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Posted: 9 years ago
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Ye lo bhai next part
Part 5 :
Scene 1 :
It starts with kartik catches simmy for dance
background music = aye humnawa mujhe apna bana lay (from hamari adhori kahani movie)
They dance kartik loose his sences n come close to simmy .simmy feel awkward then kartik realize this n start close dancing with simmy as dance finish every one claps n both look at each other awkwardly n kartik leaves from there
Simmy n anikate also leaves from there for there home
Anikate : kia dance kia yar tu n simmy mn to dekhta hi reh gaya tujh yar mujhe to kabhi nai bataya tu k tujhe itna acha dance b ata hai ?
Simmy : nai mn wo ani... Lost in thoughts mujhe b nai pata tha mn n to asa dance kabhi kia hi nai pata nai kase ...
Anikate : acha chal chor na ab age ka kia plan hai kahin or chalna hai ?
Simmy : smiles r kahan chalna hai itni raat ko ghr jana hai bs ab mujhe
Anikate : ok ok .. Lo g agaya tera ghr bye
Simmy : bye
In kartik's room :
Kartik breaking thinks in his room furiously n think
Kartik : mn asa kase kar sakta hn survi K sath ??? Kun ek pal k liye mn us simmy roy ko dekhtay hi survi ko bhool gaya tha ... Dhuka dia hai mn n survi kom

Lata comes running n ask
Lata : kartik beta kia hua hai tujhe itna ghusa pagl to nai hogaya tu
Kartik : ai mujhe kuch dair k loye akela chore dijiye ai plz
Lata : beta sambhal khud ko ... Akhir kb tk tu us ki yad mn...
Kartik : ai mn n kitni bar kaha hai us ka naam mat liya kijiye mn n kaha mujhe akela chor dijiye (loudly)
Lata leave from there n say
Lata : ab mujhe hi kuch karna pare ga...
At late night :
Kartik in a window watching moon
Kartik : survi mujhe maaf kar do pata nai us wakt kia ho gaya tha mujhe ... Agr tm yehn hoti aj to mujhe kuch kehnay ki zarorat hi na hoti r asa kabhi hota hi na plz survi maaf kar do plzzz
At the same time simmy's room:
Simmy still lost in thoughts about dance party near window watching moon
Simmy : yeh kia ho raha hai mujhe ? Mn to asa dance kabhi nai kia phr aj kase ...
In morning :
Kartik ready to leave for office as he saw simran comes there n hug him greet him
Kartik surprisingly
Kartik : tm yehan kase r tm USA s kb i ?
Simran : bs a gai
Lata : mn n bulaya hai simran ko yehn
Kartik : kun ? Mera matlb ap n us ko ase bula liya us ki job disturb ho gi ...
Simran : nai mn n job s resign kar dia hai ab mn yehn rahon ge
Kartik shocked
Precap : lata ask kartik to marry simran





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Posted: 9 years ago
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Nice!😃 now I want to see Karthik realising that Simmi is nunother than survi! Plz... end his dukh bari stage! I can't see him in pain in the real story and ff as well! Now we want to see pehle wala Karthik barve and want him to be romantic and their nok jok! And him trying to bring survi's memory back!😆
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Posted: 9 years ago
#33

Originally posted by: chandana1

Nice!😃 now I want to see Karthik realising that Simmi is nunother than survi! Plz... end his dukh bari stage! I can't see him in pain in the real story and ff as well! Now we want to see pehle wala Karthik barve and want him to be romantic and their nok jok! And him trying to bring survi's memory back!😆

Hehebhe chandna sabar ka phal meetah hota hai sbr to karo agay agay dekho hota hai kia
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Hehehehe 2 parts mn kartik ko ase bardash kar lo ...
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: aimmyangle

Hehebhe chandna sabar ka phal meetah hota hai sbr to karo agay agay dekho hota hai kia


Jo bhi ho accha hi hoga! Because this is fan fiction! Hum CVS thodina hain ki kuch bhi karvi against kare! Hume trp thodi na badani hain!😆 all we want is karvi living happily ever after!😆 gud luck for ur next update!👍🏼
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: chandana1


Jo bhi ho accha hi hoga! Because this is fan fiction! Hum CVS thodina hain ki kuch bhi karvi against kare! Hume trp thodi na badani hain!😆 all we want is karvi living happily ever after!😆 gud luck for ur next update!👍🏼

