ZASHAF SS : PT 2 pg 5 feb 8

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CHARACTER SKETCH , INTRODUCTION : BELOW

PART 1 BELOW
TEASER PG 3




part 2 page 5
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Posted: 11 years ago
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zindagi gulzar hai ss

character sketch :

kashaf murtaza aka churail awwal .. a young and dynamic student of Karachi university , she is a lovely girl with a child like heart and the delicate feelings which are hidden deep somewhere which she never lets anyone know..

zaroon junaid , a young and handsome guy , his looks are to kill and his voice can just compel you to loose in him .. he is an outstanding student at the university of Karachi and is pursuing MBA along with his childhood friends asmara and usama ...

INTRODUCTION

life is not a Not of roses it gives you all the trials and tribulations of the life that males you feel only you are one who is being tested in this hard life .. only you are the one who is made to go through the hard times that Allah only gives to only his favorite persons..

love always need a reason to be with each other.. she is a rock hard who finds herself in all the difficult situations what will happen when they will struck with each other .. will he be able to take her insecurities away from her life making her feel loved and being in love...

kashaf and zaroon the two individuals when they fall for each other how will they behave with each other...

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Posted: 11 years ago
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PART 1


it was raining in the city of Karachi , the eldest daughter of rafia murtaza was scribbling in her diary , she was the sensible but a bit different personality from others responsible daughter who knew that what it means to be a girl.. somewhere on her life she is always the one who thinks that being a girl she has to sacrifice each and wvru single happiness that comes in her way.. there was not a second where she is not worried about the toughest tests in her life that she often considers the misfortune of. her life...

kashaf looked at the white sheet of paper that was like her life which would be just like her childhood and she could have written the melodies of her life but the moments turned sour when her father married again leaving her mother making kashaf know that from now on she won't be having an ideal life.. nor the father who will make her feel loved... that might when she and her sisters get to know that fr now on she will having a father just for the are sake there was a certain kind of loathing in her heart that made her know that whatever she have to achieve on her own.. life is a battle of struggles for kashaf murtaza and she can't fear with the fact of defeat...

years went and the hard time that kashaf faced made her live in her own life with just one goal of living a life which she would be proud off , her ammi will be proud of her daughter ..

in the other part of Karachi , there was a guy who was busy rehearsing the new tone on his guitar , a coffee mug placed near him with the utmost concentration zaroon was humming a melodious tune... such melody just melted his heart and even the lyrics that he sang along were the replica of his heart...

zindagi gulzar hai ...

ye ishq ka ghar bhar hai..

kisi ke gamo ko baantna hi pyar hai

zaroon completed the lyrics and heard the soft applauds of his sister sara and his mother.. zaroon looked above and saw that sara was there with their mother and gazala was looking quite interested in his tune...

sara : are wah zaroon i didnt knew that you can compose so well.. i mean the words are so good isn't ma..

gazala : ha i agree with sara the composition is really very good zaroon.. chaloi have to go for fabiya's lunch ..see you later ..

gazala's exit made zaroon think what he every time think about his mother but still there were things that he wanted to have in his life...

even after spending time with zaroon sara too left the place to meet farhaan.. she was getting married the next month and the girl was quite excited with the things happening around her and wanted everything to be quite apt...

zaroon : dont you think that ma should send sometime with us.. i mean you are getting married and kuch dino me you will be with farhan and then we wont be getting the time to spent together sara...

sara : ye tum kya keh keh rahe ho zaroon , ma gives us more than enough time and if you do wnat to spent time with me so say directly..

zaroon put his guitar aside and made sara sit beside him...

zaroon : its basically not about you and me sara even dad misses her , you know what i am trying to say

sara : zaroon , kabhi kabhi i dont understand you at all.. so when the university starts

zaroon : i am going today to see the list ..

sara : good... see you then.. farhan se milna hai mujhe..

zaroon smiled..

zaroon : see you then...

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it was an unusual day , the today which was supposed to the the best day of her has turned out to be a nightmare again.. kashaf who was not expecting anything from god like any other day was quite unpreturbed but the words that her abba and his brother spoke about her and her sisters made her angry..this was the moment she always hated ..her father the man who easily took his hands off of the responsibility by marrying another women leaving her ammi and her sisters alone just for the sake of a son..and no matter kashaf tries to forget the betrayal her father gave to them , it was still just like that green wound which can never get cure..

and today he has again done that ..

murtaza : hame lagta hai ki kashaf ka rishta tey kar dena chahiye aur Allah ke fasal se itna acha rishta hai rafia...

her father was sitting along with his brother ( her uncle) and her mother was quite kashaf was about to go out and speak the harsh words that she never wanted till now but sidra hold her back...

sidra : kashaf kya kar rahi ho.. ammi ko acha nahi lagega

kashaf : acha nahi lagega aur wo jo abba kar rahe hai sidra .. aaj tak unhone hamare

kisi bhi dukh dard me hamara saath nahi diya ammi ko kabhi ye ehsaas tak nahi dilaya ki wo unke saath hai..aur aaj achanak wo ammi ke sar se ek bhoj hatane aaye hai..

sidra : kashaf chup ho jao...

kashaf was feeling really helpless when her mother's words acted as a balm on her wounded heart..

rafia : abhi toh wo adhna chahti hai..aur main abhi nahi chahti ki kashaf ko kisi bhi tarah ka masla ho uski taleem me koi kami reh jaye...

the indirect denial made kashaf and sidra so hay but abba just like he does left the lace in anger..

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so that was the Part 1 do like and leave comments

cant wait to read

PARDON TYPOS..😊


Edited by suhaaana - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Awesome story dear. Base is the same of ZGH, waiting to see what you have different in store for us!

Please PM me when u update next.

Alot of typos. Do proof read when u get time.

Love,

Mrina
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Hyeee gud to hv a forum for zashaf as well ..

story bases is looking the same ..which i am glad for ..really dont like to have the characters completely different from the originals ..but would love to see a different story in their college time n ahead

lovely start ..

waiting for more

luv ya
sobia

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Posted: 11 years ago
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Awesum story n it has the ZGH feel which I loved..

continue soon.. cant wait for the next part :)
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Yes the same ZGH feeling. I like that Kashaf a lot.

Update soon!😳
Edited by AshesToDust - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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A good start. Thanks for writing.

It's so hard to find stories on Kashaf and Zaroon with the same circumstances and personalities.


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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: osiristhoth

A good start. Thanks for writing.

It's so hard to find stories on Kashaf and Zaroon with the same circumstances and personalities.


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thank u so much
glad u like my effort
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Posted: 11 years ago
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thank u dear

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