Waada raha ...A MehRya(FF) part-5 page 15 13/12/16 - Page 7

Originally posted by: rajvilover

first was lovely

but Shaurya will change ??? please do something for Shaurya change I mean not she but he fall in love and some jealous ...

and keep writing ... I will wait for other update...

is baar Zara jaldi update karna because I can't wait any more ... what will shaurya do with Mehek

Originally posted by: Waida1234

Omg...! Woww...what a beautiful and awesome chapter Nick...! This story is getting better and better after each updates...!

Your writing is just outstanding...and the Eng, translation makes it easier...! But..I do read the hindi parts also...as it make the scenes look more real , and have them playing before my eyes, and imagining them just like in the show...!

The cunning spider @ Shaurya has already started spinning, to trap the naive fly @ Mehek in his web...!

Please update soon...it's getting interesting...! Thank you sweetheart...for this blissful moment...! Love you...!⭐️

Originally posted by: -Thabassum-

That was great !

U know I was literally imaging every scene ..how ms and SK wud have portrayed !

Kho gayi thi ...nice update ...!

Originally posted by: kittyyy999

Its really awesome...you write beautifully...i can imagine all the scenes while reading 😊

Originally posted by: sosweetsumi

wow great hmm

shaury u dont know what have u done

please do continue

'bye sumi

Originally posted by: shristi0706

Beautiful Update Nicky. . . . Loved It . . Waiting For Mr Khadoos KhannaTo Fall In Love Wid Our Sweet Innocent Damsel In Distress

Originally posted by: Auditi

Ah huh!!! Not bad...😉

Shaurya you'll loose big time for sure...😛

Hey buddy, very good update... I read it in the afternoon itself but could not comment due to extreme workload...😒

Its really good... Please continue soon...🤗 👍🏼