Lost and Found- An AbhiRa SS ||Update:Part 4, Pg 17|| 17/06 - Page 4

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Posted: 3 years ago
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Fantastic Mridhu!! Missed your writing!! 🤗

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Posted: 3 years ago
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hey! i read your story yesterday but couldn't comment. i am at all loss for words. what a beautiful start to the story. the emotions and the memory right before the accident was heartbreaking but it goes to show why akshara might remember abhimanyu as her husband. i totally love the connection. take a bow and pls continue soon. i feel like now i need to depend on these stories instead of the actual show

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Posted: 3 years ago
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Originally posted by: Gadbad_Ghotala

Aaaaaaahhhhhhh, I loved it... It's so well written T_T and I ache for such beautifully written stories. Thank you so much for penning this down for us.

Coming to the plot, aww man, my poor babies are separated by the ITV writers but I'm happy they're reunited in such a unique way by you. I'm super excited to read further, I legit want to know all of their reactions to this, especially Abhi and how he's gonna help her with it.

Please update soon! And thanks for the tag ❤


Aw Thank you so much!!! I am so glad you enjoyed this. AbhiRa in ITV - well, I am quite enjoying their scenes for now, dreams hi sahi - its quite cute!


Oh plot is not mine - it's @UKGirl22's - she gave this idea in the accident thread -It had super potential, so I started writing on this.

Thanks once again, I hope you continue to enjoy this one.


Originally posted by: anuandavi

This is simply beautiful.. A big shock for Abhi..


Yeah - poor Abhi.. teehee...Thanks for reading and leaving a comment


Originally posted by: SilentEyes7

Thanks for the tag...

And amazing update...

Waiting for your next update...

Continue soon...


Thank you very much! I'm glad you enjoyed this one. Will try and post an update soonish.


Originally posted by: Zenab78

Omg... Fantastic update smiley31

She doesn't remember anyone except Abhimanyu

I can't wait to read more 😍😍😍

Thank you for tagging me


Ah, Thank you so much! No she doesn't, but it's a good thing isnt it? Her and Abhi in their own little world. I shall try and update this one soonish. Thanks.


Originally posted by: Manju1066

Love it 💕pls continue soon 🤗


Thank you!! I will try and update this one soon.



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Posted: 3 years ago
#34

Originally posted by: ash-912

Wonderful part!!! Her emotions so nicely brought out and his attempts to forget her.

loved it!!! Please continue soon❤️❤️❤️


Thank you so much! I am glad you loved it.

Originally posted by: ishqdinoorhai9

I wish I could tell you in words of how much I enjoyed it, loved it and went through those roller coaster of emotions. But mere words would not suffix the feelings I got as I read these. Gosh, you are cliffhanger queen. Mujhe next part abhi chahiye. I will start an anthem now....

This story is heartbreaking, love, sad smiles and anything and everything .


Oh Em Gee - Thank you so much for leaving this comment! I'll try and update the next part soon. Oh I hope I would be able to write the story with all the emotions you just pointed out.


Originally posted by: Simran_h

Omgggsmiley42 sidha husband bana diya akshu nesmiley37 can't wait for the next updatesmiley9

Thanks for tagging mesmiley27


Thanks! Haan, Akshu is like so done with all this tilak-sagai business, seedha pati. ;D


Will try and update soon. Thanks.


Originally posted by: Eternized_Blues

This is so good!

Creatives take a hint from this one. Please update soon.


Awwwww, Thanks! I am so glad you liked this.


Originally posted by: HahaHeheHuhu9

The way you have written about Akshara pining for her love after rejecting him by looking him in the eye: Simply Superb!! 👌👌👌

The lyrical Lag Jaa Gale interludes were so beautiful and added so much more depth and meaning to the characters and their feelings. That part was so creatively written 😍

And at the end, she remembers his dulhan comment just before the accident. And her final memory before blacking out is him! You have created a very good base for why she remembers only him after recovering 👏

Thoroughly enjoyed reading this, and looking forward to the next part where they "find" each other after being "lost" 🤩


Oh wow!! Thank you so much for leaving this lovely comment! 🤗 Hai na, I don't know, I feel music is so interwoven in their love story and adds so much more depth. I am glad you enjoyed that!


Thanks for reading and commenting. I'll try and updating soon.


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Posted: 3 years ago
#35

When are you gonna update the next chapter 😭

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Posted: 3 years ago
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Originally posted by: slan

When are you gonna update the next chapter 😭


I'm working on it,hopefully I'll be able to update soon! Thank you so much for waiting and enjoying this fic so much! 🤗

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Posted: 3 years ago
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Pls continue soon.. Loved it

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Posted: 3 years ago
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Originally posted by: 7APK

Wow 👏👏👏👏

Awesome Starting 😍😘😍😘

Can't wait for more ❤❤❤❤

P.S. Please do update the index on the first page 😁


Thank you so much! Posting the next part now.


Originally posted by: sheet_leher


HOLY SHIZZ


She remembers Abhi as her husband xD omg, I CANNOT WAIT for how this story will progress.


