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Yush001

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Posted: 9 years ago

#91

Woaah! Survi in mini skirt!! Wow.
U r a fab writer aimy!
Waiting for ua next update!
Even am so busy with my upcoming exams n thatks why my story is on hold. 😭

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chandana1

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Posted: 9 years ago

#92

I just went through ur last 3 updates at a stretch! Lovely! Waiting for ur next update!😃

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aimmyangle

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Posted: 9 years ago

#93

Originally posted by: chandana1
I just went through ur last 3 updates at a stretch! Lovely! Waiting for ur next update!😃

Thanks dear :-)😊

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aimmyangle

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Posted: 9 years ago

#94

Originally posted by: chandana1
I just went through ur last 3 updates at a stretch! Lovely! Waiting for ur next update!😃

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aimmyangle

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Posted: 9 years ago

#95

Hay guys I m here again sorry for that I m not able to post it regularly due to my bizy schedule ...so here is my next part..

Part 14 :

Scene 1

Karvi dance n then cut a cake n celebrates their first date n have diner together...

Next morning:

Survi wake up n saw kartik continously staring her

Kartik : sotay hue kitni masoom lagti hai r jb uthti hai to...

Just then survi opes her eyes

Survi : kia kia kaha tum n kartik

Kartik : survi wo main... wo mein ... keh raha tha... wo kia hai na su...rvi...

Survi: kartik kia wo mn wo mn kr rahe ho ... ruko mn batati hn ...

Kartik run survi also run behind him n they have pillows fight

N kartik says

Kartik : sham ko tyar rehna kahin jana hai hmn ... n smiles n leaves

At evening:

Ani : ai ap fikar na karo is bar na mn simmi ko lay k hi aon ga

Tai : shabash mera bacha...

Both smriks ...

At chawl:

Kartik reached home n tell survi

Kartik : survi chalo packing karo hmn abhi nikalna hoga

Survi : lakin kartik hm ja kahn rahe hn

Kartik : hm dubai ja rahe hn ... ek important meeting k silsilay mn

Survi : itnay jaldi packing kase ho ge...

They both does paking n leave for dubai..

Flight lands in dubai...

they reached at hotle:

Survi : kartik tum to meeting k liye jao gay mn akeli kase rohn ge yehn

Kartik : survi jese pura din ghr mn rehti ho... wase b aj hi ka din to hai kal s hm sath sath hn gay...

Survi :smiles ... ok

Kartik leave for meeting survi start settling clouth in cup board just the she heard some noice ..

Survi : kon .. kon hai wahn pr she saw a shadow n walk behind her ... n reached on a clif . N saw ani there ...

Survi: ani tum yehn ?? Yehn kia kar rahe ho

Ani : hn mn yehn tmhara picha kar raha ho darling ...

Survi :mn n kaha tha mujhe s dur rehna

Ani : tum ho hi itni khubsurat tm s dur raha hi nai jata na...

Survi about to slap ani hold her hand

Precape : ani says agr tum meri nai ho sakti to or kisi ka mn tmhn honay nai don ga... n pushed her from cliff

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chandana1

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Posted: 9 years ago

#96

Pushes her from cliff??? 🤪 ab aage ka tho bata tension se maarne ka irrada hain kya??😳

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Yush001

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Posted: 9 years ago

#97

Wow! Amazing aimy! 👏 Update the next part soon the curiosity is eating me now! 😆

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aimmyangle

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Posted: 9 years ago

#98

Originally posted by: Yush001
Wow! Amazing aimy! 👏 Update the next part soon the curiosity is eating me now! 😆

Thanks alot yush...I will try to post it today ...if I m able to otherwise tomorrow

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aimmyangle

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Posted: 9 years ago

#99

Originally posted by: chandana1
Pushes her from cliff??? 🤪 ab aage ka tho bata tension se maarne ka irrada hain kya??😳

Yar suspence hai suspence... jaldi koshish karon ge update karnay ki aj ya phr kal

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aimmyangle

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Posted: 9 years ago

#100

Part 15:

Scene started with ani n survi convo

Ani: tmhara picha kartay kartay to mn nark tk ja sakta hn ye to phr b zameen hai my love ... winked

Survi pushes him away

Survi : tu sudharnay wala nai hai na ani...

Ani : survi darling ufff tmhari yahi bat to pasnd hai mujhe k ghusay mn b kitna hassen lagti ho..

N start moves forward

Survi: ani dur rahe mere s

N pushed him away bt fails n she

Moves backward n about to fall ani hold her hand

Ani : agr tum meri nai ho sakti to mn tmhn kisi or ka honay nai do

n ga ...n leaves her hand n she falls ...

Scene 2:

Kartik free from meeting n happily run to hotle thinking about survi n him ..." aj mn r survi ek sath hn gay .. mb use aj sb bata don ga k kitna piyar karta hn mn use "

Kartik reached hotle n find police there n ask from people what happens

Kartik : kia hua yehn

Man : bhai naya jora aya tha yehn rehnay ... shyd honeymoon p aya tha..lakin wo larki bechari pahar s gir k mar gai... pata nai us ka pati kahn hn

Kartik shocked n ask police ...

Police inform that its survi barway ...

Kartik is un state of shocked as hell n start crying.. n tell he is her husband

Police ask him to recognize her

Kartik moves toward deadbody n removes clouth from her face bt it was smashed n find bangles in her hand... which he gifted her ...

1 year leap:

Lata n shanti is at temple praying for kartik

Ani handling all business of survi's father n both tai n ani also wasting his money ...

Precape : someone inform lata a nurse from london is coming to their house