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Posted: 5 years ago
#31

Originally posted by: aquaHP

Love all of your stories but this one a little more because I want the custody track to be over as soon as possible. I wouldn't mind if they would skip, show a 1 month leap or something.

I like that you introduced a friend for naira. She really does need someone to boost her and explore her side of the story. I feel like the CVs sometimes forget that naira is the protagonist and Kartik is her love interest. They make her strong or submissive according to their own needs and requirements.

Keep updating and be strong! Your imaginary world looks much better than what is being portrayed onscreen.

I am a big big kaira fan and i imaginary world has always been ruled by kaira.. and i know for a fact that there are numerous like you and me there who are actually very hurt ryt now..

but nothing much we can do so lets just move on like this.. i will try my best to entertain you 🤓

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Posted: 5 years ago
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Originally posted by: vinovember

This is getting so interesting!! Please do keep updating your other sinking stories too... Loved this part too... Eager to know what happened to naira!

Hehe.. i have planned something for this one and aab toh custody start hogaya hai show mein jo mujhe dekhna bhi nahi hai..so i will try and focus iss wale mein hehe.. just wait.. i hope you all will like it☺️☺️☺️

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Posted: 5 years ago
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Originally posted by: kaloha

Hi first of all wonderful update and a great concept this is what I wantad from the serial but as always cvs won't care for viewers all they wanted was trp which also decreasing along with kiara, s charm plz update soon once again a great story... 👍👍👍😊😊😊👌👌👌

CVs ki toh ab chodh do.. woh apne duniyan mein khush rahe aur hum apne.. shayad unko der se but realise hogayega kivyeh wrong track tha.. but then again i dnt want a rushed kaira milan😪 i hope woh log zyana na bigad paye😪

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Posted: 5 years ago
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Felt peaceful reading this. Naira away from everyone by the ocean. Sole searching and trying to figure out what she wants. Please don't add any Goenka family members to the storyline except Kairav. I want her at peace away from that family restoring herself to be a strong woman and being there for Kairav only. Let her live at peace for awhile away from her ex.

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Posted: 5 years ago
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Finally now that you have continued writing the stories I can stop watching Yrkkh and just read it stories. Its worth the read. Nd it makes sense.

Kartik anyhow wont be able to handle Kairav.

Keep writing more stories🤗

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Posted: 5 years ago
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Anyone waiting for update??🧐

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Posted: 5 years ago
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Originally posted by: Raxya

Anyone waiting for update??🧐

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Posted: 5 years ago
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Originally posted by: tikit

Finally now that you have continued writing the stories I can stop watching Yrkkh and just read it stories. Its worth the read. Nd it makes sense.

Kartik anyhow wont be able to handle Kairav.

Keep writing more stories🤗

This is so true. I just want a good storyline and this is much better than the show.

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Posted: 5 years ago
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Raxyaa when will u update?I am waiting🙁🙁

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Posted: 5 years ago
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Part 4

In Cape town 🤭


Naira was in gym tights all drenched in sweat from her morning dance routine.. there was a routine for her daily schedule.. she would do some meditation and yoga first after getting up.. then relax and brekky then dance class then lunch next would be time with Naitik,Rishab and family then in afternoon martial arts training.. dinner and at night comedy shows and then back to bed.. and next day same routine with some changed acc to her mood...her day had

trainings and activity for her all kind of moods.. like for peace meditation.. activeness -yoga, happiness-time with family, anger and frustration- martial arts training, laughter therapy-comedy show.. the schedule looked good and normal may be we would also like to do it but it wasnot a normal schedule.. it was a professionally orgainised and well monitered schedule..

Naira’s each activity would be monitored and checked by none other than Rishab.. the schedule had worked wonders as well coz that Naira who wouldnot even look up and talk to her own family was now all bubbly and full of life once again..


In india😭

Kartik was as usual tense.. tensed over kairav’s health, tensed over Naira’s no response and he was getting restless and aggitated each day..

Vedika was now with no sindoor and mangalsutra.. coz even after all her trying and her sticking in to the decision of being kartik’s wife she couldnot do any thing.. he never verbally said her to do anything.. but his action used to speak trillion things.. she still remembered how kartik directly went to choke daminis neck when she accused Naira of infidelity..

A roaring voice of Kartik would echo in her head saying

How dare you talk to my wife like that????

