There's No Harm On Giving It A Try - Naksh Story Chapter Two Updated - Page 3

Originally posted by: trishanaksh

Thank you so much!

I'm quiet satisfied with the story now and I'm glad that you liked it.

I actually want to keep this story short. It wasn't it intended to be long, so there will be one part. It will be a cute one, I promise 😛. After this I will be back with other stories as I already have some ideas.

And thankyou for your suggestions, they gave me more inspiration!

I will update it as soon as possible.

I'm less active on this forum as I recently joined the Ishqbaaaz's one but I will always remaine a NaKsh fan. So i will update here too and ofcourse read your amazing stories!

- Trishana

Originally posted by: trishanaksh

Surpriseee guys!

So a while ago I asked some of you if I should take a try on a os or something, and today I decided to give it a chance. It's the very first time for me, so dont mind my mistakes. Also am i going to try hindi, bcoz only then you'll feel te feeling, my hindi is not so good, so if i made some very big mistakes than correct me in the comments!😃

Here's the prologue:

"What are you doing here?" he asked her.
" Ma.. maa and the other ladies send me in" she said.
" I couldnt say anything against it" she said shivering
"DON'T" he screamed raising his hand signing her to stop right there.
'Dont call her maa" he said trying to calm his anger.
" You dont have any right to call her that, do you understand", he said as he grabbed her hand and turned it on her back, causing her to winch in pain .
"Main yeh shaadi nahi maanta" and he pushed her off him on the ground.

"Listen, i was forced to marry you and you know that. Its a deal', he said
"Im also forced to marry you", she said with tears in her eyes.
"Im just doing what im told" "Your behavior towards me doesnt make any sense. Im just trying to make this relation work, so both, our families and we, can be happy with this so called deal" she said after which she left the room.

So guyss.. what do you think? Give me a feedback, some tips and tops, bcuz i think i need it. Its my fist time na😆. I will surely continue this, i only dont know how many parts it will be, but it wont be a long story!

I also write this story bcuz i want to return the place and magic of Naksh in this forum. After Hina and Karan left and the whole show focussed on Naira.. I dont have any feeling that this forum belongs to the real 'Yeh Rishta..' fans! So lets make clear that Naksh was the real reason to watch Yeh Rishta Kya zKehlata Hai!

Lots of love,

Trishana

PS: If you want a PM or something the next time i update, buddy me!