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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: Waida1234

Hi...Kel...!


Yet another exciting and awesome chapter...! And, ya...all my previous questions have been answered...and I got a big Zero...! Trying to be too smart and intelligent, whom I'm not...and end up making a fool of myself and failed the exams...! 😆 I so needed this right here after my work week😆

Oh gosh...! Shaurya is really a mystery box for me...! His lunatic behavior and constant temper, tantrums intrigue me...! He himself doesn't know what he wants and what to expect from life...! He was annoyed when he suspected that the fourth chair was for Mehek...and when his suspicion turned into reality, he was even more angry that Mehek didn't turn up...! He emptied all his barrel of angriness on poor Rajiv Sir...! He is one confused puppy isn't he? LOL

Shaurya Mom is the person who is the most closest to him...and she's the only one who has the power to tame her son..whenever, he revolts...! But, Rajiv Sir is the person who knows him fully, both inside and outside...the hard, dark, negative and painful side...and the soft, vulnerable, positive side...! Close friends are truly life's treasures...! Sometimes they know us better than we know ourselves...! They are there to share our laughter and our tears, their presence reminds us that we're never really alone...! 👏

Rajiv Sir can sense the pain his friend/partner is hiding inside him...and that's why he doesn't take his rudeness very seriously...! But lately, he did see a new aspect of Shaurya...the cruel/devilish side of him...! His obsessive personality for Mehek really disturbed and pissed him off..! May be...that's why he didn't inform Shaurya of Mehek job contract offer in America...sceptic and afraid, that Shaurya can make impossible, possible...fly to America and continue to make Mehek life hell, even after the cooking competition is over...just like he's doing in India...? But..was happy to learn that there's someone very special out there, somewhere...who can bring a change in his friend life, and make him more human..! 👏👏

So...Asmit, the public second most favorite young chef..was the last minute backup card who replaced Mehek in the interview...! Happy that Mehek is in good hands with Rachna's and family...! Being a romantic herself...Rachna did sense that MS @ Mehek has someone special in her life, but isn't ready to accept that he's more than a friend...! Excited to know what new surprises Naomi will bring in Mehek life...! Should Naomi (a character of my own creation) make an appearance...fun will certainly ensue...she is feisty... just ask Sharlene1410 who has read my RaBir FFs😆

Love and hate are the two sides of the same coin...and that's what Shaurya feelings are for MS and Mehek...who are one and same person...! I think he's attracted to both of them...physically by Mehek, and mentally by MS...!😉

Shaurya was like a timing bomb ready to explode...when Mehek didn't make an apperance...and at the same time, restless for not getting any news from MS...! To cover his angriness/displeasure...he taunted Rajiv Sir...and to cover his restlessness, he didn't respond to MS text and didn't let her know, he's still awake and already read her text message...!

Shaurya will sure get crushed in between Mehek and MS...when truth will unveil...! Mehek will be the cause of the eruption of the volcano which is brewing inside him, and which will destroy everything with it molten lava...and MS will cool that lava and solidify it, (Shaurya did calm down when he read MS text message...and even said sorry to Rajiv Sir for his rude behavior).! There's a saying..."the same boiling water that hardens the egg...softens the potato"...!

Who will have the upper hand, and who will make a place in Shaurya heart...Mehek or MS is yet to be disclosed...! ⭐️

Thank you as ever for your review...is it bad that by the end of it I was hearing it in my head in the voice of the Movie Guy who would do a preview of a film...😆
I'm so glad you are feeling better, and aim to give you some more reading this weekend, which I hope you will enjoy as well😊
Try not to overdue things since you are just recovering

Kelly

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Posted: 8 years ago

Chapter #3

Her hosts were obviously taking very good care of her; so much so that in the first two days, Shaurya barely heard a peep from his MS. That there was a steady stream of photos and videos being posted to her facebook page, tagging him in practically all of them, let him know that at least he hadn't been forsaken, but he had to admit that despite the novelty of experiencing the Big Apple through the eyes of an impressionable first-time visitor, their lack of direct communications had been a bit disheartening. The time difference between them had been the greatest obstacle, lending him only the option of responding to her posts when he was able, and looking forward to hours later when he could access any response she would send. It seemed they were destined to pass by like two ships in the night: neither online when the other was.

Like now, he thought, as he pulled up one of the latest images she had posted. She was as much of a foodie as he, Shaurya thought as he clicked like on the picture of the stylized plate, her incredible dinner she had said, that obviously met her approval. Setting his phone down, he picked up the cup of coffee the servant had just poured, savoring the exquisiteness of the flavored brew.

...We need to make a decision, now that we are down to our last 24 hours, don't you agree? The thing is I'm not really into quickies, so mornings are really a no go on my end, but then again you may not feel the same. Personally I would prefer the luxury of an all-night session before that. Your thoughts KK?