Please, pleaaase write the next part soon


Eagerly waiting for an update ❤️



Thank you sheet !! 😁😁 Posting the next part now.


Originally posted by: Gurveen


Nice concept


Please update soon



Thank you! Updating now.


Originally posted by: Mushfika_01


Oh my! That was one intense chapter!! Totally loved reading it. Loved how you described their emotions as they remembered each other's words. and omg!! the ending holy moly! you actually ended up writing an FF on the memory loss idea! this is crazy - i'm so excited to see how things go about now that abhi will be playing the role of akshu's husbandsmiley42 continue soon and thanks for the tag smiley31



Thank you so much Mush!! Girl, your comments puts sucha big smile to my face. I'm grinning silly now. And it's 1 PM here. 😁

Oh the idea for the story isn't mine, it's @UKGirl22's idea...

Posting the next part now.


Originally posted by: Maneetlover123


Oh my god that was awesome 🤩


Ending...😍👀


Beautifully written...


Waiting for next....



Thank you sooo much. Posting the next part now.

Edited by Mridzy - 3 years ago
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Posted: 3 years ago
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Slan, so sorry for the delay, but I JUST HAD to get this part write and so there was a lot of writing, editing and rewriting Involved. But I finally managed to get it done. Posting it now, hope you like it.


Originally posted by: Namita-M


Fantastic Mridhu!! Missed your writing!! smiley31



Nami, thank you so much! I miss you here in the forum!


Originally posted by: Anokhi01


hey! i read your story yesterday but couldn't comment. i am at all loss for words. what a beautiful start to the story. the emotions and the memory right before the accident was heartbreaking but it goes to show why akshara might remember abhimanyu as her husband. i totally love the connection. take a bow and pls continue soon. i feel like now i need to depend on these stories instead of the actual show



Thank you sooooo much for this lovely warm comment. I am so glad you are enjoying this story. I'm updating the next part now. Hope you enjoy.


Originally posted by: ananyachaudhary


Pls continue soon.. Loved it



Thank you. Continuing now.



Thank you.

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Posted: 3 years ago
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Before I post, I wanted to say a big Thank you for supporting this SS. Also, sorry for the delay in posting this one, but I HAD to get the emotions right for this part, so had to do a lot of editing and rewriting. Hope you all enjoy.

Meet you at the bottom,

Mridz.


Part 2 - Way back to you.


"She says you are her husband" Abhimanyu gripped the phone tightly, if it was anyone else, he would have said 'yeah right' but he knew Dr.Bhavsar well enough to know she wouldn't say things lightly. If the senior, well respected neurologist said something, it was not be taken lightly. Whatever she said always carried weight.

And carry weight it did. The instrument in his hand was suddenly starting to feel heavy, just as his throat was starting to get parched.

"Dr. Abhimanyu?" Dr. Bhavsar prompted gently, " I know this must be a shock, par can you please come down to the hospital now? I'm afraid the girl's condition is very fragile"

I'm afraid the girl's condition is very fragile.

She says you are her husband

"Akshara" her name was a mangled cry. He was aware of the flabbergasted look his junior was giving him, and quite frankly, he didn't give a damn.


The next hour or so was a complete blur. All he remembered was him muttering an affirmation to Dr. Bhavsar, calling up Taiji and asking her to handle his next surgery, and barking at his junior to assist Taiji.


What if it was her? The thought halted right there, terror rising within him like a tidal wave, as he waited in Dr. Bhavsar's room. He had been told she had gone to see a patient and she would be with him shortly.


What if it was his Aksh -

NO. Don't be stupid, she left. Remember, she LEFT!. She didn't want anything to do with you.


A muscle in his jaw twitched, he glared at the huge wall clock in Dr.Bhavsar's room as if willing it to move faster.

Hadn't he told her brother that her chapter was closed? Hadn't he convinced himself that this was for the best? Hadn't he told himself that he better focus on his profession and nothing else now? So why was he so restless?


As if you don't know.


He gritted his teeth, irritated with himself and the goddamn annoying voice inside his head.

"Dr. Abhimanyu, please follow me"

He whirled around and even though he had a hundred questions to ask, it seemed as if his legs had a mind of their own as he followed the senior doctor silently. She led him through the array of rooms, "It was an accident" she was saying, "Head on collision with a tree. Good thing she was in the backseat" he was only half paying attention.


Head on collision. Backseat. Akshara...


He stalled, the rooms around him, the doctor before him,the words that she was saying, all fading away. His legs, suddenly incapable of moving, stood rooted to the spot, as he looked blankly ahead.


She says you are her husband.

Husband... Abhimanyu's lips went dry as he grappled with the gravity of the situation. She didn't remember anything else, Dr. Bhavsar had said. If it was Akshara, that meant -

If - IF it was Akshara, and that's a big if. Even if it is her, she clearly denied any feelings for you, remember. So what are you going to do? Forget that and pretend you are her husband?


