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aimmyangle

@aimmyangle

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Posted: 9 years ago

#21

Originally posted by: chandana1
Karmy means Karthik and Simmi? OK I just loved it! U are really a wonderful writer yaar!👏 Mein dil se bol rahi hoon!👍🏼 Kya dialogues lika yaar!👍🏼 I felt like am reading a written update of a true tellydrama! Can't wait for ur next update am super exited!😃

Yup karmi means kartik n simmy . hehehhehe really a big thanks to u . yes i will post it soon . if i m not bizy then in evening

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aimmyangle

@aimmyangle

Dazzler

Posted: 9 years ago

#22

Originally posted by: chandana1
Karmy means Karthik and Simmi? OK I just loved it! U are really a wonderful writer yaar!👏 Mein dil se bol rahi hoon!👍🏼 Kya dialogues lika yaar!👍🏼 I felt like am reading a written update of a true tellydrama! Can't wait for ur next update am super exited!😃
And that idea of making aniket survi's friend and Simmi karthk's friend is amazing!👏
I think CVS can use this story as season 2 agar issme ankush and sonal ko lenge na fans tho pagal hojange iss serial ke peeche! As sonal and ankush are seen a completely different and new makeover!😃 sonal wearing skirts and behaving bold fearless character! Omg thab tho tai ki aur uski bahuth jamegi!😆 survi ko tho kaise bhi karke darra damkha kar control Mardi par abb yeh nayi wali junglee billi ko kaise control karegi! Uski tho waat lag jaani hain!😆

Soo far ur story impressed me a lot! Can't wait for ur next update!😃 send this to CVS I think we have more better ideas than them!😆

Hehehehehehehehehe thank u sooo much chandna for such a lovely comments dil khush kar dia sach mn hehehehhe agr cvs ka contect mila to zaror karon ge

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Yush001

@Yush001

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Posted: 9 years ago

#23

Originally posted by: chandana1
Karmy means Karthik and Simmi? OK I just loved it! U are really a wonderful writer yaar!👏 Mein dil se bol rahi hoon!👍🏼 Kya dialogues lika yaar!👍🏼 I felt like am reading a written update of a true tellydrama! Can't wait for ur next update am super exited!😃
And that idea of making aniket survi's friend and Simmi karthk's friend is amazing!👏
I think CVS can use this story as season 2 agar issme ankush and sonal ko lenge na fans tho pagal hojange iss serial ke peeche! As sonal and ankush are seen a completely different and new makeover!😃 sonal wearing skirts and behaving bold fearless character! Omg thab tho tai ki aur uski bahuth jamegi!😆 survi ko tho kaise bhi karke darra damkha kar control Mardi par abb yeh nayi wali junglee billi ko kaise control karegi! Uski tho waat lag jaani hain!😆

Soo far ur story impressed me a lot! Can't wait for ur next update!😃 send this to CVS I think we have more better ideas than them!😆

Yaar u just said wht I wanted to say 😆

Am just luving her fanfiction ❤️

Haan that would b damn interesting if season 2 happened with this story 😳

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aimmyangle

@aimmyangle

Dazzler

Posted: 9 years ago

#24

Originally posted by: Yush001

Yaar u just said wht I wanted to say 😆
Am just luving her fanfiction ❤️
Haan that would b damn interesting if season 2 happened with this story 😳

Thank alot all your comments meant alot o me thanks for liking my ff

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rocking_bhawna

@rocking_bhawna

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Posted: 9 years ago

#25

Read all parts in one go... Amazing plot...plzzz continue

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aimmyangle

@aimmyangle

Dazzler

Posted: 9 years ago

#26

Part 4

Scene 1 :

Kartik open his eyes n stands up from chair n leaves from there hurryly for house

At night :

anikate call simmy n ask

Anikate : simmy tu pagal ho gai the dimagh kharab ho gaya tha tera aj mera office mn pahle din tha r tu n mere boss ko dant dia ?

Simmy : ani tu to chup hi rahe us ki himat kase hui simmy roy k best friend ko dantanay ki r tu n jawab kun nai dia us ko

Anikate : bap re bap simmy itna ghusa ??

Simmy : hn to or kia wase mujhe wo admi pasand nai tha ek to dad ka bissnuess rival r uper s tujhe b sath danta us n to

Nafrat ho gai mujhe us

Anikate's mother (tai) come there n ask :

Tai : a ani tu is wakat kis s bat kar raha hai ?

Anikate : ai mn wo... Mn wo... simmy s bat kar raha hn

Tai : ohh simmy s hn hn kar kar bat meri tarf s b Hy bolnay ka us ko

Anikate : hn hn ai ... Bol don ga

Tai left from there

Simmy : ani mn ab sonay ja rhi hn kal subha bat karon ge buht neend a rahi hai

Anikate : ok apna khayal rakhana bye good ni8

Simmy : good ni8

Anikate comes out from room tai ask

Tai : kia bat hui re teri simmy s ?

Ani : ai wo ... Bs ase hi

Tai : a ani meri bat sun tu n simny ko mere ghr ki hi bahu bana hai sun raha hai na re tu ?

Ani : shyingly g ai

Leaves from there for sleep

Scene 2 :

Kartik in his room still thinking how dare she us ki himat kase hui kartik barvay ko itna sb kehnay ki he through his coat on bed .r mn kun nai us ko kuch keh paya ? Kun mn nai bol paya ?

He moves toward window n saw moon n think about survi

Kartik : survi tm to meri har bat samjhti the tmhn to meri har bat bolnay s pahle pata hoti the na ab tm hi batao asa kun hua ? Tm wapas nai a sakti plz luat ao mere pass plz

Here simmy also saw moon from her window n feel somthing n listen kartiks voice as calling survi she is disturbed n think Survi ??? Kon survi ? Ye awaz mujhe kun sunai di ? N went to sleep .

Its morning

In office

Kartik inform his employees that today is grand party in kartik's mension at evening

Anikate call simmy n ask her to be ready for party he will pickup her

Evening :

Simmy ready n reaches at venue with anikate .

Kartik was drinking continuously n suddenly his glass stops as he saw simmy in red gown n looking amazing his eyes stuck on her n then ani cames there n introduces

Ani : simmy meet my boss kartik barvay

Simmy : hy sir i m sorry subha mn na jane kia kia bol gai wo kia hai na mn anikate k liye buht possessive hn na

Kartik : koi bat nai its ok . anikate ye kon ...

Anikate : she is my best friend simmy roy ..

Kartik thinks ohh to ye hai simmy roy

Kartik : hy . enjoy the party

Then couple dance starts with changing Partners ani n simmy dance n then partner change n simmy n kartik dance n lost in each other eyes

Precape : simmy's face revolve in kartik's mind

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chandana1

@chandana1

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Posted: 9 years ago

#27

Amazing!👏 Good job!👍🏼 Update next part tomorrow OK! It's getting more and more interesting! I wish I get to see such serial in TV! All this is revolving in my mind I can imagine but! Dekhne mein zyaada maza aatha survi looking stunning in the red gown and karthik freezed looking at her!

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aimmyangle

@aimmyangle

Dazzler

Posted: 9 years ago

#28

Thank chandna you dont know how much glad i felt after reading all of your comments

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Kavila

@Kavila

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 9 years ago

#29

wow sorry for late update yaar 3-4 parttt mazing kitna acha ligti ho yaar wishhh yvr season 2 ...ho aur usme this story...can take placee...trp ki baad a jayegi ...

keep it up--------------👏