u liked the story😳😳😳 Thank you for those wonderful comments dear!!! There is no doubt tht all of us love as well as hate Shuarya but at the end of the day, we cant help ourselves from thinking abt him...Thts the beauty and charisma of the character played by KV. And yes, here Mehak knows exactly how to ignore him.

There will be more Mehrya scenes for sure in the upcoming updates😳

Hoping to see u active in this forum!!!

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Preeti

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Posted: 8 years ago

#545

OMG!!!
How have I never come across this before?! I absolutely love your story. Literally caught up with it all and I'm just hungry for more! Love the character sketch and ofcourse our little love birds. Now, Shaurya needs to buckle up before his loses his girl. Love the fact she isn't giving him any attention and it's affecting him. Dude u need to work much harder to get her back! So far, so good! Waiting for more! Continue soon x

Edited by Preeti.xo - 8 years ago

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Shristi

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Posted: 8 years ago

#546

Originally posted by: Preeti.xo
OMG!!!
How have I never come across this before?! I absolutely love your story. Literally caught up with it all and I'm just hungry for more! Love the character sketch and ofcourse our little love birds. Now, Shaurya needs to buckle up before his loses his girl. Love the fact she isn't giving him any attention and it's affecting him. Dude u need to work much harder to get her back! So far, so good! Waiting for more! Continue soon x

Hey preeti thank u so much dear. I m glad tht u liked the story😃

Absolutely Shaurya needs to work a little harder to win Mehak but before tht he needs to understand what he feels for her is love n hope tht he realizes it soon before it's too late!!!!

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thabassum

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Posted: 8 years ago

#547

Hey shri.. I guess i read ur update...long back lekin cumnt karna bhul gayi...sorry for that.😳

Yaar ur absolutely amazing...⭐️

First shaurya was bothered tat mehak dint react well for his compliment to her mattar ki kheer ...

And know ashima...she seems like an opputunist..😳

U explained well how shaurya is provoked to know

What was mehaks reaction , wen he had ashima in his arms.😆...

Seems like rajeevs answer to his question wud have brought sum sense to the khadoos Kumar...

Sorry for not cheerful cumnt this time...not feeling so well...

Next time pakka. ..

Try to continue soon...

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Shristi

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Posted: 8 years ago

#548

Originally posted by: -Thabassum-
Hey shri.. I guess i read ur update...long back lekin cumnt karna bhul gayi...sorry for that.😳
Yaar ur absolutely amazing...⭐️
First shaurya was bothered tat mehak dint react well for his compliment to her mattar ki kheer ...
And know ashima...she seems like an opputunist..😳
U explained well how shaurya is provoked to know
What was mehaks reaction , wen he had ashima in his arms.😆...
Seems like rajeevs answer to his question wud have brought sum sense to the khadoos Kumar...
Sorry for not cheerful cumnt this time...not feeling so well...
Next time pakka. ..

Try to continue soon...

Hey thabs my sweetheart you don't have to apologize... Happy tht u liked the chapter n I loved ur comments too. I hope u r fit n fine coz tomorrow is Monday n a very important episode... It's our Mehrya locked in a cold storage room😳... so aapko thik hona hi padega!!!!!

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sosweetsumi

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Posted: 8 years ago

#549

haha loved shaurYA reaction

haha ms singh surely desperate

hehe

mehak got jealous but still no reaction.

please do continue

bye sumi

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Shristi

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Posted: 8 years ago

#550

Originally posted by: sosweetsumi
haha loved shaurYA reaction
haha ms singh surely desperate
hehe
mehak got jealous but still no reaction.
please do continue
bye sumi

Thanks alot Sumi😳😳😳

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