Shaurya had perked up when his phone pinged an incoming message and then almost spit his coffee out when he read it. She wasn't into quickies, preferring all nigh... Good lord, did she even realize the connotations of what she had typed?

...Has New York changed you that much MS?

Sitting cross-legged on her bed, already in her night clothes, Mehek frowned in her confusion after reading his message. What was he on about?

...It's just with the time difference Rachna suggested that it may be best for us to agree on a chat time that will work for both of us. I'm not certain what that has to with my time here in New York, but my personal preference would to talk at the end of the day, which would be mornings for you...I wouldn't feel as rushed I think, but that may not work for you.

Their chats: of course, Shaurya thought, disbelieving that his mind could sink into the gutter just like that. She was certainly wasn't that type of girl, and Shaurya chided himself for allowing his thoughts to stray in that direction. Perhaps a different type of female might have no reservations in sending such a suggestive message to a man, but definitely not his MS. Out of the corner of his eye, he saw his Bhabhi entering, and scoffed. Speak of the devil and she shall appear' he thought, of the woman of debauched character. He ignored Shruti as she took a seat opposite his at the dining room table; retuning back to his mobile, when it sounded again.

...Maybe I'm asking for too much?

Shaurya smiled and began typing.

...Never think so. We will definitely sort things out before you head down to Fl. Like you said the time difference has been a challenge. And...I have a bit of a confession...

...Bolo KK...don't keep me in suspense.

...Well as much as I can tell your companions are showing you the best of the city, I admit to being the slightest bit envious of the time they get to spend with you, while I am relegated to observing from afar.

...Aacha, and here I thought I was doing a good job of sharing it with you. In fact I hoped you would have guessed that the reason that I was posting so much was because I wanted you to feel as if you were experiencing it all with me; especially since we haven't been able to connect before now.

Mehek bit her lip, wondering if between the convoluted text she had sent, that KK would understand that despite the terrific time she had had these past two days, that, in fact she had missed him and their chats too.

Had she been able to see his expression, she would have no qualms in that regard. Certainly none of his breakfast companions doubted his rapt attention to the person he was communicating with.

...Anyway, you needn't feel left out; two days from now it will just be the two of us...once we sort out the time we should chat that is...

...Absolutely, I can't think of anything more pressing right now MS.

Across from him Shruti stared intently at her obsession. She wasn't liking one bit what she was seeing. He was completely enthralled by his messaging session. And to make matters worse, she was damn sure it wasn't business related. "Wheeling and Dealing so early in the morning, Shaurya," she asked snidely.

Shaurya raised his head, and stared the faithless woman directly in the face. "Oh, you would never understand how important these particular negotiations are, Bhabhi dear," Shaurya taunted back.

Edited by crtkelly - 8 years ago


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Posted: 8 years ago
Oh Kelly, you shouldn't tease us with such teasers, now I'll be counting every minute till the weekend approaches for the update...pls update as soon as possible.
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: jani_faizal

Oh Kelly, you shouldn't tease us with such teasers, now I'll be counting every minute till the weekend approaches for the update...pls update as soon as possible.


I'm sorry, I just feel bad knowing that I am falling behind, so I thought to give you a little something to hold you over until I can get to complete the updates, than nothing at all😕

This is what I get for starting too many stories at one time... will have proper updates by the weekend I promise😊
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: crtkelly



I'm sorry, I just feel bad knowing that I am falling behind, so I thought to give you a little something to hold you over until I can get to complete the updates, than nothing at all😕

This is what I get for starting too many stories at one time... will have proper updates by the weekend I promise😊



Kelly no need to apologize, your stories are so good that even if you updated everyday I'll be posting an update soon cause I can't get enough of it. 😊
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Posted: 8 years ago
Uffooo!!! not bad at all...
Waiting for the full updates eagerly... 😃
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Posted: 8 years ago
he he shauyra repky to bhabhi ji was awesome
aww mehak and shauya deciding a time to chat
yipee
please do continue
bye sumi
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: Auditi

Uffooo!!! not bad at all...

Waiting for the full updates eagerly... 😃

Thank you. Aiming to have the full update posted no later than Thursday evening
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: sosweetsumi

he he shauyra repky to bhabhi ji was awesome

aww mehak and shauya deciding a time to chat
yipee
please do continue
bye sumi

Glad you liked it. I am really hoping they will reintroduce their online chats on the show...it was so special not to mention full of potential as it relates to the storyline...I guess I will have to settle with what I can imagine in the meantime.😆
Hope to have the complete update posted in the next day.
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Posted: 8 years ago
Awesome and exciting teaser Kel...with a touch of jealousy, envy, restlessness and naughtiness..! Reading MS first message...KK gutter mind get activated...! 😉


Waiting to read the whole update...!⭐️
Edited by Waida1234 - 8 years ago

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