There's No Harm On Giving It A Try - Naksh Story Chapter Two Updated

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Pragati-naksh

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Posted: 8 years ago

#11

nice update.. some sweet and cute romance of naksh is beautiful.. waiting for flashback scenes to know what is reason behind naksh fight do wrote next part soon

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naturediko

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Posted: 8 years ago

#12

Beginning is very very nice and exciting.egarly wait to know the past of naksh.waiting for next update.keep it up

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nakshkidiwani

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Posted: 8 years ago

#13

so cute part trishana..
i liked mostly in ur story naksh love for each other..
u put lill cute lovy dovy scenes.. waiting for naksh love story nd hate story too... plz update next part

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trishanaksh

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Posted: 8 years ago

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Hey guys! I'll update it today or tomorrow. I think ill do one or two parts and then its done. Actually im had exams this whole week and have them till tuesday and after that i have VACATIOOON ! But i'll make it up guys😃

Lots of love

Trishana

P.S.: Im really really sorry guys that i couldnt reply to your comments!

Edited by trishanaksh - 8 years ago

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Shikha

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Posted: 8 years ago

#15

Gys we hv a keesh AT so plz if u hv any ff u want to get added so that others can also read it plz PM me
Nd also individual FF can also be added thrs no problem

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Pragati-naksh

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Posted: 8 years ago

#16

Originally posted by: trishanaksh
Hey guys! I'll update it today or tomorrow. I think ill do one or two parts and then its done. Actually im had exams this whole week and have them till tuesday and after that i have VACATIOOON ! But i'll make it up guys😃
Lots of love
Trishana

P.S.: Im really really sorry guys that i couldnt reply to your comments!

waiting for update

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trishanaksh

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Posted: 8 years ago

#17

Originally posted by: Pragati-naksh
waiting for update

Hi! I'm working on it now!

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trishanaksh

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Posted: 8 years ago

#18

Chaper two

A/N: I'm sorry that it took so long. What has happened is that I did not have much time and that I did not know that I had to write. After the last chapter I was not really happy with the story, but I decided to write another 1 or 2 chapters. Then I'll be back with another story! For now, I hope you will like this chapter! I have also decided to write everything in English😊

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Akshara gasped as Naitik kissed her neck. What are you doing? her voice cracked as he stroked his thumb over her belly button. I'm romancing with my wife he whispered in her ear while placing a kiss on her neck.

He turned her and kissed her eyes one by one. I'm sorry Akshara. I know I should not have responded like that, but you know how I'm right? When I get angry I don't listen to my heart. I shouldn't say those things to you. I..I am sor-

He was interrupted by her finger on his lips. Can we please don't talk about it. Please.
He wiped the tears from her cheeks as he could't see her cry. No, Akshara, I.. we need to sort this out, otherwise i will always feel guilty for making you cry during the beginning of our married life.

Flashback:
It was their Wedding Night. The wedding went well and Akshara was now the "bahu" of the Singhania family.

Akshara had a secret for a long time. The actual truth of their marriage.

The true truth and the hidden motives about their marriage. Namely, this was a deal between the two families, which would have both families benefits of. They chose not to tell them as it could affect their "relationship". But when she went to the toilet during their engagement, she heard daddaji and her father talking about it. She had heard everything and could not believe it. Even though it was not so bad because they and Naitik loved each other. Yet she felt betrated even Varsha had not said anything?

Since she had heard that, she tried to tell Naitik, but every time something happened. She knew that Naitik would be angry, but that was better than she would lie to him.
He would not trust her anymore and she and their relationship would not be able to handle that as relationships are based on trust.

As she sat on the bed, thought about it. She could not love it anymore. She could not lie to him anymore. She wanted this new beginning in their lives happily does not start with lies. She will and had to tell it today.

In what thoughts are you? he asked her. He went to their dresser and took off his watch. No.. nothing. He sat beside her on the bed "Are you comfortable in these clothes? If you want you can change.."

She moved to get off the bed but got pulled again by Naitik. If you want, I can help you too he said and smirked. He led her to the mirror and held her by her shoulders and said Let me see, how beautiful my bride is ..

