MehRya FF: Discovering the Magic Chapter28 pg148 (10/12)

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crtkelly

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Posted: 8 years ago

#91

Originally posted by: hailly
Awesome update Kelly. Loved it.
Do Continue soon please Eagerly waiting for the next part.

Thanks Hailly. May take a few days to get the next update done as I have a lot goin going on this week, but I will post at the earliest I am able.

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pinky.padda

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Posted: 8 years ago

#92

superb update

too good

continue soon

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crtkelly

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Posted: 8 years ago

#93

Originally posted by: kaustavi
Wow!!!!! Kelly, THIS IS THE BEST..⭐️⭐️
Loved everything about this chapter...

Shaurya's thought about Mehak...again started thinking ill of her...I want to know asap, what would be his reaction after knowing about her identity... Me too😆

Asmit part, yah...he is a wonder man, despite of allergy, did a great job and ofcourse he would be enough to make Mehak's absence..

And Rajiv, he is the best brother, really, knows Shaurya so well...and he hide everything about Mehak's whereabouts perfectly..

Rajiv knows only Shaurya's mother has that ability to change his focus to something else, but he noticed there is a new person, who is as important to Shaurya than his work..And Shaurya too confirmed that she is imp to him... Rajiv is the best, the perfect counter to our bad boy, but he also sees the potential for good in him

And glad Mehak got such nice family as companion...Rachna's teasing hehe RaBir my fist loves...now all I have to do is to bring the best friend (Naomi) on the scene, and the real fun will begin😆...Shaurya wouldn't know what hit him LOL

Shaurya...wow!!! So tensed about MS...he surely is connected to her a lot, tensed about everything of her...In my mind ( and hopefully the serial) Shaurya is going to fall hard...while I'm waiting for this to air, I have no problem imagining and writing on it😊

Mehak's message, okk, her family, everyone waited for her...and ofcourse her buddy KK too...
He too lost his sleep girl...

Loved this chapter so much...you are taking this journey so beautifully, excited for rest of the journey...TFS ...

Thanks you so much for this review, I am really enjoying writing this story, and hope everyone enjoys it as well.

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crtkelly

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Posted: 8 years ago

#94

Originally posted by: Tere_Sang_Yaara
Excellent update kelly 😊

Thanks Fero!

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crtkelly

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Posted: 8 years ago

#95

Originally posted by: vimikrao
I just read both part one go...
Its amazing to read MehRya online chatting...

He always wait for her to be online & get her reply... Here also he was tossing on the bed... & so stress that she is not online... Get to know that whether she safely landed or not... He is really cute when he is chatting with MS..!. I m just wondering when he will come to know that MS & Ms TRP r the same girl... what would be his reaction... OMG he might not get heart attack... Since so long he was chatting online that none other this Dabewali... Uff can't imagine that now...

Update next part soon

Send PM if can

I can't imagine he will be too impressed when he finally realizes that his MS and Ms TRP is one and the same: unless by the time he does, he is so head over heels that it won't matter...Shaurya is such a wild card, who know how he will react though😆 We are so far from this, but for now I am enjoying the ride.

Thanks for the comment, I hope you enjoy the story as it progresses

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crtkelly

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Posted: 8 years ago

#96

Originally posted by: pinky.padda
superb update
too good
continue soon

Thanks so much, Pinky😊

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Waida1234

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Posted: 8 years ago

#97

UnRes...page 14...! 😊

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Anika

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Posted: 8 years ago

#98

Wow Wow!! This was actually beautiful.. loved every bit of it. 😃

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crtkelly

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Posted: 8 years ago

#99

Originally posted by: Anika_11
Wow Wow!! This was actually beautiful.. loved every bit of it. 😃

Thanks Anika, I'm enjoying writing it for sure.

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Waida1234

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Posted: 8 years ago

#100

Hi...Kel...!

Yet another exciting and awesome chapter...! And, ya...all my previous questions have been answered...and I got a big Zero...! Trying to be too smart and intelligent, whom I'm not...and end up making a fool of myself and failed the exams...! 😆

Oh gosh...! Shaurya is really a mystery box for me...! His lunatic behavior and constant temper, tantrums intrigue me...! He himself doesn't know what he wants and what to expect from life...! He was annoyed when he suspected that the fourth chair was for Mehek...and when his suspicion turned into reality, he was even more angry that Mehek didn't turn up...! He emptied all his barrel of angriness on poor Rajiv Sir...!

Shaurya Mom is the person who is the most closest to him...and she's the only one who has the power to tame her son..whenever, he revolts...! But, Rajiv Sir is the person who knows him fully, both inside and outside...the hard, dark, negative and painful side...and the soft, vulnerable, positive side...! Close friends are truly life's treasures...! Sometimes they know us better than we know ourselves...! They are there to share our laughter and our tears, their presence reminds us that we're never really alone...!

Rajiv Sir can sense the pain his friend/partner is hiding inside him...and that's why he doesn't take his rudeness very seriously...! But lately, he did see a new aspect of Shaurya...the cruel/devilish side of him...! His obsessive personality for Mehek really disturbed and pissed him off..! May be...that's why he didn't inform Shaurya of Mehek job contract offer in America...sceptic and afraid, that Shaurya can make impossible, possible...fly to America and continue to make Mehek life hell, even after the cooking competition is over...just like he's doing in India...? But..was happy to learn that there's someone very special out there, somewhere...who can bring a change in his friend life, and make him more human..!

So...Asmit, the public second most favorite young chef..was the last minute backup card who replaced Mehek in the interview...! Happy that Mehek is in good hands with Rachna's and family...! Being a romantic herself...Rachna did sense that MS @ Mehek has someone special in her life, but isn't ready to accept that he's more than a friend...! Excited to know what new surprises Naomi will bring in Mehek life...!

Love and hate are the two sides of the same coin...and that's what Shaurya feelings are for MS and Mehek...who are one and same person...! I think he's attracted to both of them...physically by Mehek, and mentally by MS...!

Shaurya was like a timing bomb ready to explode...when Mehek didn't make an apperance...and at the same time, restless for not getting any news from MS...! To cover his angriness/displeasure...he taunted Rajiv Sir...and to cover his restlessness, he didn't respond to MS text and didn't let her know, he's still awake and already read her text message...!

Shaurya will sure get crushed in between Mehek and MS...when truth will unveil...! Mehek will be the cause of the eruption of the volcano which is brewing inside him, and which will destroy everything with it molten lava...and MS will cool that lava and solidify it, (Shaurya did calm down when he read MS text message...and even said sorry to Rajiv Sir for his rude behavior).! There's a saying..."the same boiling water that hardens the egg...softens the potato"...!

Who will have the upper hand, and who will make a place in Shaurya heart...Mehek or MS is yet to be disclosed...! ⭐️

Edited by Waida1234 - 8 years ago