Kartik ne bhale ni usse kabhi kuch nahi kaha but uss ek lamhe mein vedika ko sab samaj mein aagaya tha ki woh chahe kuch bhi karle...kuch bhi aur bhale Naira wud do anything ...even seperating their son from Kartik but kartik Naira se aage kabhi nahi badh payega.. so rather being dellusional she gave up on the emotionless relation..

She was hurt and felt betrayed too but it was better than being a bojh in somebody elses life jaha khud bhi latke rahe aur koi aur bhi uss rishte k bojh ko bina matlab uthate rahe.. and then again after the court hearing as well kartik never signed the papers.. woh kehta toh wahi tha jo har baar kehraha tha.. koi kaam hai.. kairav ki tabiyat ye woh.. lekin iss baar baki ghar walon ki tarhah vedika bhi jaan gayi thi ki woh karna nahi chahta isliye nahi karraha.. warna jo insaan 3 din mein court ki hearing complete karwa de woh decision hochuki case ko kyun khichega..

Vedika was still in GV and the air in the house was very thick as the heir of the house was so unwell.. Naira was

gone and how she remembered that she thought in the begining ki agar Naira chali jayegi toh sab thik hojayega but then again sab kuch wese hi huwa jo GOenka family k log chahtein the lekin kuch theek nahi huwa balki baat aaur bigad chuki thi.. upar se soche toh jaisa hona chahiye waisa hi huwa.. bachaa baap k paas agaya.. ex wife chali gayi.. na woh interfere kar rahi hai.. unke life mein lekin fir halat itni kharab kaise..

Vedika wanted to help the situation.. kisi k liye nahi toh uss bachhe k liye kyun ki Naira k jane mein yeh sab court case hone mein kahin na kahin haat toh usika tha.. but woh bhi kya karsakti thi..


On the other hand Swarna have had enough of the instincts she was having since the final hearing of custody case was done.. she couldnot take it anymore.. everyone knew ki iss situation mein kya karna chahiye but Goenkas k liye humesa ego hi aata raha hai aage.. kartik kairav k waheh se Naira ko lene nahi jaa raha tha.. manish aur dadi buri tarha latke huwe the.. ek toh unhone jo kaha woh hogaya aur situation aur kharab hogayi.. aur fir kahin na kahin unko iss baat ka fir se gussa chadgaya tha ki Naira ne kairav ko sachmein chodh diya.. jaise unke kartik ko choda tha..

But Swarna knew what to do..

Swarna went to kartik to say bye before leaving for Cape town..


Swarna went to kartik’s room where he was sitting besides a sleeping kairav all tensed and vunerable.. and kept an assuring hand on her son’s shoulder and he instantly turned to hug her like he was on verge of breaking down..


K- mujhse nahi horaha maa.. aab aur nahi.. aab nahi lada jata.. thak haya huun main.. mera bachha.. mein nahi dekh paraha..


Swarna had heard similar lines before too.. so she just consoled a crumbld kartik there..

S- main janti hoon.. baat bohot bigad gayi hain.. but aab aur nahi beta.. aab sab theek hoga.. sab kuch..bass aab main sab theek karungi.. bohot karliya intezaar.. aab usko apni jagah mein wapas aana hoga.. i know uske liye bhi difficult hai.. lekin main maa hun.. aur mere bachho k liye jo sahi hai main wahi karungi..

Manish and daadi were listening to this but didnt say a word.. coz they knew as well Bringing Naira back would heal almost everything there and rest Naira’s effort would mend but then they couldnt just put it in words..


Swarna left for Capetown.. with a turmoil inside her.. woh Naira ko wapas bhi lana chahti thi aur nahi bhi.. woh janti thi ki Naira agar laut aayi toh sab theek hojayega but then again.. Naira kartik k life mein wapas nahi aana chahti thi.. aur fir Vedika bhi thi.. bohot mushkil tha.. lekin kairav sabse jyada imp tha.. aur ye bhi ki yesa kya tha jo Naira kairav k halat janne k baad bhi wapas nahi aayi..

alot of questions were running through Swarnas head.. and admist that she had already reached Singhania’s house in Cape town..


Swarna pressed the bell..


And the door was opened instantly by a bubbly chirpy Naira in a floral dress she almost looked like a teenager.. and the best yet wierd part was her smile.. she seemed so so happy that Swarna couldnot help but give a questioning and scared look to her and what came next blew her away..


Naira- Ji aap kaun?? Kisse milna hai????


Sorry for updating late.. was on vacation🤪🤪😎😎so comments plz.. let me know how you find it..

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