||A Lazy Sunday|| Vural-Hacer

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A/N-: This is my very first try on how the scenario would have been if Hacer & Vural were a married couple. Basically it's my second try on them after I took a long break from writing, and so these two characters from the show Fatmagul have become special for me. <3 ❤️

Hope you all enjoy reading this, obviously I'm greedy for comments (an honest confession you see 😛) but silent readers can at least hit the 'Like' tab. 😳

Thanks to Shanaya (MohabbatGirl.x) for helping me out with this OS. 🤗 Your suggestion helped me a lot while writing this, I just hope it turned out to be good enough. 😳




"My beautiful wife!"

A little smile crept onto his lips as he lovingly gazed at the woman sleeping peacefully in his arms. Hacer looked breathtakingly charming to him, being wrapped in off-white colored satin sheets after they lived one of the most astounding nights when they experienced some incredible pleasures while satisfying the unremitting desire of loving each other. He wasn't in a mood to forget those wild moments which he spent with her just a few hours ago, for he vividly remembered those breathless moans, playful tortures, and indecent whisperings amidst that intense lovemaking between them.

Every single time Vural looked at her, he couldn't help but silently thank the Almighty for bringing this woman into his life, which would have been deprived of true love & contentment without her presence. He slowly brought his hand forward to push away those little fringes behind her ears that caused slight irritation to her closed eyes.

"Mmhh..."

His touch was like the sweetest disturbance for Hacer to wake up from her peaceful slumber, and on opening her eyes, she found her husband still gazing at her in the same way. Before she could speak anything, Vural swiftly pressed his lips against her forehead to greet her for the bright new morning.

"Since when you've been up?"

"No idea. I guess, since an hour or so?" He replied to her in a somewhat lazy tone, smiling at her as she adorably rubbed her eyes. "Why to ask? I don't care about the time when I have you by my side, Askim."

"Such a liar!" Hacer exclaimed, hitting him playfully, "Then what was that stupid meeting yesterday because of which you left in such a hurry?"

"Allah Allah! Look at this crazy lady. First she asks me to be sincere towards work & when I do that, I get hit in return!"

Vural deliberately complained in an over-dramatic tone, much to her amusement. A few seconds later when Hacer moved away from him to get off the bed, he again pulled her back in the same place, while she looked at him confusingly.

"Where do you think you're going?"

"Obviously, to take a shower."

"I thought we were gonna do that together!" Came a raunchy suggestion from Vural which was enough to make her blush.

"You always think that. It's not something new to me." Hacer tried shrugging him off, but in vain.

"Ah, my wifey knows me so well! So come, let's not waste time..."

Just when Hacer opened her mouth to protest against his explicit remarks, the sound of shrill doorbell caused an irritation to Vural, since he was neither in the mood to go check downstairs due to laziness nor did he wish to let go of the opportunity to have some steamy fun with his wife in the bathtub!

"It must be the newspaper. Please Vural, open the door." She requested him with her sweetest smile ever.

"Can't he just put it under the door?"

"But you have to also pay him for the previous month, remember? Please go... Else he'll keep blabbering like always!"

"I'm going to get another newspaper from tomorrow & dismiss away this idiot!"

He exclaimed after a few sconds in pure annoyance, while grabbing his clothes from beside & putting them on quickly to walk out of the room. Hacer couldn't help but silently cackle on seeing his reaction as he went out, muttering to himself about how his intimate moments with her often got disturbed, even on sundays!

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Hacer chuckled on turning behind & witnessing her husband struggling with a few large onions, as chopping those made his eyes so teary that any third person would look up at him and take pity on him for going through some emotional conflict. Well, at least that's how Vural made it look like, for he couldn't help but blabber about how chopping onions was the toughest task in kitchen for him and yet like always, this time too he insisted to accompany her in cooking lunch.

"Finally!" He sighed in great relief, pushing aside the plate full of chopped onions and then immediately rushing towards the basin to wash his eyes.

"Aww my beloved husband, come, I'll help you."

Hacer walked up to him and handing him over the towel, gave an affectionate kiss on his both cheeks to ease away his little misery after his great effort with onions, though she still remained amused at his childish behavior. But this bit of childishness in Vural was a reason which made her love him even more, and while she thought about this, he decided to set out the lunch table before they both would end up starving since they spent almost half of the day just on a few cups of coffee!

Carrying all the items one by one, Hacer lent her helping hand to him in organizing the lunch table in their beautiful little garden, where they would often enjoy their weekend meals pleasantly.

"O Oh! Wait at least till we finish putting the plates!" Hacer lightly hit his fingers when Vural tried to grab a few slices of cucumber from the well decorated salad plate, while both were yet to begin with their supper.

And just a few moments later after they arranged the lunch table, the couple was seen enjoying those mouth-watering dishes under open sky, with their feet lazily resting on the green grass and sometimes Vural impishly tickling her ankles with his foot only to witness her smiling coyly at his actions.

