Lost and Found- An AbhiRa SS ||Update:Part 4, Pg 17|| 17/06 - Page 3

This is so good!

Creatives take a hint from this one. Please update soon.

The way you have written about Akshara pining for her love after rejecting him by looking him in the eye: Simply Superb!! 👌👌👌

The lyrical Lag Jaa Gale interludes were so beautiful and added so much more depth and meaning to the characters and their feelings. That part was so creatively written 😍

And at the end, she remembers his dulhan comment just before the accident. And her final memory before blacking out is him! You have created a very good base for why she remembers only him after recovering 👏

Thoroughly enjoyed reading this, and looking forward to the next part where they "find" each other after being "lost" 🤩

Oye oye oye (in the words of Abhi and Akshu) this is brilliant. Exactly what I would have wanted. 👏🏼👏🏼👏🏼👏🏼

Thank you sooo much you guys!!! Reading all your comments first thing in the morning gave me a HUUUUGE smile 😃😃😃

Thank you. 🤗🤗🤗🤗 Will reply individually to all of you a little while later.

Will try and post the next chapter soon.

Originally posted by: Mridzy

Thank you sooo much you guys!!! Reading all your comments first thing in the morning gave me a HUUUUGE smile 😃😃😃

Thank you. 🤗🤗🤗🤗 Will reply individually to all of you a little while later.

Will try and post the next chapter soon.

Eagerly waiting for your next update...❤️

Wow 👏👏👏👏

Awesome Starting 😍😘😍😘

Can't wait for more ❤❤❤❤

P.S. Please do update the index on the first page 😁

HOLY SHIZZ

She remembers Abhi as her husband xD omg, I CANNOT WAIT for how this story will progress.

Please, pleaaase write the next part soon

Eagerly waiting for an update ❤️

Nice concept

Please update soon

Oh my! That was one intense chapter!! Totally loved reading it. Loved how you described their emotions as they remembered each other's words. and omg!! the ending holy moly! you actually ended up writing an FF on the memory loss idea! this is crazy - i'm so excited to see how things go about now that abhi will be playing the role of akshu's husband continue soon and thanks for the tag 🤗

Oh my god that was awesome 🤩

Ending...😍👀

Beautifully written...

Waiting for next....