MehRya OS * In his arms * updated part 9, page 50 !!!!

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Dazzler

Posted: 8 years ago

#61

Originally posted by: Waida1234
Woww...Mini...! You've just gave me an electric jolt with this very hot update...a la Mills & Boon...!😳

I have always imagined you as being "une petite fille tres sage et innocente" because of your Id. "miniapplepie"...but, you surprised me..., naughty girl...! 😉

Why sweetheart...? After so much effort...finally, Shaurya reached the top of Mount Everest...and suddenly, out of nowhere an avalanche occurred, and he came crashing down, breathless, back to his starting point...and melted under the influence of Mehek's tears...! 😭

hi waida

thanks dear

me nauthy? naaa😳

this was the story of the little os, now i have extended it to the story's demands and requirements and to clear some things which were in my head and couldnt pen down due to length 😳

Edited by miniapplepie - 8 years ago

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sketie

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Dazzler

Posted: 8 years ago

#62

Originally posted by: lourel24
it was awesome. I loved the passion but suddenly mehek tears was enough to give it a break. I m curious how they had come to this point of relationship. Has he blackmailed her to marry him to save her family but later on has fallen himself and now doesn't know how to rectify that mistake. Random guesses m making at present. Anyways loved it very much.oh m blushing ;-)

thanks dear

in the upcoming updates will clear the reason which was in my head and as it was before a short os, i couldnt pen it down... now... will write it detailed

shourya current state of mind , although is overpowered by revenge, does know but wont admit that he has been fallen into a fatal attraction for her 😳

@ bold you will see your answers in the upcomng parts that im working on ...

lifes became so messy ofr mfew days, that couldnt come to forum , couldt wacth epis, 😃

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sketie

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Dazzler

Posted: 8 years ago

#63

i loving the story so far plz do continue i waan know what happens next [/QUOTE

thanks a dear

sure will continue

😃

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sketie

@sketie

Dazzler

Posted: 8 years ago

#64

Originally posted by: oceanus85
All I can say is wow. Love your OS. Please do update soon.

thank you dear

will update soon ,

making it a long update 😃

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sketie

@sketie

Dazzler

Posted: 8 years ago

#65

Originally posted by: christasr
you are great writer awesome os just love the way u are protrating mehak and shaurya relation into romantic to emotion

thanks dear

never thought this would be so liked

the transition between emotion to romance and how an impossible love will become true is the way this story is going to shape up from the next update 😃

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sketie

@sketie

Dazzler

Posted: 8 years ago

#66

Originally posted by: Ishkarafan
Dear how I wish something similar happens in the show where mehak questions him about the pain he have her and how he would stand unable to utter a single word to calm her 😭 .superb dear ... 👏 .you really have the talent to make others excited and heard touched at the same time.is this the end part??? 😕 .please don't stop looking for more 😳

even i am wiaitng for that moment , when he wil have no anwser to give her,

no dear , this is not the end, would love to write on this topic,

im makig a good long update