Kaira SS sinking... Withdrawl part 20 updated

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I am too dissapointed with the current track to even think of anything positive...😪😪 so just ranting out my thought..



It was almost a month after kairav’s custody battle..alot of things happened in those nerve wrecking days.. allegations.. explainations.. character assasination.. kartik loosing over it.. Naira being numb to the pain and finally kairav’s custody was given to kartik stating he could give stable environment to the child and it was unfair of how his ex wife had hidden the truth of their child from him..

All Naira could remeber from those court hearings was how scared kairav was infront of all those people in that wierd environment and the final declaration which stated that Naira was mentally unfit to raise the child due to her unexplainable impulsive dissapearance..

And all Kartik could remember was how Damini pointed finger at his Naira.. and she stood there stumbed.. why didnt she reply back.. she could have done anything but she stayed quite..

Well it didnt bother Naira anymore.. something was not right.. something was dead within her.. she had given up.. the fire within her was going away.. and the biggest blow came to her when she met Naitik.. her father.. her real hero.. who had always been there for her.. and all she had given him was pain.. she knew what she meant to her father yet she left him in pain many years back due to her misunderstanding with her mother.. she had seen how vunerable he was when she wasnot around but yet again she left him because of Kartik.. was Naitik at fault.. No.. did he deserve that pain...No..Could he handle it..No... Naitik couldnot handle the pain of his princess not being around him.. not in the world...what actually finished him was the irony of destiny that how the two ladies of his life whom he loved with all his heart just vanished with a whooshh without any final goodbyes.. Naitik was paralysed after a severe stroke.. he was at peace coz he couldnot feel anything no pain.. no memories.. he was just breathing and was alive coz it still wasnot time for him to meet his wife and supposedly dead princess..

It was her second week in Cape town she didnt do much.. she gave a shock to kirti by standing alive infront of her and a nightmare to herself by watching her paralysed father in bed..

She would just stare at Naitik for the whole day.. she wasnot picking up anyones call.. was not eating properly.. she was just making herself aware about what she has done..

On the other hand Kartik was impatiently waiting for Naira to pick up kairav’s call.. she wasnot talking to anyone.. he couldnot understand why she was so upset when he had said that he would let kairav live with his mom and all he wanted was to stop Naira from taking Kairav away fron him.. then why?? Was it becoz of what damini did to her but he stood up and crashed damini’s questions down.. he couldnot let anyone point a finger on her.. he even has apologised to her yet again.. then why so much of drastic change??? Kartik knew Naira got terrified when kairav was involved in the court battle and so was he..thats why they agreed to all possible clauses and ended the case quitely.. but what came as a shock was that within few days Naira decided to go to Cape town to visit Naitik which seemed right at first but then its been 2 weeks.. kairav has been asking so many questions which he has no answers to.. he is constantly upset not getting to talk to his mother and Naira is all of a sudden being indifferent..

Why?? Is it because he didnt sign those papers?? The court has finalised them to get divorsed first the re registration of his and vedika’s marriage but for some reason kartik just could not do it.. he knew it was wrong but still he could not sign it and he was super upset when he saw Naira’s signature in it...

Back in cape town again.. Naira would just stay in her fathers silent room where all she could hear was the beeps of life support machines and the breathing of her Papa.. and later in the afternoon she would just be in the backyard of the house where there was a swimming pool.. water was something Naira fancied.. whether it be the fierce rivers of hrishikesh which made her bold and strong like them or the calm beaches of Goa.. she had always found herself wondering how a river can be a source of so many things and still has a life of its own.. journey of its own.. and how it can let go of the dirts and useless things while moving forward.. How she wished she could do that too... she could let go of everything and just give up on everything.. she was tired now.. tired of fighting for everything.. if she looks back in her life she has given nothing but pain to everyone that has loved her from her father to her son.. her baby.. the reason of her existence after that accident.. but then again all she had given him as well was pain..


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Posted: 5 years ago
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As usual it's amazing...am fan of Ur writing and plz update sinking another part....I really interested to see kartik's reaction and state of mind after kaira and kairav left the goenka house

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Originally posted by: jannatsara

As usual it's amazing...am fan of Ur writing and plz update sinking another part....I really interested to see kartik's reaction and state of mind after kaira and kairav left the goenka house

Thank you for constantly liking my work.. abt sinking another part.. i have updated part 2 and i usually write for the future and as in the show we are past the track where naira is in SM and kartik has done nothing so i am not able to think abt what would have happened... honestly i am not liking the current track at all.. m hating it and the character of kartik is getting dull for me.. i see him more with vedika now.. and am hoping CVs get a new guy for Naira😪

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Originally posted by: Raxya

Thank you for constantly liking my work.. abt sinking another part.. i have updated part 2 and i usually write for the future and as in the show we are past the track where naira is in SM and kartik has done nothing so i am not able to think abt what would have happened... honestly i am not liking the current track at all.. m hating it and the character of kartik is getting dull for me.. i see him more with vedika now.. and am hoping CVs get a new guy for Naira😪

I already read that part..if possible plz continue that...u don't need to think much.. just put down your & ours desirable thought in d story & Yeh current track is vary much disappointing ..I yet don't understand why CVC destroyed the character.. it's beyond repairable..
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Originally posted by: Raxya

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Wow i was all the time crying literally reading this 😪😪.This has so much emotion to it.Yes i too believe the current track is beyond repairable.

Edited by pulvi16 - 5 years ago
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As usual like ur other stories this one is fab. Keep writing more.

