AbhiRa OS: Summer Chills and Winter Rains - Page 6

Originally posted by: 2TheMoonAndBack

Tu mere se aage kaise pouch gayi😡

Tum dono kya race mein participate karrahe ho?

Originally posted by: 2TheMoonAndBack

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Okay i just read this absolute masterpiece and my mind is not in the right place. I need time to process this and read it few more times before i actually make my official comment. This is one insane os and idek if my comment will be able to justify the beautiy of it. But one thing i am sure about mush, all the cold shoulders and rude dialogues int he beginning made the last scene so worthwhile that i cant find the exact words to describe it.ekdaam yaha *point at heart* dil pe jaake lagi hai. You hand just possess some magic to be able to write something like this.

I will be back woth my break down soon

Literally me after reading your comment Ritu!!! Can't wipe off the smile form my face ugh!! THANK YOU SO MUCH🤗

Originally posted by: ishqdinoorhai9

Mush mujhse zyada pyaar karti hai toh bhagwan ji ne mujhe ishaara diya ki main India forums mein log in karun. Simple baby

Badmash! 🤣Tu kyun usse chirha rahi hai! 😆

Originally posted by: Tris03

Oh my God! This was absolutely beautiful❤️ had tears in my eyes reading this 🥺🥺🥺🥺

Loved how detailed it was, the entire pune plot, the emotions, dono ke POVs, LOVED LOVED LOVED IT❤️❤️❤️

Bohot khubsurat likha hai bba🤗🥺🥺

Omg realllyyy??☺️ I'm gonna cry!! Thank you so so much for the kind words🤗

Originally posted by: Ekahriz

This is brilliant! I wish you were on of the writers of Yrkkh, honestly

Ahhhh! Love you🤗

Originally posted by: 2TheMoonAndBack

Yeh bilkuuuuul bhi sach nahi hai. Maan hi nahi sakti mein👎🏼

chalo, ab in dono ka jang shuru

Originally posted by: sheet_leher

I'm at a loss for words.

This was so different and so beautiful. You didn't make everything fine in an instant, because it's the reality. Nothing gets better so fast. The anguish and the pain was very well elucidated. I felt so bad for both of them.

But then, unless you go through all that, you don't realise the importance of the love and the person next to you.

The ending was beautiful :')

Thanks for writing this piece. 💜

@bold: This comment honestly summarizes as to why I made sure everything went downhill in the beginning. SO glad you felt that way!! Thank you so much for the beautiful comment and such encouraging words. You have no idea how much it means to me🤗

Originally posted by: Mira_Pranali

Mushfika.... What a beautiful piece of writing!!! My heart nosedived to my stomach when she said Abhimanyu and he said Dr Abhimanyu Birla.. There are so many moments in the OS where my heart was in my mouth... when he saw her first in Pune and didn't react/ when she spoke to herself that she misses her family/ when he said call me Dr Birla/ when she was in ER/...incredible piece of writing!! I hope we get to see this kind of angst from Abhi in the show as well...I will reread it .. dil ko karar aaya in dono pe hai pyaar aaya..

Yaaar how do you always leave me tongue-tied with your words?! Thank you so much for always supporting my work. and more thna anything, thank you for taking the time to read such long stuff I write. like, really,, means a LOT!

Originally posted by: Amru4krish

Omg...what did i just read .... Too too good ya.... Once started to read no one can leave it midway... Loved it throughly ...pakka sunday treat this is....

Thanks a ton for wrting this beautiful OS....🤗

Ahhh Amru you read my work!! 🤗thank you so so much sweetheart! 😳

Originally posted by: Zenab78

Mush 🤗

Thank you for this Sunday treat.

I'm speechless 😌

This is one of the best piece❤️

Love the way you write..... It's brilliant 👏

This was one of the best pieces? Really?

Thank you Zenu🤗