MehRya FF: Discovering the Magic Chapter28 pg148 (10/12) - Page 3

Originally posted by: AshReeSha

Me: hitting my forehead. Baka! I keep forgetting that I can't quote your fics
"You can't quote this!" *Gretchen Wiener's voice.* TOO FUNNY😆

I totally get the laptop issues, mine has been acting like a prissy regency era man.
Anyway I'm delighted to see that the plot bunnies have successful pulled you into FF territory. More words for me to eat, especially when they are so well written, make me happy!

*reads synopsis*
Yay- post show FF, more like Kelly's world of her own. I personally find this a smart choice. This way you do not get affected if they screw up anything in the show *fingers crossed that the show gets better each day* Like I said you get me. 😊 beginning as I am allows me the freedom to lean on what the show will air in next the episodes as memories since we all know Shaurya is not going to behave himself any time soon, but "spoiler" my version of The Dance will be the memory of choice for my FF...😉
I loved their little chats and I miss them dearly, so to have you continuing down that path is certainly a welcome thing.Gosh who doesn't miss this aspect of their relationship?

*reads title again* *smirks* Discovering
I am eager to see the identity reveal and your take on it
*hits rabid plot bunny with a cricket bat*

*reads prologue*
*wishes it were prolonged.*
*the length. Not the waiting.* Well as a forewarning my chapters are usually a minimum 3k words if that helps

I love the realism that you always managed to maintain. It makes it easier for me to slip into the story and just relish the experience.

I adore the contrast between what they think of the real and the online.
Shaurya's especially.
His reaction to her moving, the thought of her having a marriage fixed for her and his relief at that not being the case was my favourite bit.
I want to know more and soon!



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AshReeSha, again a few comments highlighted above.

Thank for your excellent review, I am really looking forward to writing this story, and hope it comes over as well as I have envisioned. I look forward to your continued thoughts of what is to come.

BTW Congrats on beginning your own. I look forward to following with earnest.

Kelly

Originally posted by: kaustavi

Wow!! Kelly!!! Just loved this concept so much...

So Mehak is going to Florida ...great opportunity for her...I am confused here..Shaurya isn't going?

Loved their online chats...Mehak wants to maintain frnship with him ..
And Shaurya, he was upset thinking about possibility of her marriage...how sweet..

So, their chats will go on.. waiting for more...love your writing...and ff means so many parts...great...

Continue this soon...waiting...

Originally posted by: bworm

Very interesting. loved the concept