It would rather be better to say that they indolently spent their afternoon by relaxing in porch and doing nothing but shooting the breeze, competitively playing scrabble while arranging silly words on the board, enjoying a few scoops from blueberry ice-cream box & arguing recklessly about who'd get to gobble up more scoops!

***

As the late evening hours gradually surrounded the city of Istanbul, a large number of people were seen hanging out to various like discotheques, karaoke clubs, restaurants, malls and numerous other places meant for public entertainment. But then there were Vural & Hacer, both of whom preferred to sit comfortably in their living room & watch a movie, with different snacks & two glasses of drink lying on the center table.

If Hacer found the movie intriguing enough to curiously munch on her popcorn, the same movie wasn't appealing for Vural though, as he was busy in adoring those cute expressions which she had on her face. Whether she widened her eyes at anticipated views, smiled merrily on romantic scenes or let out an alluring laughter on humorous bits, she always managed to capture his attention to the fullest.

"Why aren't you watching the movie?" Hacer questioned perplexedly, as she caught him not being attentive towards the TV screen & rather looking at her incessantly.

"How am I supposed to look anywhere else when I have my gorgeous wife beside me?"

"What gorgeous, bey?" She exclaimed in a slight irritation, especially upon noticing how shabby she looked at the moment. "I'm wearing these stupid pajamas and a loose shirt. And... Uh.. Look at these hairs tied up in messy bun! Wait, are you being sarcastic?"

"Why would I? I have nothing to do with what you wear, how you do your hairs..." He said in a firm tone, not being pleased at how she found herself unattractive. "All I know is that you're the most beautiful woman I've ever seen and you'll always be one."

"You liar! I know you're being cheesy, and there are numerous pretty girls out there who still give you attention & you seem to enjoy it."

"Oh well, that's because I feel proud about still being the centre of attraction for them."

"Haaww... That's really not fair!" Hacer frowned at his remark, which was obviously meant to enrage her with jealousy but the next second she grew annoyed even more at his cheeky smile & frantically threw a few pieces from popcorn bowl at him, "You really like annoying me, don't you?"

"Yes I do, but listen to me first." Vural tried suppressing his laughter to calm her down, as he held her hands to stop her from reaching for more popcorn pieces to throw at him. "Calm down, lady."

"What?"

"You know how much I love you, right?"

"Hmm... But I love to hear it again & again." She looked at him warmly, eagerly waiting for him to say some winning words to her.

"Is that so?" He seemed quite thrilled on hearing her innocent demand and then whispered affectionately, "Then you should also know that I love you much more than you can even imagine."

"I love you the same way, Vural."

Hacer looked tenderly at him, as his eyes sparkled with tremendous ecstasy like it did every time he heard those pleasing words from her. As Vural amorously ran his fingers on her cheek, she quickly erased the few inches gap between them & sealed his lips in an enthralling kiss, which began as a slow, sensual torture on their minds but soon transformed into a zealous need for each other. Hacer gasped for some air which got an opportunity for Vural to put his tongue in & explore those sweet spots in her mouth, while his arm imperiously held her closer to himself and his other palm softly slid onto the back of her neck, deepening the kiss to their heart's content.

The two were blissfully dwelling in their own little world, and completed each other in such a way that one would be deprived of all happiness without other. But when they were together, they wouldn't really need any other reason to smile for, since the immense love between them was something which would keep them beaming joyfully all along even in hard times.

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Posted: 8 years ago
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Hello Aashicim. 😳
Firstly, no need to thank me cuz I just gave you some suggestions and it's all your hardwork so just give yourself a pat on your back!
And Honestly, I helped you cuz I was greedy that we'll get to read on Vural Hacer. 😆😆😉
But anyways, I loved it! 🤗

The beginning where Vural was looking at his sleeping wife remembering all those tender wild moments, they spent the night before was beautiful! <3
Your selection of words vividly describe the night as if you can visualize them. 👏👏
His Allah Allah was too too cute, really! 🤣❤️
He wanted to have a bath with her, but that was interrupted by the newspaper guy! 😆😆😆 Aww..😛

Then their lunch session and popcorn throwing moment was too cute for words, literally. :*
I can imagine them doing that. ❤️
If they had been together, their love would've been something beautiful like this!

Love The Banner!


Keep Writing More! <3
Edited by MohabbatGirl.x - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Res ❤️/ Unres
I was planning to unres yesterday but my internet messed up!
I'm here anyways.. 😃

Let me just begin with how cute this OS was!
Such a feel good OS that lights up a adoring smile on the reader's face.. 😳
Kudos for that!

It started off beautifully with Vural reminiscing the tender moments with his wife dearest..
Vural mumbling all cutely grumpy because paper boy interrupted his romance and ruined his plans of shower with Hacer was so so cute!
Then his, I'm going to fire this idiot cracked me up bad! 😆
Really? How cute is this man!