On hearing all this tears started coming. She couldn't hold it anymore. She moved from him but he held her from her waist and placed a kiss on her temple.

Naitik? I've to tell you something. Yes, what do you have to tell me? He said while nuzzeling her neck.

Okay, here I'm going to say it now. I'm done with it. I can't lie to him anymore.. I hope that things don't worsen. This is what she thought..

Our families lied to us about this marriage..
He stopped what he was doing and turned her around. What are you trying to say? he asked her. She made herself ready for what was coming. She knew that he would be angry and she knows his anger.. What I'm trying to say is that.. She couldn't hold it anymore .. this marriage is a deal between our families. With this deal they became businesspartners and so they have equal share on everything.

He seemed shocked, deceived and hurt. She could see it on his face. Naitik turned around and stood with his back to Akshara.

Since when do you know this, Akshara?
I came to know about this on our engagement..
On our engagement? You knew it for so long and you did not say anything?
I..I wanted to say but..
But what.. he interrupted her and looked at her. He was hell angry.
It did not seem useful for you to tell me this? In the four months of our engagement you could not tell? FOUR MONTHS! And he broke a vase.

Akshara knew that he would be angry but she didn't see yhis coming. She has never seen this side of him before.

I tried to tell you but every time something came in. Please do not be angry with me I could not hold it for me anymore. I could not lie to you anymore. I'm sor-
You couldn't LIE to me anymore.. He interruped her again holding her by her shoulders NOW you realised not to lie to me ? NOW?! How do you expect me to trust you again? How? Thank you for such a great beginning of our lives together. I will not forget this soon.

With this he left a crying Akshara alone in their room.

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Present:

I'm so stupid. For something that's not even your fault, I've been angry for so long. I've ruined everything. But from now on everything will change. I will discuss this with the other relatives. It's actually their fault and I'm a bast-
Hey! Don't call me husband that otherwise.. Akshara said with her finger on his mouth.
Naitik kissed her finger which made her blush.

Otherwise? he said pulling her closer by her waist. Before akshara knew it, she was lifted up in his arms. What are you doing? The whole familiy is outside! Akshara said shocked as she knew where this was going to. Noop.. they went out looong ago and now I'm going to make it up to by continuing with what I stopped at then.
With this he walked up the stairs to their room and closed the doors.

What happened after that may make you think of yourself hihi..

A/N: Well, I hope you liked it. I've hopefully solved some confusion. Your comments are welcome, I mean it is always good for improvements. There is one more chapter and I hope I can upload it soon! I will not be waiting for you this time. Anyway sorry!

- Trishana

Edited by trishanaksh - 8 years ago

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nakshkidiwani

@nakshkidiwani

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Posted: 8 years ago

#19

aww it was a cute nd lovly story nd part.. loved it trishana so much
omg y u saying like this that story is not gud.. plz write more parts..
u can add love story of naksh how dey falls in love than create a scene between deal..
than nks anger his love care for ak.. it would be great story..
i waana read this read for long dont end this trishana 😊..
loved their love but nks anger like serial reminds me. ak cried so much 😲
wat will happen next plz update next part soon 😳

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trishanaksh

@trishanaksh

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Posted: 8 years ago

#20

Originally posted by: ruchinaksh
aww it was a cute nd lovly story nd part.. loved it trishana so much
omg y u saying like this that story is not gud.. plz write more parts..
u can add love story of naksh how dey falls in love than create a scene between deal..
than nks anger his love care for ak.. it would be great story..
i waana read this read for long dont end this trishana 😊..
loved their love but nks anger like serial reminds me. ak cried so much 😲
wat will happen next plz update next part soon 😳

Thank you so much!

I'm quiet satisfied with the story now and I'm glad that you liked it.

I actually want to keep this story short. It wasn't it intended to be long, so there will be one part. It will be a cute one, I promise 😛. After this I will be back with other stories as I already have some ideas.

And thankyou for your suggestions, they gave me more inspiration!

I will update it as soon as possible.

I'm less active on this forum as I recently joined the Ishqbaaaz's one but I will always remaine a NaKsh fan. So i will update here too and ofcourse read your amazing stories!

- Trishana

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