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aimmyangle

@aimmyangle

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Posted: 9 years ago

#11

Originally posted by: Yush001
Interesting plot.
Am loving the bold survi 😃
Will be waiting for ur update dear..😳

Thanks alot dear

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uroos

@uroos

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Posted: 9 years ago

#12

Wow awesome episode plz next episode jaldii post karna or plz thora long episode post karna plz I realy like your story

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uroos

@uroos

Explorer

Posted: 9 years ago

#13

I think k agher serial main bhi aniket ya tai ki wajah say agher survi kartik say door hojai or sabko lagay k survi margai leken kartik ko belive ho k survi ko kuch nahi howa hai or kartik phir say angry rahnay lagay or phir wapas aye or new look main or ye dhekhayen k kartik ka survi k liye love Bohut strong dhekhayen tu ye dekhna Bohut interesting hogha

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aimmyangle

@aimmyangle

Dazzler

Posted: 9 years ago

#14

Scean started where it last finishes

Scene 1 :

Kartik: ai mn yehn kase aya mn to...

Lata : hain mn batati hn tu yehn kase aya . club mn nashay mn dhuod para tha bahar k log aye tujhr chor gaye kartik beta tu n kia halat kar li hai apni us k janay k bad

Kartik furiously said : ap ko kitni bar kaha hai mn n us ka naam mat liya karain mere samnay . is ghr mn koi us ka naam nai lay ga nafrat hai mujhe us k naam s us ki bat s us ki har cheez s

Lata : lakin kartik ..

Kartik : bs mujhe r kuch nai sunana

Lata leaves from there worriedly

Kartik take out survi's pic from his voilet

Kartik to survi's pic

Survi kahan chali gai ho mujhe chor k nai jee sakta tmhare bina mn kase bataon in sb logon ko k is nafrat k pichay mera piyar chupa hai jb jb tmhara nam sunta hn mn har bar toot jata hn us din agr tm mujhe na bachati to mn aj is dard mn na hota

Tears rolls on his cheaks n he lies on bed n said

Plz survi wapas ajao plz n he sleeps with teary eyes

Scene :2

After finshing break fast simmi come to her room n changes her night dress n come back to room n saw some one wi8ing for her he turn n it was anikate simmi's best friend n her uncle's son (father's brother) n he returned from U.S.A she hug him n ask

Simi : mera gift kahan hai

Anikat: ohh sorry mn bhool gaya

Simi become angry n stop talking with him n he gives her a big teddy bear n chocolate box she becomes happy

Precape : simmi scold kartik for anikate

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Kavila

@Kavila

Sparkler

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Posted: 9 years ago

#15

Originally posted by: aimmyangle
Scean started where it last finishes
Scene 1 :
Kartik: ai mn yehn kase aya mn to...
Lata : hain mn batati hn tu yehn kase aya . club mn nashay mn dhuod para tha bahar k log aye tujhr chor gaye kartik beta tu n kia halat kar li hai apni us k janay k bad
Kartik furiously said : ap ko kitni bar kaha hai mn n us ka naam mat liya karain mere samnay . is ghr mn koi us ka naam nai lay ga nafrat hai mujhe us k naam s us ki bat s us ki har cheez s
Lata : lakin kartik ..
Kartik : bs mujhe r kuch nai sunana
Lata leaves from there worriedly
Kartik take out survi's pic from his voilet
Kartik to survi's pic
Survi kahan chali gai ho mujhe chor k nai jee sakta tmhare bina mn kase bataon in sb logon ko k is nafrat k pichay mera piyar chupa hai jb jb tmhara nam sunta hn mn har bar toot jata hn us din agr tm mujhe na bachati to mn aj is dard mn na hota
Tears rolls on his cheaks n he lies on bed n said
Plz survi wapas ajao plz n he sleeps with teary eyes
Scene :2
After finshing break fast simmi come to her room n changes her night dress n come back to room n saw some one wi8ing for her he turn n it was anikate simmi's best friend n her uncle's son (father's brother) n he returned from U.S.A she hug him n ask
Simi : mera gift kahan hai
Anikat: ohh sorry mn bhool gaya
Simi become angry n stop talking with him n he gives her a big teddy bear n chocolate box she becomes happy
Precape : simmi scold kartik for anikate

👏 wowww...

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chandana1

@chandana1

Navigator

Posted: 9 years ago

#16

Kya baat hain yaar! Very interesting! Try to give some long updates plz!👏

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aimmyangle

@aimmyangle

Dazzler

Posted: 9 years ago

#17

Originally posted by: chandana1
Kya baat hain yaar! Very interesting! Try to give some long updates plz!👏

Hehehe thank u soo much . ok i will give long update in next part

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aimmyangle

@aimmyangle

Dazzler

Posted: 9 years ago

#18

Originally posted by: uroos
Wow awesome episode plz next episode jaldii post karna or plz thora long episode post karna plz I realy like your story

Hehehehe thanks uroos . ok dear i will post next part long

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aimmyangle

@aimmyangle

Dazzler

Posted: 9 years ago

#19

Part 3

It started with simmy dancing with joy after receiving gifts from anikate

Simmy : pahle jhoot kun bola ?