Gritting his teeth, he shook his head, choosing to ignore the nagging voice inside him.


" Dr. Abhimanyu?"

Dazedly he looked ahead to find Dr. Bhavsar standing a good few feet away from his, her elderly eyes questioning.

Get a grip, he told himself. Shaking his head, he quickly walked over to her, "What about her injuries, Dr. Bhavsar?" he asked, deciding to deal with this in the sanest way he thought he could - by being Dr. Abhimanyu Birla who was just dealing with a patient.


Akshara, Pleeeaaaase be okay.

HA! A doctor taking care of a patient - Yeah right! That goddamn inner voice mocked him again, and he shut it out, turning his attention completely to what Dr. Bhavsar was saying, "Just superficial. Physically she'll be okay with little care, but mentally - " and she broke off, sighing.

He nodded grimly, a sinking feeling overtaking him slowly. He was a doctor, and he had seen worse. This should not be affecting him like it was. He knew it was absurd - for all he knew it could be anyone. For all he knew, Akshara had now moved to wherever she had been leaving to, and was happy - being away from you.

Jaw clenched, and lost in thoughts, it took him a few minutes to realise they had stopped outside a room, and Dr. Bhavsar was saying, "I need you to tell me if you know her, Dr. Abhimanyu. Also, let me warn you, she is very fragile which is why we are doing this when she is asleep, toh if you don't know her - " she trailed off. He nodded, "I understand" he said, following her in, his heart in his throat for some strange reason.

The minute his eyes fell on the hospital bed, he knew why.

The pain, sorrow, confusion, restlessness and anger he had felt over the last few days vanished. There was nothing left inside him now except an aching hollow, as if someone had replaced every cell in his body with daggers. There were wounds in her body, bandages in her head and needles to her hand, but if felt as if it was him dying from the pain.


" You know her" That wasn't even a question.


He tried to answer the Dr., but couldn't get the words out, so he merely nodded, his eyes glued to the girl on the bed. He cleared his throat, trying to find his voice, "Ye-Yes. She- uh, she's"


"AKSHARA!!!"


He didn't need to turn around to know her family was here. Knowing full well that the Goenkas would not like him here, he stood his ground as he saw Mr. Goenka rushing to Akshara's side, pausing briefly to glare at him.

Jaw clenched, Abhimanyu resolutely walked to Akshara's bedside, Dr. Bhavsar's words echoing in his head, She doesn't remember anything. Not even her name. She says you are her husband. Her condition is very fragile.

Not caring to listen in as he saw Dr. Bhavsar addressing the Goenkas in hushed tones, he turned his entire attention to Akshara, picking up her reports and giving them a glance over. Once he was satisfied, that her vitals was okay, he turned to Dr. Bhavsar, "Dr, I need to have a word with you" he paused, looking at the contempt in the Goenka's faces, "In private" he bit out in a clipped tone - right now, given the circumstances, he neither had the energy nor the tolerance level for any more drama.


" Tum hote kaun ho? Humari bacchi ka khayal hum - "


Mr. Goenka suddenly stopped speaking and a tender expression overcame his eyes. Abhimanyu didn't need to look down to know that Akshara had opened her eyes to her family and him arguing over her hospital bed. The very thing he and Dr. Bhavsar had been scared of - now they had no control over how she would react, and that was going to make it worse.


Irritated with himself for letting his emotions override his sanity for a second, scared for Akshara's mental health, worried about the situation they had landed themselves in, he looked down.


"Abhi" His name, just a soft whisper, was out of her lips even before her eyes opened fully. "Abhi" she repeated, more clearly this time, opening her eyes slowly. Without thinking and as if it was the most natural thing to do, he lifted his hand and placed it above her forehead, stroking it softly, "I'm right here" he assured her - where else would he be?


As she looked at him with those almond eyes glistening with fresh tears, looking at him as if he was her everything, he knew that he didn't give a damn about anything else right now.

He knew what he had to do. The Goenkas could try to physically throw him out, and yet he wouldn't budge. His family was going to give him hell for this - he didn't care.


Sab ke nazaron mein ghir jaun, woh bhi manzoor hai mujhe...


He looked down at her again. "I thought.. I thought I'll never see you again" she said, her words interspersed with whimpers, her whole body shaking with alarm.

"Shhhhh" he said softly, brushing her tears away with his thumbs, "I'm right here" he repeated again, his voice a soft caress.


Knowing full well that he was going to be torn apart by his own conscience for what he was about to do, he bent down and planted a soft kiss on her bandaged forehead.


Tumhare liye agar mein khud ki nazaron mein ghir jaun, tab bhi mujhe manzoor hai, Akshara.


******** To be continued ********


Thank you so much everyone for the views, likes, comments and support given to this story.

I enjoyed writing this part, but OH-EM-GEE, this was a hard part to write, I had to get the emotions right, please let me know if I succeeded.

Adding some tags now, will come back and add more.

And as always, a request to please Read & Review.

Love,

Mridz.

Edited by Mridzy - 3 years ago

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