MehRya FF: Discovering the Magic Chapter28 pg148 (10/12)

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bworm

@bworm

Dazzler

Posted: 8 years ago

#221

Wonderful update dear. That was very well written.

Git so engrossed didn't realize chapter ended.

Love how you are developing their relationship.

Waiting for more.

And thank you for the pm

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Sharlene1410

@Sharlene1410

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Posted: 8 years ago

#222

That was amazing a hint of the green eyed monster from Shaurya when he heard of her lunch plans

I loved their conversation and wanted more you left us hanging Kelly 😆

I hope Shaurya relizes his mistake with his behaviour to Mehek during ISC

Continue soon

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Shameela

@Sam_Faizal

Dazzler

+ 4

Posted: 8 years ago

#223

Finally something worthwhile regarding the show...I was feeling really upset that the show had lost it essence and what drew me to it... but your story just made my day... at least I can enjoy Mehek the way it should have been through your writing. Thank you Kelly.

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zaara2212

@zaara2212

Sparkler

Posted: 8 years ago

#224

wonderful update ... is KK jealous abt MS having to work with a male 😛
and SK anyway is acting crazy he does not want mehek to be a part of the show

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vimikrao

@vimikrao

Rocker

Posted: 8 years ago

#225

Their online chat is always love to read, Mehek knows who is KK but Shaurya still unaware of MS. It's nice to see jealousy Shaurya, he is warning her to be careful. He is guilty for his behaviour towards Mehek.

Nice update Kelly & Thanks for PM

Vinu

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Shamz15

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Posted: 8 years ago

#226

Very well written chapter Kelly... Waiting for next update 😊

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thabassum

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Posted: 8 years ago

#227

Hola Kelly ...

Read this FF's synopsis , chap 1 & chap 2 ...

Wen I first saw the title ..first thing came to my mind was

Ha ha ha ..just kidding ...don't kill me 😆 !!

I thought the title is related to mehak ...she was about discover her talent in cooking 😃

I love the way how KK and MS as still friends after ISC...😳

But I guess the title wud go after how these two online friends

Wud turn out be partners in rel life 😉 is tat rite ?

I think i shud read he other chaps for Clarification 😆

Okay imaging Rabir as an elderly couple felt little weird 😳 😆

But good imagination i must say 😉

After reading shaurya's description ..I thot he wud be a little majestic by his behaviour... But the way he replied to rajeev for texing sumone special & the way he was waiting for her text...I felt like shaurya was ,a teenager in love 😆

Rachnas advice abt things we dont expect , cums back ! was cool 😆...got an hint 😉

As far for two chapters...

Will give my feedback after reading the rest

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crtkelly

@crtkelly

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Posted: 8 years ago

#228

Originally posted by: -Thabassum-

Hola Kelly ...

Read this FF's synopsis , chap 1 & chap 2 ...
Wen I first saw the title ..first thing came to my mind was
Ha ha ha ..just kidding ...don't kill me 😆 !!
I thought the title is related to mehak ...she was about discover her talent in cooking 😃
I love the way how KK and MS as still friends after ISC...😳
But I guess the title wud go after how these two online friends

Wud turn out be partners in rel life 😉 is tat rite ?
I think i shud read he other chaps for Clarification 😆

Okay imaging Rabir as an elderly couple felt little weird 😳 😆
But good imagination i must say 😉
After reading shaurya's description ..I thot he wud be a little majestic by his behaviour... But the way he replied to rajeev for texing sumone special & the way he was waiting for her text...I felt like shaurya was ,a teenager in love 😆
Rachnas advice abt things we dont expect , cums back ! was cool 😆...got an hint 😉

As far for two chapters...

Will give my feedback after reading the rest

Hey Thabs,

You started...great. i hope you like it😊

Have to admit your comment has had me deviating from my usual respond to the comments in an orderly fashion though...for the most unlikeliest reason:

RaBir old...not on my watch Dear😆. I cannot even fathom that. Right now they are exactly where I left them in my last FF...Rachna in her mid twenties and Kabir still in his thirties. The eldest child is actually their ward and their biolgical children not even school age...that is as far as I could ever visualize them...the thoughtof them any older is just Eww...😕😆

Ok now that's off my chest😆

Discovering the Magic...a double entendre. Collectively Disney World is known as the most magical place on earth, and so I thought it a great play on this since this is where I decided to ship Mehek off too, all in the name of mantaining their online friendship. As to the discovery it definietly relates to the pair of them, and their road of discovering the magic in each other...lets just hope it aren't any illusions involved😉

Shaurya I will make no bones about: he is totally smitten with his online friend in this FF. He is caught hook, line and sinker, but then again he has no clue to her identity either so whether that will make a difference remains to be seen😊

So now only 4 more chapters for you to catch up...hope you enjoy them as well. Looking forward to your thoughts as things hopefully become clearer.

Kelly

Edited by crtkelly - 8 years ago

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crtkelly

@crtkelly

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Posted: 8 years ago

#229

Originally posted by: trentzoe
superb update Kelly! Shaurya feeling guilty about his ISC days and jealous about MS new friend.. eagerly awaiting ur next update! ⭐️

Many thanks for your comment.

I would imagine that Rajiv's words shook Shaurya up more than anything and gave him a new perspective of his actions. Obviously the news on MS new friend is sitting well with him either.😉

I hope to update sooner rather later, and will make sure to pm when i have done so.

Kelly

Edited by crtkelly - 8 years ago