MehRya FF: Discovering the Magic Chapter28 pg148 (10/12)

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Sharlene1410

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Posted: 8 years ago

#81

Kelly i was stalking the thread and found the teaser and it seems you were posting the update at the same time 😆

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Arhazy Najaan

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Posted: 8 years ago

#82

wow.

interesting concept.

liked the online chatting moment. so romantic... His message made her calm... made her forget her fear.

nice.

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Sharlene1410

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Posted: 8 years ago

#83

Originally posted by: crtkelly

I just posted it, how have your read it so fast Sharlene😆

Going back to my others this week...don't want to leave them unfinished😉

Take your time i am here to read 😆

Chapter 2 is fantastic Shauyra has falling in love with his cyber friend and Mehak also has strong feelings for him so sweet. I love their chat he is her rock during this phase in her life they are meant to be together soulmates a strong connection as strangers and enemys face to face anyhow opposite attract each other 😆 he is negative and she is positive 😆

Continue soon

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Shameela

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Posted: 8 years ago

#84

Res...till I find the right words... that's two proper comments I owe you...and pls update soon.

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hailly

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Posted: 8 years ago

#85

Awesome update Kelly. Loved it.
Do Continue soon please Eagerly waiting for the next part.

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Badbuddy

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Posted: 8 years ago

#86

Wow!!!!! Kelly, THIS IS THE BEST..⭐️⭐️

Loved everything about this chapter...

Shaurya's thought about Mehak...again started thinking ill of her...I want to know asap, what would be his reaction after knowing about her identity...

Asmit part, yah...he is a wonder man, despite of allergy, did a great job and ofcourse he would be enough to make Mehak's absence..

And Rajiv, he is the best brother, really, knows Shaurya so well...and he hide everything about Mehak's whereabouts perfectly..

Rajiv knows only Shaurya's mother has that ability to change his focus to something else, but he noticed there is a new person, who is as important to Shaurya than his work..And Shaurya too confirmed that she is imp to him...

And glad Mehak got such nice family as companion...Rachna's teasing hehe

Shaurya...wow!!! So tensed about MS...he surely is connected to her a lot, tensed about everything of her...

Mehak's message, okk, her family, everyone waited for her...and ofcourse her buddy KK too...

He too lost his sleep girl...

Loved this chapter so much...you are taking this journey so beautifully, excited for rest of the journey...TFS ...

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vimikrao

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Posted: 8 years ago

#87

I just read both part one go...

Its amazing to read MehRya online chatting...

He always wait for her to be online & get her reply... Here also he was tossing on the bed... & so stress that she is not online... Get to know that whether she safely landed or not... He is really cute when he is chatting with MS..!. I m just wondering when he will come to know that MS & Ms TRP r the same girl... what would be his reaction... OMG he might not get heart attack... Since so long he was chatting online that none other this Dabewali... Uff can't imagine that now...

Update next part soon

Send PM if can

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crtkelly

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Posted: 8 years ago

#88

Originally posted by: ArjunfanNAJAAN
just read chapter one.
its awesome.
now off to chapter 2.

Thanks, glad you enjoyed it.😊

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crtkelly

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Posted: 8 years ago

#89

Originally posted by: ArjunfanNAJAAN
wow.
interesting concept.
liked the online chatting moment. so romantic... His message made her calm... made her forget her fear.
nice.

I really wanted to create the opportunity for loads of online chatting and thought that after all was said and done Mehek was deserving of a fantastic opportunity to spread her wings a bit. Happy it has been well received.😊