Lunch preparation and then the lunch was adorable..
I loved that popcorn throwing bit. It was super cute and I could just imagine them doing that..😳
Vural finding his wife more interesting than movie and then her questioning him what does he finds beautiful in her in casuals was cute again.
His reply was equally beautiful ❤️

Vural and Hacer.. they had potential as a couple and it would have been endearing to see two broken souls loving and healing each other but only if CV could see it!
Nonetheless, I'm waiting for you to write that story.. :*

Keep writing..
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Edited by pcnsb - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Unresd
First of all I am extremely sorry for being so late to reply SafedGullie

But I wanted to read this beautiful OS without any tension or interference😳 Today on a Saturday after completing all the boring work of my real life I decided to get lost in my babies Vural-Hacer.❤️

This is such a lovely piece of work.👏 Vural and Hacer are the much in love married couple who are content with themselves and their martial life.

Looks like marriage has brought stability to our Vuralwa's life.😉
But he is unstable only around his sweetheart.

Hacer began her Sunday with a forehead kiss from Vuralwa.How sweet!! But then Vuralwa was with her every moment☺️

Then the newspaper guy turned out to be a kabaab main haddi.

But our lovebirds are back together and with each other throughout the day.
They are content with each other in their tiny Lil world.
They complete each other.A better half in true sense.👏⭐️

It's an extremely well written OS.👏👏 Vural and Hacer's thoughts and their feelings for each other was beautifully explored.The story had a realistic touch to it by highlighting a common Sunday in the life of a married couple.At the same time it had a surreal charm with Vural and Hacer's romance.

Mindblowing Aashicim 👏👏 I just loved it.🤗

Edited by ---Andromeda--- - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Allah Allah, you wrote with such passion, Safedgul! It was extravagantly romantic, and it's evident you put a lot of heart into shipping Vural and Hacer.
Enjoyed reading it, dear.
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Okay first of all, you posted it here on 16th and I'm reading it on the 18th 😭😭

Where have I been all this time??😭

Enough ranting!!😆 Back to typing! Coz I've got words for your write up hun 🤗

First of all thanks to @Shanaya for pushing you, Shano you should push Aashi more often, in fact if this is the result, I'll help you push her too 😆😆

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Just to make one thing absolutely clear, that I imagined everything you wrote, yup the starting one para had me breathless too, like they were while rolling up and down each other 🤣. What can I say I've got a truly vivid imagination when it comes to my OTPs 😆😆

Bugs Bunny going all Allah Allah!! That has to be the most adorable morning after convo ever 😳😳 and then he wants some shower time 🤪 *Ahhh my pathetic shipper heart ❤️*

And then the most normal thing, the Newspaper Wala LMAO, Vural swears to dismiss the idiot, how dare he interfere with his wifey time?😆😆

Vural going all adorable while chopping onions!! @Aashi- You had to do that to us?? Really?? Why oh why??

Vural preferred watching his wifey's expressions than some movie, awww 😳😳. And she goes all worked up when he calls her beautiful 😃😃 and then how gently explains what she is to me, the only one he ever loved 😳😳

And then the last 2 paras 😳😳😳. You had to do that, again?? 😃😃


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I'll sum up my reaction while reading it with this emoji


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Posted: 8 years ago
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Apologies for reading it late!!
Uff!! I dont have words to explain the experience of reading this short story.

The characters, their bonding & routine is simply relative. I guess who else eats a popcorn like that while watching a movie;-)

Vural & Hacer had to be a simple couple, away from that razzmatazz of Istanbul.

Towards the end, you got me humming to June Afternoon by Roxette!!

Oh btw that gif is awesomeshwaraya namaha!!!!

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Posted: 8 years ago
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Edited my previous post.
Edited by ---Andromeda--- - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
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@Aashi
Today's episode loaded with Vural-Hacer scenes!!watching it now
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: MohabbatGirl.x

Hello Aashicim. 😳

Firstly, no need to thank me cuz I just gave you some suggestions and it's all your hardwork so just give yourself a pat on your back!
And Honestly, I helped you cuz I was greedy that we'll get to read on Vural Hacer. 😆😆😉
But anyways, I loved it! 🤗

The beginning where Vural was looking at his sleeping wife remembering all those tender wild moments, they spent the night before was beautiful! <3
Your selection of words vividly describe the night as if you can visualize them. 👏👏
His Allah Allah was too too cute, really! 🤣❤️
He wanted to have a bath with her, but that was interrupted by the newspaper guy! 😆😆😆 Aww..😛

Then their lunch session and popcorn throwing moment was too cute for words, literally. :*
I can imagine them doing that. ❤️
If they had been together, their love would've been something beautiful like this!

Love The Banner!


Keep Writing More! <3


Thank you for this beautiful comment. 🤗
Aye, I like giving credit to people who deserve. 😛 Goodness lessons from Kerim/Kuzey. 😆

I like whenever Bugra's character goes 'Allah Allah', he appears so uber cute while doing that.
I always imagined Vural-Hacer having a married life somewhat like this, if not totally similar. ❤️ Maybe that's why I'm happy that I can imagine things in alternate universe, wahan no CVs of any show can mess up with us. 😎😛

I'm surely going to write more on them, after receiving so encouraging comments. ❤️

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