hehehe thank u soo much
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Part 6 :
Scene: 1
Lata : mn n bulaya hai ise ta k teri shadi karwa sakon
Kartik : kia ai ??? Mujhe is bare mn abhi koi bat nai karni mn wapas a k bat karon ga
Kartik leaves from there for office
scean 2 :
At evening :
Kartik call simran in resturant
N simran reached n sit
Simran : bolo kartik kun bulaya mujhe yehn tm n ?
Kartik : simran mn wo tum s kehna chahta tha k ...
Simran dekho wo mn .. Wo mn tum s shadi nai kar sakta . dekho tm meri buht achi dost the ho r hmesha raho ge b sai lakin mn shadi tm s nai kar sakta ...
Simran : lakin kun kartik ? Mn tum se ...
Kartik : kun k mn kisi aur s piyar karta hn
Simran : to phr tum use shadi kun nai kar late ?
Kartik : nai kar sakta na ... Bs meri majboori hai jb sai time ho ga kar loon ga
Simran : (heart broken) thik hai kartik mn chali jaon ge aj hi yehn s phr ...
Kartik thanks simran n leave from there ..
Anikate n simmy are in car for outing n anikate forcefully make simmy drink wine n she feel daizyness . n anikate starts misbehaving with her n she runs from there n fall unconsciously on road people gathered there n ask who is she ani reach there n he is also feeling daizyness .
Suddenly kartik passes from there n notice simmy he come there n take simmy in his arm put her in car n leaves from there ... Simmy saw kartik n ask
Simmy : kartik kahn lay ja rahe ho mujhe ?
Kartik : tmhare ghr
Simmy : nai kartik mujhe ghr mat lay jao ... Mere dad buhat ghusa hn gay mujhe asi halat mn dekh k plzzz asa mat karo un ki respect ka sawal hai plz
Kartik thinks that . mn apnay ghr tmhn lay nai ja sakta tm apnay ghr jana nai chahti phr kaha lay jaon
Then suddenly he stops the car
Simmy : kahn lay aye ho mujhe tm ?
Kartik : is jungle k darmiyan mn ek form house hai mera udher laya hn tm waha re jaon subha tk k liye phr subha mn b dobara a jaon ga mere nokar b wahn hn kuch b zarorat ho un s keh dena
Simmy : nai kartik mujhe un p bharosa nai hai plz tm b rok jao na
Kartik does n't say no so he said ok
At night :
Kartik brings some clouths n ask lady survent to change her cloths n she does n tells that she has fever kartik says ok i will take her care n he all night takes her care
N late night he watching moon n suddenly
Simmy : kartik ?? Mn yehn kase ai? Tum mujhe kahan lay aye ho ?
Kartik : wo simmy tm road p behosh pari the r shayd tmhari drink mn kisi n kuch mila dia tha to tm ghr apnay nai jana chahti the mn tmhn phr yehn lay aya
Simmy : hnn wo log mujhe yad nai hn kon thay sai say ( tried to remembering but failed)
Kartik tm dimagh p zayad zore na do abhi b tm kamzor ho kafi
Simmy cries n walk toward kartik n she is about to fall when he hold her n they have an eye lock
Precape : simmy invites kartik for her marriage with anikate

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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: aimmyangle

Part 6 :
Scene: 1
Lata : mn n bulaya hai ise ta k teri shadi karwa sakon
Kartik : kia ai ??? Mujhe is bare mn abhi koi bat nai karni mn wapas a k bat karon ga
Kartik leaves from there for office
scean 2 :
At evening :
Kartik call simran in resturant
N simran reached n sit
Simran : bolo kartik kun bulaya mujhe yehn tm n ?
Kartik : simran mn wo tum s kehna chahta tha k ...
Simran dekho wo mn .. Wo mn tum s shadi nai kar sakta . dekho tm meri buht achi dost the ho r hmesha raho ge b sai lakin mn shadi tm s nai kar sakta ...
Simran : lakin kun kartik ? Mn tum se ...
Kartik : kun k mn kisi aur s piyar karta hn
Simran : to phr tum use shadi kun nai kar late ?
Kartik : nai kar sakta na ... Bs meri majboori hai jb sai time ho ga kar loon ga
Simran : (heart broken) thik hai kartik mn chali jaon ge aj hi yehn s phr ...
Kartik thanks simran n leave from there ..
Anikate n simmy are in car for outing n anikate forcefully make simmy drink wine n she feel daizyness . n anikate starts misbehaving with her n she runs from there n fall unconsciously on road people gathered there n ask who is she ani reach there n he is also feeling daizyness .
Suddenly kartik passes from there n notice simmy he come there n take simmy in his arm put her in car n leaves from there ... Simmy saw kartik n ask
Simmy : kartik kahn lay ja rahe ho mujhe ?
Kartik : tmhare ghr
Simmy : nai kartik mujhe ghr mat lay jao ... Mere dad buhat ghusa hn gay mujhe asi halat mn dekh k plzzz asa mat karo un ki respect ka sawal hai plz
Kartik thinks that . mn apnay ghr tmhn lay nai ja sakta tm apnay ghr jana nai chahti phr kaha lay jaon
Then suddenly he stops the car
Simmy : kahn lay aye ho mujhe tm ?
Kartik : is jungle k darmiyan mn ek form house hai mera udher laya hn tm waha re jaon subha tk k liye phr subha mn b dobara a jaon ga mere nokar b wahn hn kuch b zarorat ho un s keh dena
Simmy : nai kartik mujhe un p bharosa nai hai plz tm b rok jao na
Kartik does n't say no so he said ok
At night :
Kartik brings some clouths n ask lady survent to change her cloths n she does n tells that she has fever kartik says ok i will take her care n he all night takes her care
N late night he watching moon n suddenly
Simmy : kartik ?? Mn yehn kase ai? Tum mujhe kahan lay aye ho ?
Kartik : wo simmy tm road p behosh pari the r shayd tmhari drink mn kisi n kuch mila dia tha to tm ghr apnay nai jana chahti the mn tmhn phr yehn lay aya
Simmy : hnn wo log mujhe yad nai hn kon thay sai say ( tried to remembering but failed)
Kartik tm dimagh p zayad zore na do abhi b tm kamzor ho kafi
Simmy cries n walk toward kartik n she is about to fall when he hold her n they have an eye lock
Precape : simmy invites kartik for her marriage with anikate

thoda confusion if...anikate misbehaves with simmy then why simmy is marrying..aniket???????😲
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Hejhehehe yeh next part mb reveal hoga antika
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Aniket misbehaving with her? Omg I thought he is a good guy! Badmaash kayika! I hope survi ko jaldi hi yaad aajay! And yaar am really upset this real story yeh vaada raha! Because of that mahasangam promo! I am 95% sure something bad is going to happen!😭 hate these CVS! They don't deserve trp anymore! If they sperate karvi am not going to watch it!

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