MehRya OS * In his arms * updated part 9, page 50 !!!! - Page 4

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Posted: 8 years ago
#31

Originally posted by: jani_faizal

You got us all going gaga and then like a slap to the face it came to a stop...for a minute I was thinking he was dreaming or something cause how did Mehek come to him like that...maybe just his overactive imagination...pls continue I would love to know what happens next...and how did they come to that point.



He dear ,

Itwasnt my intention to bothrr u guys leaving the story in the middle ... Coz yest i Said i would post a drabble by night but when i started writing ..i couldnt finish and thought of posting what i had ... Im really sorry i had hurt you

It was wild imagination and iweote this kerping in mind they were married ...thats why these type of scenes ...

Im very sorry . .i wrote thnking that when she saw his eyes ...she remembered the pain... And shaurys came back to his senses

Sorry desr if it hurt uou i had no intentions of hurting
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Posted: 8 years ago
#32

Originally posted by: crtkelly

Reserved...until I find the right words😲



Really sorry dear. ...

. Didnt wat yo hurt the expectatiobs of anyone
Edited by miniapplepie - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
#33
Amazing one mini!! Full of hotness and passion!! Loved it😆! Felt bad for Mehak, the way she was remembering all the pains given by Shaurya
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Posted: 8 years ago
#34

Originally posted by: miniapplepie



Really sorry dear. ...

. Didnt wat yo hurt the expectatiobs of anyone


No, no don't be sorry, I am just in awe of the update, that I want to be able give it the review it deserves...it really is that good😊
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Posted: 8 years ago
#35
Amazing update. Loved it. Waiting for next.
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Posted: 8 years ago
#36
Ooops it was twisted...from romantic to Suspense and all .. But awesome .. Interesting and waiting for the next part ... Thanks
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Posted: 8 years ago
#37
Wow romantic plus emotional
Loved it

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Posted: 8 years ago
#38

Originally posted by: miniapplepie



He dear ,

Itwasnt my intention to bothrr u guys leaving the story in the middle ... Coz yest i Said i would post a drabble by night but when i started writing ..i couldnt finish and thought of posting what i had ... Im really sorry i had hurt you

It was wild imagination and iweote this kerping in mind they were married ...thats why these type of scenes ...

Im very sorry . .i wrote thnking that when she saw his eyes ...she remembered the pain... And shaurys came back to his senses

Sorry desr if it hurt uou i had no intentions of hurting



I'm sorry if my commenting gave the wrong message...I loved what you've written and was saying that the romance was making me all wild imagination 😳... and then when she remembered all the pain he caused her and her family. It was like a speed breaker you..., but I'm loving your writing. No offence taken.. and I hope I haven't hurt you in anyway as well... keep up the great writing...looking forward to what happens next.
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Posted: 8 years ago
#39
Woww...Mini...! You've just gave me an electric jolt with this very hot update...a la Mills & Boon...!😳

I have always imagined you as being "une petite fille tres sage et innocente" because of your Id. "miniapplepie"...but, you surprised me..., naughty girl...! 😉

Why sweetheart...? After so much effort...finally, Shaurya reached the top of Mount Everest...and suddenly, out of nowhere an avalanche occurred, and he came crashing down, breathless, back to his starting point...and melted under the influence of Mehek's tears...! 😭
Edited by Waida1234 - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
#40
it was awesome. I loved the passion but suddenly mehek tears was enough to give it a break. I m curious how they had come to this point of relationship. Has he blackmailed her to marry him to save her family but later on has fallen himself and now doesn't know how to rectify that mistake. Random guesses m making at present. Anyways loved it very much.oh m blushing ;-)

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