MehRya FF: Discovering the Magic Chapter28 pg148 (10/12)

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Shameela

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Posted: 8 years ago

#181

Eagerly waiting for MS's response...

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Auditi Ahsan

@Auditi

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Posted: 8 years ago

#182

👏 👏 👏 👏

Kya yaar Kelly? Aisi jagaah koi stop karta hain? Have to wait till next update for who texted? And if Mehek then what did she write? 😆

Great chapter, Kelly!!! 👏 👏 👏 👏

Loved his PA, Hina... 😆

Finally he is seeing himself in the mirror. Taste your own meds Mr. Khanna now... 😆

Let him sweat some more... 😉

Whats with Rajeev sending yogurt and wishes... Hope good wishes as a big bro and nothing else... 😲

Looking forward for more... please continue soon... 🤗

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zaara2212

@zaara2212

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Posted: 8 years ago

#183

thanks for the pm dear😊
again wonderfully written with lovely choice of words ..
i admire Hina's honest feedback to her boss and what was impressive that shaurya took it very positively he did have a good idea as to what would be the review of his conduct by others 😊

but in all the KK did not miss sending message with a piece of sweet 😊... i am waiting what will be Mehek's feedback now.. will she give a fresh perspective and will try to understand KK as Shaurya...

update soon 😊

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ArVi-licious

@ArVi-licious

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Posted: 8 years ago

#184

I'm very happy that I stumbled upon this FF.. read all the parts and I love it.. you r a wonderful writer.. every emotion is beautifully written and as a reader experienced.. waiting to see how this pans out.. :)

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Sharlene1410

@Sharlene1410

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Posted: 8 years ago

#185

Another awesome update Kelly ⭐️

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vimikrao

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Posted: 8 years ago

#186

Shaurya is trying to know what his employees think about him... His PA has given good feed back...

To wish Mehek he had made sweet & ate himself as thinking she has eaten that...

What Mehek has responded to his message... Cliff hanger... so we have to too longer now ...

Thanx for the PM

Vinu

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pinky.padda

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Posted: 8 years ago

#187

awesome update

totally brilliant

continue soon

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Anam

@AamnaSharif_Fan

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Posted: 8 years ago

#188

Fab FF Please continue soon I really like it...

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melissaR

@melissaR

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Posted: 8 years ago

#189

Kelly!!! 👏 👏 👏 lovely! You touched on everything we all thought of and said 👍🏼

My god Hina...you poor thing was so scared!! But I love how you spoke your mind. Smart girl for not saying he's attracted to Mahek 👍🏼 Its a truth he won't ever like to hear🤣 its funny how he might have the same reaction as Mahek when he finds out she is MS 😆 my my

I really hope its Mahek who pinged him at the ending 😲 How can you possibly ignore that sweet gesture

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Shristi

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Posted: 8 years ago

#190

Beautiful update.. sorry for posting my comments so late. had a hell busy week at work.

Coming back to your update, I just love the way you weave the story around our lovely Mehrya. I loved Hina's and Shaurie's convo. So Shaurie trying to improve as a person. Good he has taken the first step in making himself worthy of his MS.

And the sweet part was so cute. In spite of being so far yet they are so close, thats the beauty of love and friendship.

And lastly, i simply love the way your write the story..Its so easy for readers to understand and imagine the situations. Thts the beauty of a gifted writer and Kelly you are one!!!Keep up the good work..Thanks for the PM once again. Update soon

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