Mehrya SS : One Last Chance Part 16 Updated 30/5

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melissaR

@melissaR

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Posted: 8 years ago

#521

Originally posted by: shristi0706

Hi Shristi! Your most welcome love. Half of my office building was on fire on Feb 22. So I haven't been as active as usual. On weekends I am spending sooo much time with my family like my aunts, uncles and cousin. I don't get to be on here either. Today we starting moving so hopefully next week I'll be back to normal yay! Operating off my phone for the mean time.

Oh no no please don't rush. I love that you are taking your time in building up Handsome's story. And thanks for the explaination in your other comment. So when we meet back up to present in update 1 or the beginning I can't remember 😆 we'll be seeing what happens at the mandap. Cool. I was just curious about the timeline that's all Shristi. I'm sorry for making you justify the pace of your updates. I'm overly curious.

Shristi since you are taking your time. Will we get the honours of seeing what's in Handsome's heart unlike in the show? That will be lovely...

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stellaV

@stellaV

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Posted: 8 years ago

#522

Shristi, that was just amazing 👏👏 Reading the FFs here remind me of so many beautiful ways which the story could have taken but we are not getting to see in the show. But thanks to all the creative ladies in the forum, not missing much Shaurya's restlessness and his unrealized feelings towards mehak are something that is really intriguing. Aashima is the epitome of girls which Shaurya hates and i trust him on this that he will handle her pretty well 😆 Rajiv bhi bhai ko aise dekh k poora enjoy kar raha h. Waiting eagerly for the next part 😊 Update soon dear..

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candy02

@candy02

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Posted: 8 years ago

#523

@Srishti, such a wonderful update. Though my humble complain remains the same as has been for the previous chapter, but I fully understand your dilemma and your logic. I do believe that this THE most logical way to progress with the story, without assassinating the characters. Even after stooping down so low, your hero is still humane and is having some amount of empathy. He is not despicable, not conscienceless totally. Aashima is complete opposite of Mahek and her presence & behavior are pinpointing Mahek's inherent beauty. I loved the way you are portraying the realization track of SK. Hope the next chapter brings lots of interactions and his point of breakage. Waiting for it eagerly.

Edited by chandrima02 - 8 years ago

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Shristi

@shristi0706

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+ 6

Posted: 8 years ago

#524

Originally posted by: KashishJ
Nicely written chapter Shristi.👏
Ms Singh's damakedaar entry was mast.
it would have been so funny for entire staff to see her fall into SKs arms like heroine.
Kudos to Mehek to not to show any emotions. ignoring him is the best .
Hope Shaurya won't fall into any trap with Ms Singh , trying to make Mehek jealous.

Thank u so much Kashish. We have seen Shaurya getting jealous seeing Mehak with Ajay but I wanted to show something where he realizes tht Mehak doesn't feel the same when she sees him with other girls. tht would be a big blow to his ego.

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Shamz15

@Shamz15

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Posted: 8 years ago

#525

Shri tu update karny wali hai kya ??

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Shristi

@shristi0706

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Posted: 8 years ago

#526

Originally posted by: Shamrouz
Shri tu update karny wali hai kya ??

Nahi my Rajdhaani express...still working on the next chapter...

Since its weekend today, i had lot off ffs to read and comment too...so was just doing tht..

And Madam i gave an update this Thursday my bacchi...kya tum bhool gayi?????😆😆😆

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Shamz15

@Shamz15

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Posted: 8 years ago

#527

Originally posted by: shristi0706

Nahi my Rajdhaani express...still working on the next chapter...

Since its weekend today, i had lot off ffs to read and comment too...so was just doing tht..

And Madam i gave an update this Thursday my bacchi...kya tum bhool gayi?????😆😆😆

Nahi mujhy yaad hai... but tu bhi na woh aashima ko beech mein le aayi...

iam waiting for some mehrya scenes 😕

Teri post par halchal hui toh mere dil ke armaan jaag gaye thy 😆😆

Chal enjoy kar 😉

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thabassum

@Thabassum19

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Posted: 8 years ago

#528

Originally posted by: Shamrouz
Shri tu update karny wali hai kya ??

What an curious soul 😆

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Shristi

@shristi0706

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Posted: 8 years ago

#529

Originally posted by: crtkelly
First Kash yesterday and now you today timing these updates with my coffee break...good going Shristi😉.
Woah what an update...and what a little forward hussy Ms. SINGH 😆 is. Love that Shaurya was keeping her at arms length until she made it physically impossible.😆. Poor Shaurie, a new femme fatale throwing herself at him and all he wants to know is Mehek's reaction...love that so much. I foresee some pretty entertaining updates in the future👏
That being said, please do not apologize, nothing was lacking in the chapter and sometimes we readers need to be patient particularly if the update is needed for the continuity of the tale.

Cannot wait for the next update Shristi😊 make it soon please!
Thx as always for the pm

Kelly.

Thank u so much Kelly for liking the chapter😳😳😳