There's No Harm On Giving It A Try - Naksh Story Chapter Two Updated

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Posted: 8 years ago
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Surpriseee guys!

So a while ago I asked some of you if I should take a try on a os or something, and today I decided to give it a chance. It's the very first time for me, so dont mind my mistakes. Also am i going to try hindi, bcoz only then you'll feel te feeling, my hindi is not so good, so if i made some very big mistakes than correct me in the comments!😃

Here's the prologue:

"What are you doing here?" he asked her.
" Ma.. maa and the other ladies send me in" she said.
" I couldnt say anything against it" she said shivering
"DON'T" he screamed raising his hand signing her to stop right there.
'Dont call her maa" he said trying to calm his anger.
" You dont have any right to call her that, do you understand", he said as he grabbed her hand and turned it on her back, causing her to winch in pain .
"Main yeh shaadi nahi maanta" and he pushed her off him on the ground.

"Listen, i was forced to marry you and you know that. Its a deal', he said
"Im also forced to marry you", she said with tears in her eyes.
"Im just doing what im told" "Your behavior towards me doesnt make any sense. Im just trying to make this relation work, so both, our families and we, can be happy with this so called deal" she said after which she left the room.


So guyss.. what do you think? Give me a feedback, some tips and tops, bcuz i think i need it. Its my fist time na😆. I will surely continue this, i only dont know how many parts it will be, but it wont be a long story!
I also write this story bcuz i want to return the place and magic of Naksh in this forum. After Hina and Karan left and the whole show focussed on Naira.. I dont have any feeling that this forum belongs to the real 'Yeh Rishta..' fans! So lets make clear that Naksh was the real reason to watch Yeh Rishta Kya zKehlata Hai!

Lots of love,

Trishana

PS: If you want a PM or something the next time i update, buddy me!



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Posted: 8 years ago
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Index

Prologue
Chapter one
Chapter two

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Posted: 8 years ago
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waaw trishana 😛 amazing work..
so hpy that u r trying to write something.. it is so interesting nd surprising 😊. .
i will wait for all parts dear.. it is really interesting work..
maybe something is not gud in between naksh. . dey r married? so many qu is here..
plz update next part i m waiting 👏
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Nice😃 Short and good😃and yeah fully enjoy reading 😊
So now waiting for more 😛
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: ruchinaksh

waaw trishana 😛 amazing work..
so hpy that u r trying to write something.. it is so interesting nd surprising 😊. .
i will wait for all parts dear.. it is really interesting work..
maybe something is not gud in between naksh. . dey r married? so many qu is here..
plz update next part i m waiting 👏


thankyou soo much.. its a precap of the first part. Yes, they are just married.
I will update this week!
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Posted: 8 years ago
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introduction is good and interesting.. pls continue with next part will be wait.. nice work 😊
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: -Lakk-

Nice😃 Short and good😃and yeah fully enjoy reading 😊

So now waiting for more 😛


Thankss! Will update soon😊
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: Pragati-naksh

introduction is good and interesting.. pls continue with next part will be wait.. nice work 😊

Thankyou so muchh
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Hi friends how are you? I am so happy to see a post which is related to our naksh.its true that we still love naksh.we had not seen them together since one year and may be will not in future but i cannot forget naksh.which they gave us in 7 and half years store in my mind for ever.i love naksh i loved naksh and i will love naksh.miss them very much. So friend plz write somthing about naksh and continue. we all naksh fans are always with you
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Chapter one


" Your behavior towards me doesn't make any sense. I'm just trying to make this relation work, so both, our families and we, can be happy with this so called " deal " she said after which she left the room.

***
Nk: " Akshara.."
And she stopped
Nk: " Why?.. why didn't you tell me this before?"
He held her by the shoulders and shaked her
Nk:" I know that it's a arranged marriage, but we were engaged for 4 months. Couldn't you tell me then?!"
Ak:" I've already told you that I didn't had any choice. I wanted to tell you but.."
But before she could make her sentence, he said:
Nk:" then why didn't you tell me. You broke my trust by hiding the truth for me. You didn't only broke my trust but my heart also."
Ak:" But.."
Nk:" BAS.. hogaya! now leave before I say something I'll regret."
He could hear her sob and leave the room. He felt guilty for the making her cry but he didn't had a choice. He felt powerless. On one side he was hell mad at her for hiding the truth behind their marriage. And on the other side he loved her so much to hurt her, but when he was angry he didn't listen to his heart, forgot his love for her and said all horrible things to her.
Her words made him crazy . The only thing he heard was:

" I' m just trying to make this relationship work.. "
" Your behavior towards me doesn't make any sense."

He couldn't control his anger anymore and threw all the things he saw.
He came back to sense when he heard his mother calling him.
gt (Gayatri): "Moona, jaldi aa nicche, sab wait kare hai"
nk: " Haan, Ma main aa raha hoon"

Today was exactly one month after their wedding so Nandini, Rashmi, Mohit, Shaurya and Varsha organized a small party for them.
In this one month a lot of things happened:
Ak and Nk were happily married and things were going well. Ak became the ideal patni and bahu while nk was started going to go work. But after three weeks ak couldn't lie any more, so she told the truth. From that moment (one week) they had every day an argument about it.
" She has a point. I shouldn't have behaved like this towards her, it's not her fault.
It's just .. ugh I don't know. It'll be better just to forget it and give it try."
With this thought he left the room and went downstairs.
Nk greeted everyone and stood near Mohit. His eyes were searching for her, but he couldn't find her.
When he finally saw her, he said..
Nk: "Beautiful"
Mo(Mohit): "Kya bola tu?" and smirked
Nk:"Ku..kuchh bhi to nhi"
Mo:" Haan.. main sab jaanta hoon" and took his tea
When giving him his tea their hands meet and they shared an eyelock.
He stroked his thumb over her hand making her blush.
They came back to sense when they Mohit started coughing after which ak left to the kitchen.
Nk: " mai abhi aati hoon" and he followed her to kitchen

Ak was in the kitchen blushing as she rememberd their little moment.
She starterd preparing dishes and was about to turn the stove on
when she felt two hands around her waist
Ak:" Naitik.." she said breathing heavily with her eyes closed
Nk:" hmm.." he hummed against her neck as he nuzzled her neck.
Ak:"yeh.. aap.. kya kare rahe hai" she said and gasped as he kissed her neck
Nk:"apni biwi ke saath romance" he said stroking his thumbd over her belly button while giving her another kiss on her neck


Precap: "Im sorry ak"


Hey guyss.. soryyy I stopped at such a romantic part but its 12:30 in the evening and I've finally updated it! I cleared some things up like the truth and why they were fighting. I hope that it's clear now! And some romanceee. Yes, the first time I wrote a little loveydovey scene. So I hope you guys liked it, I may be doing one or 2 more parts! Next update: next week!

Lots of love!


Edited by trishanaksh - 8 years ago

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