MehRya OS * In his arms * updated part 9, page 50 !!!!

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khushboo

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Voyager

Posted: 8 years ago

#41

i loving the story so far plz do continue i waan know what happens next

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oceanus85

@oceanus85

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Posted: 8 years ago

#42

All I can say is wow. Love your OS. Please do update soon.

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christasr

@christasr

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Posted: 8 years ago

#43

you are great writer awesome os just love the way u are protrating mehak and shaurya relation into romantic to emotion

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Priya

@Ishkarafan

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Posted: 8 years ago

#44

Dear how I wish something similar happens in the show where mehak questions him about the pain he have her and how he would stand unable to utter a single word to calm her 😭 .superb dear ... 👏 .you really have the talent to make others excited and heard touched at the same time.is this the end part??? 😕 .please don't stop looking for more 😳

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hailly

@hailly

Dazzler

Posted: 8 years ago

#45

Amazing update. Loved it.
Continue soon please

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greenbutterfly

@greenbutterfly

Explorer

Posted: 8 years ago

#46

AMAZING love it please update soon. 😊😊😊😊😊

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sketie

@sketie

Dazzler

Posted: 8 years ago

#47

Originally posted by: Anika_11
Amazing one mini!! Full of hotness and passion!! Loved it😆! Felt bad for Mehak, the way she was remembering all the pains given by Shaurya

thanks anika

yes , mehek is the one to suffur now... but shortly ... he is gonna be suffering as well...😳

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sketie

@sketie

Dazzler

Posted: 8 years ago

#48

Originally posted by: crtkelly

No, no don't be sorry, I am just in awe of the update, that I want to be able give it the review it deserves...it really is that good😊

thanks dear 😳

Edited by miniapplepie - 8 years ago

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sketie

@sketie

Dazzler

Posted: 8 years ago

#49

Originally posted by: dadasladly
Amazing update. Loved it. Waiting for next.

thanks dear

glad u liked it

😃

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sketie

@sketie

Dazzler

Posted: 8 years ago

#50

Originally posted by: nicky13
Ooops it was twisted...from romantic to Suspense and all .. But awesome .. Interesting and waiting for the next part ... Thanks

thanks dear

how her sadness is going to start affecting him 😳😳😳😳

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