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aimmyangle

@aimmyangle

Dazzler

Posted: 9 years ago

#71

Originally posted by: Yush001
It's getting interesting after every part! Hope survi gains her memory 😳

Thanks

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aimmyangle

@aimmyangle

Dazzler

Posted: 9 years ago

#72

Sorry for late update

Part 10:

Kartik n sunrvi in room:

Kartik : survi tum uper so jao mn nechay so jaon ga

Survi : lakin kartik...

Kartik : survi tmhn uper sonay ki adat hai na ... R mn neechay hi thik hn

Survi nod n think in her mind ab mn kartik ko kase bataon mujhe teddy bear k sath sonay ki adat hai mujhe us k bagair neend nai ati

Next morning :

Tai house :

Tai : ani tu sun meri bat kuch b kar kisi b tarha tu n wo sari property apnay naam karwani hai simi to gai hath s magar ye mqt bhol k tere taya n simi k nam abhi tk kuch nai kia ise pahle k dair ho jaye kuch b kar k sb apnay naam karwa lay

Ani: hn tai sai bol rahi hn ap ... Simi to meri hui nai is ka matlb ye to nai mn n har man li hai ... Smriks

Karvi room :

Kartik wakeup n saw survi crying

Kartik socked n ask survi

Kartik: su... Survi ka ka kia hua tm ro kun rahi ho ... Mujh s koi ghalti hui kia?? Bolo to sai

Survi look toward kartik n say

Survi : wo kartik kia na ...

Kartik wo mujhe...

Kartik : kia survi bolo n cuped her face

Survi : kartik wo kia hai ... na ghr mn teddy bear k sath sonay ki adat hai r ab wo yehn nai hai mn us ko buht miss kar rahi hn ...

Kartik brust into laughing

Survi : kartik tum hans rahe ho sharm nai ati tmhn ?? Tmhn kisi k sath sonay ki adat hoti to mn puchti ...

Kartik laugh more loudly

Survi leave the room

Kartik : acha survi bat suno tm tayar rehna kahin lay k jana hai mn n tmhn ...

Survi : mujhe tmhare sath kahin nai jana ... Hans lo tm pahle...

N survi leavs

Scene 2:

Kartik bring survi in chawl n ask her to wight outside

N after few mins kartik come n ask her to come inside bt step her first foot on dish which is full of mud

Survi : kartik ek sath ander chaltay hn ao tm b ...

They both placed their food on it n come inside

Precape : Survi fall n kartik make her lay on bed

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chandana1

@chandana1

Navigator

Posted: 9 years ago

#73

Cute survi! Teddy bear teddy bear turn around!😛 koyi usko teddy laakar dho bhi!😆

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aimmyangle

@aimmyangle

Dazzler

Posted: 9 years ago

#74

Hehehehehehe thanks yumna n chandna ...

Hehhehe j kartik hai para to teddy bear ki kia zarorat hai

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swathi sen

@SWA1992

Voyager

Posted: 9 years ago

#75

U r back !!!!!!
Superb update...

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aimmyangle

@aimmyangle

Dazzler

Posted: 9 years ago

#76

Originally posted by: SWA1992
U r back !!!!!!
Superb update...

Hehehe yup .. Thanks alot

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aimmyangle

@aimmyangle

Dazzler

Posted: 9 years ago

#77

Part 11 :

Scene 1:

Kartik n survi entered the room

Survi : kartik yeh kahanlay aye ho mujhe tum ?

Kartik : survi ye pahle tunmhara r ab hamara ghr hai ... Tum yehn rehti the pahle r tmhare baba n ye ghr mere nam kar dia tha phr mn n isko bech k business kia r dobara isko khareed lia ... Yeh ghar mere liye buht minay rakhta hai survi...

Survi : lakin kartik mujhe kuch yad nai hai ..

Kartik : mn janta hun survi islye to bata raha hn ...

Scene 2 :

Ani comes to the office of survi's dad ( roy) n greet him

Ani : uncle mn wo ap s mafi mangnay aya hun ... Mn n jo kia ghalt kia lakin mn kia karta wo ai k kehnay p karna para lakin ab meri ankhain khul chuki hn ab mn kuch ghalt nai karon ga plz mujhe maf kar dijiye

Mr.roy : nikal jao yeh s tum dono baap beta dhokay baz ho baap n business mn dhooka dia r batay n dosty mn ... Shakal mat dekhana

Dobara apni ...gaurds... Nikalo isay bahar

Guards pushed ani out of the office

Scene 3:

Karvi home :

Some notes were laying on the floor survi saw n think pata nai kis k paray hn gay kitni mehnat s kamay hun gay kisi n r yehn ase paray hn ...

N tries to pick it up bt fails as they move forward then kartik apears laughing on survi

Survi : kartik ye tm n kia hai... Tmhn zara sharm nai ati na ye sb kartay hue n through pillow in him

Kartik : acha... Hn nai ati... Khud ko dekha kabhi tm n yadasht chali gai lakin sochnay ki adat nai badle pahle b ase dantti the r ab b...

They have pillows fight

Survi silent n little bit hurt n start to walk n get hurt on foot n fall .. Kartik hold her hand n pick her she was awkward n walk toward the bed n lay her on bed

Precape : kartik starts to leave survi hold his hand ..

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aimmyangle

@aimmyangle

Dazzler

Posted: 9 years ago

#78

part 12 :

kartik lay survi on bed n start leaving from there just then survi hold his hand

survi : kartik kahan ja rahe ho

kartik : survi wo mn bahar ...

survi : mujhe dar lagta hai andhare mn plz mere sath beth jao ... r ye jaga b nai hai ...

kartik smiles n sits be CCCside her

survi smiles back n sleep holding kartik's hand ...

scene 2 :

ani drink vine n brokes the bottle n thinking about survi 's dad words

morning :

kartik wake up n saw survi holding his hand .. smiles n goes for getting ready for office

kartik reaches office n call some people for interviews

after some people ani comes for interview ... kartik shocked bt take his interview n select him ...

karvi room :

survi wake up n does not find kartik n become worried n call kartik

survi : kartik mujhe bina bataye kahn chalay gaye ho tm ... mujhe utha nai saktay the ...

ab bolo kuch boltay kun nai

simi...

survi : kon?

kartik kahn hai

ani: mn ani hn ... tmhari shadi kia hui tm to bhool hi gai ... hn bhai hmn kun ab puchu ge tm... tmhn naya husband kartik jesa dolatmand admi jo mil gaya hai na ... jb use dil bhar jaye to kisi r ko pakar lena

survi : shutup just shutup anikate fone kartik ko do ..

ani : ab tmhari kartik s kabhi bat nai ho gi survi ya simmy ...

survi : ani agr mere kartik ko kuch hua na jaan s mar don ge tmhn mn dont dare to touch him

survi leave for office

survi reaches of

shout for kartik kartik kaartik...

kartik in meeting room heard survi's voice first he thought its in his mind then again listen n excuse himself n comes out from room n saw survi standing in the mid hall n run downstares

survi run n hug him tightly n cries kartik hug her back

kartik : survi tm yehn kase ??

survi : kartik hn mai woo ... tum ye batao mujhe baghair bataye kun chale aye mujhe ...

kartik : tum preshan ho rahi the ... dont worry mn itnay jaldi kahin nai jaon ga...

survi pushed him n say

survi: aj k bad asa kaha na tum n to tmhari jaan mn lon ge suna...

kartik smiles n say yes boss...

n they both leaves from there..

precape : survi holds ani's collar n warn him just then kartik arrives there