Dard e ishq (yvr) ff last part 19 updated

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Posted: 9 years ago
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Hy guys i am here with my ff just on your wish. I m not a good writter bt i just try if any mistake forgive me.
Part 1
Story starts after 8 years leap where survi fall from clif n instead of lata kaki to save kartik from falling . n it is not clear that survi is alive r not
A girl wake up in a fine morning she was really happy she found her self in a soft n a huge bed with many teady bears arround her she remove blanket from her face n walk towards washroom n wash her face n saw herself in mirror n said "main simi roy , roy group of industries ki ekloti malikan mere pass sb kuch hai paisa gari dolat r mera pagalpan ( she wink in the mirror)"
then she come out to her room n get a text from some one n smiled n reply
She come to dining table for break fast n wishes good morning to her parents n her father wishes her back n ask her to sit for break fast n her mother is also glad for her
Scene 2 :
An unconscious guy in a drunk state is laying in a club some people recognize him as a " kartik barvay " baravy industries ka malik they drop him at his house n he was in his room n gain his little consciousness n found himself in his room n ask her mother "main yeh kase aya maa ?"
Precape : kartik mother scold him n said " kartik tm n khud ki kia halat kar di hai us k jane k bad " .
Plz give ur feed back im not a good writer bt tried my best
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Posted: 9 years ago
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wowww continue ------continueee ,, but i want simi to be survi i mean i want...survis memory to loss and she is thinking herself as simi roy!!
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: antika11412

wowww continue ------continueee ,, but i want simi to be survi i mean i want...survis memory to loss and she is thinking herself as simi roy!!

Hehehehe ye to abhi suspence hai the kase mujhe likhnay ka koi experience nai hai isly buht dar dar k post ki mn n
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: aimmyangle

Hehehehe ye to abhi suspence hai the kase mujhe likhnay ka koi experience nai hai isly buht dar dar k post ki mn n


darne ki kya baata hai its so god start continur kar bina dare hue be jhijak...😃and btw maine woh sholay wala ff part 3 post kardiya hai padke jara coment mardena plzz!!😉
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Posted: 9 years ago
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I am speechless! Its was soo interesting I can't wait for the next update! Plz... update soon! And loved ur thought of making survi's character bold and winky! Hope u don't make her a' ameer baap ki bigdi uyi aulad' can't wait them to meet again! So kya survi ne apni yaddash khodi? Whatever! But bechara Karthik in the same situation! USS bechareki tho kismat hi karab hain had story mein uski dardh ke siva kuch nahi miltha! But plz don't drag his dukh bari track soo long ok! Plz try to make them meet each other and karthik to know that she is nun other than survi and cheer himself and be happy with a motive of bringing back her memory being and behaving like a teenager in front of her and his funny and interesting attitude! And trying to impress survi with his looks and feeling jealous when she is close to any other guy like her friend or someone! Its just a suggestion! And loved ur ff!❤️
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Hehehehheheheh dont worry chandna us ki kismat zayada dair tk kharab nai rahe ge . n thank u soo much for a lovely comment . i will try to post the next part soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
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amy!!!🤗🤗 finally you started a ff..!!🥳🥳 and the plot is excellent.. do continue soon.. i can't wait longer for the next part
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: ApekshaM

amy!!!🤗🤗 finally you started a ff..!!🥳🥳 and the plot is excellent.. do continue soon.. i can't wait longer for the next part

I will try as soon as posible
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Posted: 9 years ago
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May b i will post it in evening i will try n thanks apeksha dear
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Interesting plot.
Am loving the bold survi 😃
Will be waiting for ur update dear..😳

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