Journey of Abhira (FF) Author's Note (13th Jun) - Page 22

Loved the update…is Abhi taking her on a surprise date?.. can’t wait to read more

Originally posted by: jani_faizal

Loved the update…is Abhi taking her on a surprise date?.. can’t wait to read more

lets see that in the next update😉

Originally posted by: shaylini

lets see that in the next update😉

When are u updating next ?

Chapter 23

As they are driving they reach a beautifully decorated farmhouse.

Akshara: wow, this is so beautiful. Are we here for some party? What was so surprising in this? You could have told me earlier.

Abhimanyu: come on in (as he parks the car).

Akshara: but if it’s a party why isn't there any other car in the parking?

Abhimanyu: I don’t know. Can we go inside (Holding her hand)?

Akshara: yes.

They enter the farmhouse but it’s all dark and Akshara realizes Abhimanyu has left her hand and she is standing alone.

Akshara: Abhimanyu, Abhimanyu where are you? See if it’s some kind of a prank, then let me tell you it’s a very bad one. You know I am afraid of the dark. I am going out.

As she turns around lights turn on. She turns back and sees the Hall is beautifully decorated and there is a table for two. Abhimanyu comes from behind and holds her waist.

Abhimanyu: did you like it?

Akshara: this is so pretty, but why

Abhimanyu: come sit I will tell you. But first let's have something. You might be hungry as well.

Akshara: when did you do all this?

Abhimanyu: when you were busy the entire day.

Akshara: reason??

Abhimanyu: it's Abhimanyu Birla's first date with his wife so it definitely had to be special.

Akshara(tears in her eyes and holding his hand): thank you so much. I can't believe you did all this.

Abhimanyu gets up from his chair and sits in front of her holding her hands.

Abhimanyu: I know in this past one year I haven't given you any happiness but now I won’t let tears come in your eyes ever. I promise that and kisses her hands.

Akshara: ok now get up. Dinner is getting cold. BTW how come everything is of my taste?

Abhimanyu: just a bit of help from everyone and I got to know your choice and winks at her.

Once done with the dinner he asks her for a dance and she agrees. He puts his hands on her bare waist and she encircles her hands around his neck. They are lost in each other's eyes and just dancing. Abhimanyu twirls her around and when she turns back at him, he is on his knees.

Akshara: Abhimanyu what are you doing? Why are you on your knees? Get up.

Abhimanyu: I want to tell you something holding her hand.

Akshara: yes (blushing)

Abhimanyu:

Maana ki tumse pyaar nahi tha lekin tumhare hone se ek sukoon hota tha.

Maana ki tumse pyaar nahi tha lekin tumhe mere ghar ko apna banake dekh ek sukoon milgaya tha.

Maana ki tumse pyaar nahi tha lekin meri maa ko tumhare aane se jo khushi mili thi us khushi ko dekh k ek sukoon tha.

Maana ki tumse pyaar nahi tha lekin jab bhi tumhe Anisha aur Neil ki problems solve karte dekha to ek sukoon tha.

Maana ki pyaar nahi tha lekin jab b tumne meri liye kuch kiya hai to ek sukoon milta tha. (Tears in both their eyes).

Maana ki pyaar nahi tha lekin jab bhi tumne khud ko chod k mujhe aur mere ghar ko aage rakha hai to ek sukoon tha.

Sukoon is baat ka ki tum ho to sab theek ho he jaayega. Sukoon is baat ka ki tumhare rehte kabhi kuch galat nahi hoga mere ghar main. Sukoon is baat ka ki mere baad hai koi jo mere ghar ko sambhal sakta hai, ise tootne se bacha sakta hai.

Akshara: Abhimanyu...

Abhimanyu: shhh. I am not done yet.

Aur yahi sukoon kab meri aadat ban gaya mujhe pata he nahi chala. Kab mujhe is sukoon k bagair jeena namumkin sa lagne laga mujhe ehsaas he nahi hua. Kab ye sukoon meri saansein ban gaya pata he nahi chala.

Aur ab mujhe ye ehsaas hua hai ki ye sukoon he pyaar hai. Wo pyaar jo Abhimanyu Birla tumse karta hai, beintehaa pyaar.

Mrs. Akshara Abhimanyu Birla l, I love you. Khud se bhi zyada. Kya tum bhi.

Akshara(makes him stand): I love you too ( and hugs him). Thank you so much for this.I have waited so long for this.

Abhimanyu(still hugging): and I am sorry I made you wait.

Abhimanyu holds her face kisses her forehead, then both her eyes, her cheeks and her nose.

Abhimanyu: Akshara are you ready for this. I mean are you comfortable.

She blushes and turns away from him. He hugs her from behind and kisses her shoulder and lets her pallu fall down. He turns her around and cups her face and kisses her lips deeply. She too holds his hairs and makes the kiss deeper.They part due to lack of oxygen.

He then kisses her neck and Akshara closes her eyes. She throws her neck back to give him more access. While he gives her a hickey on the neck and she moans his name, his hands proceed toward her back and he tries to open the hooks of her blouse. He reaches to her collar bone while kissing her and opens two out of three hooks. Just then his phone starts ringing.

Akshara(barely managing to say as she is breathing heavily): Abhimanyu your phone is ringing.

Abhimanyu(while kissing the other side of her neck): it might be some unimportant call.

Akshara: check, maybe it’s important

Abhimanyu: arghhhhh.

He takes the phone from his pocket and receives without looking who it is. In the meantime Akshara hugs him tight and he wraps his one hand around her waist.

