MehRya FF: Discovering the Magic Chapter28 pg148 (10/12) - Page 5

Hi Kelly you included RaBir and Naomi in this 😆 a nice touch 😆

Amazing update Kelly. Loved it. Didn't expected you to include Rabir in this story.
Continue soon please.

Originally posted by: lovetoread08

Its a long update still not read, will read then comment😊

No worries, take your time. Funny enough it was actually longer than this 😆. I was just merrily typing away, and then realized how much I had done...At least I have a good start on Chapter #2 😊

Originally posted by: Sharlene1410

Hi Kelly you included RaBir and Naomi in this😆a nice touch😆

I like how you explained Mahek's family fear about the almost to good to be true offer that came for her. It is indeed understandable their distrust of Mr shaurya given their history since they met the man.

The man in question is thinking of his friend MS whom he has developed a close bond with his special cyber buddy.

Looking forward to who the guest chef is, more internal turmoil from Mr Shaurya and Makeks's grand American adventure😆

Hey Sharlene what is a little crossover between FF. Accept it as my penance for not updating my other FF. I needed a few characters to help Mehek along, and thought, hey I can envision our group getting together to watch India's Super Cook ( with Naomi screaming at the TV). I don't plan on featuring my favorite characters too much, but thought it would be fun to this time around at least. ( But who knows where I will end up ) 😉

I wrote so much that I ending having to split up the update, so I have got a good start on Chapter 2, when you will def find out which chef arrives to the show. And yes, Shaurya is a wee bit distracted isn't he?

Will PM you when I update again.

Originally posted by: hailly

Amazing update Kelly. Loved it. Didn't expected you to include Rabir in this story.
Continue soon please.

Thanks Hailly 😊 . I thought the inclusion of the Jodi that first encouraged my writing would be appropriate, but they won't be around for too much longer. I just needed to get Mehek on her way 😊

Beautiful update Kelly!! Loved how you brought the inner turmoil of both Shaurya and Mehak.. love how the story is progressing!! Such a natural storyteller you are😃

Amazing I am officially addicted 😊😊😊😊

Originally posted by: Anika_11

Beautiful update Kelly!! Loved how you brought the inner turmoil of both Shaurya and Mehak.. love how the story is progressing!! Such a natural storyteller you are😃

Anika thank you so much for your kind words. I am so glad the you have enjoyed the update and hope you will continue to do so with future updates.😊

Loved your version of MehRya😆Eagerly waiting for the next update 😃

Originally posted by: Anika_11

Loved your version of MehRya😆Eagerly waiting for the next update 😃

I love this pairing so much so it has been easy to write on them. Thankfully I went so overboard attempting chapter 1 that after splitting it up to post, i am well on my way to finishing the next chapter with whats left over...plus its a short work week which means more time for writing so chapter 2 should be up soon😊