Anikate : tujhe tang karnay k liye r phr agr pahle bata deta to teri ye khushi kase dekhta ??

Simmy : acha ye bata tu wapas kase aya

Anikate : mn wapas job k silsilay

mn aya tujhe to pata hai hamre ghar k halat (they are poor )ka islye idher hi achi job offer hui to mn n accept kar li aj interview hai

Simmy : ohhh acha hn i know . acha ye bata kahn offer hui job ?

Anikate : ( hesitatly ) wo simmy job j..j...o...b mujhe...

Simmy: ye kia laga rakha hai jalidi bata mujhe b to pata lage k kis to apna loss karwanay ka shok charh gaya hai hann... Laughing

Anikate : smiles n say "kartik barvay "

Simmy : kia ??? Kia kaha tu n ? "kartik barvay " ??

Anikate : hn simmy . mujhe pata hai tu asa kabhi nai chahe ge bt ...

Simmy: lakin ani tu kun ase ... Tujhe pata hai na agr dad ko pata laga to wo kitna ghusa karain ge

Tu un ki company mn kun nai interview deta

Anikate : nai simmy mn asa nai kar sakta mn sb apni mehnat s kamana chahta hn . agr uncle ki company mn mn n job ki to log kahin ge muft mn kama raha hai

Simmy : lakin ani ...

Anikate : simmy dont worry mn isi mn khush hn . r good news ye hai k ab phr s hm dono ek sath rahin ge r khub mazay karain ge buht miss kia tujhe yar ..

Simmy : hmm mn n b

N hug him n he leaves from there for interview

Scene 2 :

Kartik reached office n says

Kartik : mn n aj kuch logon ko interview k liye bulaya hai un ko mere office mn bhej dena

Employee : ok sir

Anikate reaches for interview n selected . he call simmy for informing

Anikate : hy simmy ! Guess what ? Meri nokri lag gai

Simmy : what ? Congratulations r meri treat ?

Anikate : hn hn mil jaye ge

At that movement kartik reached there n scold ani for talking on call during working hours .

Ani cuts the call bt it cant cut simmy listening all this n leave from there

Anikate working in his cabin n kartik talking on fone for some meeting just then he notice a girl with curly long hairs wearing black gogles n pik shirk n black tiets entering in office n say

Simmy : kartik barvay kahn milain ge ?

Ani listen simmy's voice n come there

Kartik comes there n says

Kartik : yes mn hun kartik barvay

Simmy: how dare you ?

Kartik : what ?

Simmy : English smjh nai ati tmhari himat kase hui mere best friend ki dantnay ki ? Ek fone hi to attand kia tha kon sa koi pahar pht gaya tha jo us ko itna danta tm n

Ani felt shameful n try to stop simmy bt she cant

Kartik furiously gives angry look n leaves from there n call his P.A

Kartik bending on table by placing both hands on table n remembering simmy's word P.A enters in cabine

Kartik : ye larki kon the r mujhe is ka sara bio data chahiye jitna jaldi ho sakay ... Jaldi...

P.A : yes sir ..

N p.a goes from there kartik sit on his chair just then his fone rings he pick it up n its simran (kartik's friend )

Kartik : simran mn abhi bizy hn bad mn bat karon ga tm s

simran : ok jesa tm thik samjho kartik

She ends the call n kartik closes his eyes n think about her words n cursing his feast

Precape : karmy dances in the party

Edited by aimmyangle - 9 years ago

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chandana1

@chandana1

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Posted: 9 years ago

#20

Karmy means Karthik and Simmi? OK I just loved it! U are really a wonderful writer yaar!👏 Mein dil se bol rahi hoon!👍🏼 Kya dialogues lika yaar!👍🏼 I felt like am reading a written update of a true tellydrama! Can't wait for ur next update am super exited!😃

And that idea of making aniket survi's friend and Simmi karthk's friend is amazing!👏

I think CVS can use this story as season 2 agar issme ankush and sonal ko lenge na fans tho pagal hojange iss serial ke peeche! As sonal and ankush are seen a completely different and new makeover!😃 sonal wearing skirts and behaving bold fearless character! Omg thab tho tai ki aur uski bahuth jamegi!😆 survi ko tho kaise bhi karke darra damkha kar control Mardi par abb yeh nayi wali junglee billi ko kaise control karegi! Uski tho waat lag jaani hain!😆

Soo far ur story impressed me a lot! Can't wait for ur next update!😃 send this to CVS I think we have more better ideas than them!😆

Edited by chandana1 - 9 years ago