Abhimanyu: hello who's this? Your voice isn't clear.

Akshara while still hugging him opens his tie and kisses him on the neck and he groans in pleasure. She opens the first two buttons of his shirt and kisses him on the chest.

Abhimanyu(looks at his phone to see who it is): why is Neil calling at this time?

Akshara stops and Abhimanyu calls him back (still holding Akshara).

Abhimanyu: Neil what happened? Is everything fine?

Akshara: speaker

Neil: bhai I am in the hospital.

Akshara: Neil what happened? Is Nimisha fine?

Neil:yes she is fine but maa..

Abhimanyu: what happened to maa?

Neil: bhai actually...

Abhimanyu: what actually, speak up? What happened to her?

Akshara: you please relax. Let him talk. Neil tell me what is it?

Neil: bhAbhi, maa is in hospital. She had a heart attack.

Akshara: how is she now? What did the doctor say? Send me the location we are coming.

Neil:doctor said she is stable now. I will send you the location.

Akshara: ok bye. Abhimanyu lets go out till then Neil will send the location.

Abhimanyu( hugging her tight): maa will be fine na?

Akshara: relax, she will be fine as Dr. has said she is stable now.

Abhimanyu: ok let’s move fast.

Akshara: stop. Will we go like this? (while tying her hair in a bun).

Abhimanyu looks at both of them and realizes how they are looking. He stands near Akshara. Akshara buttons up his shirt and takes his tie in her hand. Abhimanyu picks up her pallu and wraps it around her completely. They leave towards the car.

Akshara: give me the keys, I will drive. You sit and relax.

Abhimanyu:ok. Neil has send the location also. Let's leave.

Akshara(while driving): Abhimanyu you have to handle Anisha and Neil, if you will fall weak then who will handle them.

Abhimanyu(holding her hand): thank you.

They reach the hospital and spot Neil. Neil hugs Abhimanyu and Akshara caresses Neil's hair.

Abhimanyu: relax and tell me what happened exactly.

Neil:post dinner I was in my room when I heard some noise from mom's room. I went to check and saw mom was lying unconscious on the floor. Then I brought her here.

Dr. comes out and Akshara goes to speak to him.

Dr: you??

Akshara: I am her daughter in law Mrs. Abhimanyu Birla. How is maa feeling now?

Dr: okkk. She is better now. You can take her home tomorrow.

Akshara sees Abhimanyu smiling.

Akshara: what happened? Why are you smiling so suddenly? Just now you were so worried.

Abhimanyu: when I have you around me, I have no need to worry.

Akshara: ok I will leave now, nimi is alone.

Abhimanyu: why alone? Where is Anisha?

Akshara: she had some camp today.

Abhimanyu: ohh yes she took the fees from me. Come I will drop you.

Akshara: no I will drive. Neil has his car. You two come together tomorrow with mom.

Neil: ok bhAbhi.

Abhimanyu: call me once you reach.

Akshara: ok and starts leaving.

As she is walking her pallu which was wrapped around her completely slips from her hand and is now resting on one shoulder only. Her back is completely visible now. Abhimanyu sees two ward boys standing opposite to him staring at something lustfully. When he looks forward he spots Akshara and what he sees baffles him.

He rushes to her and drags her to a nearby room which is a store room.

Akshara: what happened? You scared me.

Abhimanyu: are you brainless or what? Who walks like this?

Akshara: why are you so angry?

Abhimanyu spots a mirror nearby, drags her there and makes her stand with her back towards the mirror.

Abhimanyu: look.

She turns and she feels embarrassed and hides her face in her hands. She sees out of the 3 hooks of her blouse 2 are still open.

Abhimanyu: you buttoned up my shirt and forgot about yourself.

Abhimanyu while standing in front of her takes his hands around her and closes the other two hooks and hugs her too. She too hugs him.

Abhimanyu: sorry I was rude but you are only mine.

Akshara: ok I will leave now and kisses his cheek.

He escorts her to the parking and she leaves. He spots those two ward boys smoking in the parking. He goes to them and starts beating them ruthlessly.

Ward Boy: sahab kya hua humne kya kiya.

Abhimanyu: kya kiya, meri biwi ko taado ge. Aukaat dekhi hai apni. Dobara kAbhi aisa kisi k saath bhi kiya na, phir main batata hoon tumhe.

And they run from there. He goes back to Neil.

Akshara reaches home and gives him a call.

Abhimanyu: hope you reached safely. Is Nimi fine?

Akshara: yes we both are fine. Ok now you two take rest bye.

Abhimanyu: bye. Tc.

Love Shay

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P.S. The proposal part is self-compiled. Do let me know, how is it? (Would mean a lot)

Chapter 24

The date was so good and the proposal 😍😍😍but that heart attack yrr...blocked the romance😂😂

Originally posted by: shaylini

Done

Loved it !! Why such roadblocks in their date !!

Beautiful lines Shay

Nice update ❤❤

Love, love, loved it Shay….especially the proposal and how she brings him sukoon…. I love how you incorporated that into his proposal and the lines you wrote were just perfect… can’t wait to read more…

Originally posted by: chremma

The date was so good and the proposal 😍😍😍but that heart attack yrr...blocked the romance😂😂

Thankyou🤗

These blocks will increase the intensity of romance in future😉

Originally posted by: olsen_124

Loved it !! Why such roadblocks in their date !!

🤗

Slow and steady wins the race😛