Current story is too bad just write more stories

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Wouls you guys like if i introduce a new guy for Naira.. A friend.. A soulmate.. not a love interest but a Friend☺️

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Originally posted by: Raxya

Wouls you guys like if i introduce a new guy for Naira.. A friend.. A soulmate.. not a love interest but a Friend☺️

Go Baby Go complete your imagination All in for it :)

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Wow,..... So beautifully written.... Please update the next part soon....

Yes yes please introduce a new guy in Naira's life developing a superbond with Naira.

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Part 2


Naira was sulking 💔and everyone knew that in her family but no one could do anything… what has happened was unbearable and all knew that consoling her would do nothing but still Devyani and bhabi maa would try each day to talk to her but she would often be mummm and would keep on staring at blank space.. she was usually in Naitik’s room the whole day, if not there she would be near the pool.. Naksh was sad too.. he was used to his fathers condition but it was sudden and a big blow for Naira and he knew somewhere too that she considers herself as the reason for that destruction.. he would try his best to interact with Naira.. he would cracks jokes.. tell about what he did the whole day.. but nothing would come back.. neither Naitik would react norNaira.. but Naksh kept on trying.. and he would keep on coz it was all he had..his family.. his happy family.. his father.. his mother.. his sister.. they were his world but at present.. where they have come..

Naira would talk minimum to kairav too.. she was maintaining distance with everyone.. but would occasionally talk with kairav as she did not want her child to be deprived of his mother instantly.. but nothing with other.. jaise ki usne sabko apni jindagi se nikal diya tha.. She wouldnot even talk to Naitik or want him to talk to her.. she would just sit infront of him and would look at him for the whole day.. no words.. no expectations.. no trying nothing…

It had become Naira’s routine to go to the pool side or near the lake that was around the corner of the street and stay there in the silence..but she knew that from the second day of there visit to Cape town a pair of eyes has been intently looking at her.. from a distance.. but consistently there…

Naira stilllooking at the darkness.. without any expression

Naira- Hi Rishab

Rishab too knew somewhere that Naira was aware about his presence but she was not talking to him, so he was just giving her some space and was following her every now and then coz all she was pulled towards was darkness and be it anywhere silence and darkness can lure danger with it.. so he would maintain a distance and follow her just to make sure she was safe..

Rishab was one of Naksh’s best friend and Naira used to have a crush on him before but Rishab was never in love with her but he liked her.. she was like a family to him..he cared for her and somewhere he used to like the attention which naira would give him during old days.. uska chupke se Rishab ko dekhna.. cards banana..secret admirer banke letters likhna..somewhere Rishab liked it but yes they were too young for love.. but then the Singhanias shifted to India and all that came to halt.. Then Rishab realised that he liked Naira’s presence.. he would never admit when Sanju would tease him for it but when she was gone he missed her somewhere..

But then life went on… then when he last visited India and met Naira… things changed forhim.. he got a reality check as Naira was already married and had so much issues in her life.. her life was so complicated.. yet still she had the fire and the innocence along.. he found somewhere wishing that what if Naira and her family would not have moved from Cape town.. what if she was not married.. whatif she was not in love.. Would they have been together? But the reality was different, yet he respected the fact that Naira was in love, though it was complicated but her husband loved her too.. so he came back.. before his attraction and soft corner for Naira would take an intense turn he came back..

Still he could not forget her.. all he could do was remember her and smile.. things usually don’t happen according to our will in life and that was the fact.. the ultimate truth.. After coming back from India he shifted all his focus to his studies..he was never that serious.. but seeing Naira and her medical condition made him passionate to know more about the disease, he was a psychiatrist now and a popular one.. anything related to emotions and mental health he could easily decode by reading a single expression in his patients face.. he was an expert now.. These 5 years after he heard about Naira’s death, he felt sorry too.. sorry for her to die in such young age, sorry for her family for that huge loss, sorry for her husband who despite loving Naira so much was unlucky to spend all his life with her and sorry for himself too that he could never get a chance to get close to her.. to be a part of herlife..

But yet again it came to his shock when naira came to Cape town.. he did not know how to react he has been looking after naitik for 5 years now and each time he visited him, he would try to console her father and somewhere himself too that she is gone.. but like in thriller movies she was back.. he immediately ran towards Singhania house to meet her but then when he saw her.. she was broken soul.. who had given up on everything.. the girl who was so strong.. so fierce even when she had no memory abt herself was behaving like she is a dead person.. no interaction.. no expression and special symptoms of withdrawl.. from everything...her family, her relations., her life, her body..

The steps that excitedly took him to Naira slowed down when he saw her staring at Naitik with blank face, that was her father who was there, paralysed but she did not cry or sob.. yes tears were flowing from her eyes but nothing than that like she has accepted the reality and gave up on trying..

He went totalk to Devyani who told him that they came from india last night and also told him all about Naira.. she would not disclose all these to just anyone,,,but Rishab was like a family.. he was then and there for all times specially the hard ones.. Rishab felt so so sorry for Naira.. to go through all these so early in life.. how vunerable she was that she even decided to leave her father,, her brother.. but how she is now to withdraw herself from all those emotions of life..

He would always follow her whenever she would step out of her house it had been a routine now.. he would just silently follow her and try to figure out what was she looking for.. coz her eyes were not in search of answers anymore.. he would more of see acceptance to reality in her eyes then what was she looking for in that silence and darkness…



Before tomorrow's epi ruin my mood here I go with part 2.... I went for Rishab as the new person coz I can imagine him rather than a new guy out of blue for Naira..

As always thanx for liking my work and do do do leave your views in comments,,,

Edited by Raxya - 5 years ago

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