MehRya FF: Discovering the Magic Chapter28 pg148 (10/12)

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Patsy

@fannymanny

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Posted: 8 years ago

#201

Originally posted by: crtkelly

A meet up is definitely planned...it should be interesting😉

Wow, update soon dear !😊

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Shristi

@shristi0706

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Posted: 8 years ago

#202

Simply loved it!!!! Off to reading the chapter 6 now...had reserved this space after reading ur teaser but was so busy with work tht i hd forgotten to comment...Apologies dear!!!!

Edited by shristi0706 - 8 years ago

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vimikrao

@vimikrao

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Posted: 8 years ago

#203

Nice teaser Kelly

Waiting for full chap

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crtkelly

@crtkelly

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Posted: 8 years ago

#204

Originally posted by: -Patsy-
Wow! Kelly... awesome update !! I love their 'benaam' relationship...
As usual a cliffhanger ending...now biting my nails to know MS's response...I am more eager and nervous than Shaurya...😆
Update soon!! 😊

Wait no longer Patsy, I've finally finishing the update.

I hope you find it worth the wait.

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crtkelly

@crtkelly

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Posted: 8 years ago

#205

Originally posted by: jani_faizal
Eagerly waiting for MS's response...

It may not be as you hoped, we are dealing with an emotional pair, but I hope you enjoy the update.

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crtkelly

@crtkelly

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Posted: 8 years ago

#206

Originally posted by: Auditi
👏 👏 👏 👏

Kya yaar Kelly? Aisi jagaah koi stop karta hain? Have to wait till next update for who texted? And if Mehek then what did she write? 😆

Great chapter, Kelly!!! 👏 👏 👏 👏

Loved his PA, Hina... 😆

Finally he is seeing himself in the mirror. Taste your own meds Mr. Khanna now... 😆

Let him sweat some more... 😉

Whats with Rajeev sending yogurt and wishes... Hope good wishes as a big bro and nothing else... 😲

Looking forward for more... please continue soon... 🤗

Yes Shaurya Khanna is taking baby steps, but I suspect there will be a bit more fencing between these two emotional folks.

As it pertains to Rajiv, you have no worries there, but that's not to stop anyone else from seeing Mehek for the gem that she is😉

I hope you enjoy the update

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crtkelly

@crtkelly

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Posted: 8 years ago

#207

Originally posted by: zaara2212
thanks for the pm dear😊
again wonderfully written with lovely choice of words ..
i admire Hina's honest feedback to her boss and what was impressive that shaurya took it very positively he did have a good idea as to what would be the review of his conduct by others 😊

but in all the KK did not miss sending message with a piece of sweet 😊... i am waiting what will be Mehek's feedback now.. will she give a fresh perspective and will try to understand KK as Shaurya...

update soon 😊

Thanks for the comment Zaara😊

Hina was quite brave, I think, and you are right SK quite sensible about receiving this criticism, and yes, he has taken quite the step in his sweet message to MS.

The new update coming up will hopefully give you the answers you are looking for. I hope you enjoy it

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crtkelly

@crtkelly

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Posted: 8 years ago

#208

Originally posted by: ArVi-licious
I'm very happy that I stumbled upon this FF.. read all the parts and I love it.. you r a wonderful writer.. every emotion is beautifully written and as a reader experienced.. waiting to see how this pans out.. :)

Thank you so much, I am glad you have enjoyed what I have done so far. Finally have a new update ready, so I hope you have the chance to read it as well.

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crtkelly

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Posted: 8 years ago

#209

Originally posted by: Sharlene1410
Another awesome update Kelly ⭐️

Thanks Sharlene😛

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crtkelly

@crtkelly

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Posted: 8 years ago

#210

Originally posted by: vimikrao
Shaurya is trying to know what his employees think about him... His PA has given good feed back...
To wish Mehek he had made sweet & ate himself as thinking she has eaten that...

What Mehek has responded to his message... Cliff hanger... so we have to too longer now ...

Thanx for the PM

Vinu

I absolutely promise that I am going to get better with my update as not to have everyone waiting so long. I hope you enjoy the next update.