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Posted: 13 years ago
#51
mayo sory yar 4 the late response...muje patha nahi tha ki tum update kiya hai...plz edit ur title when u update each part like part 4 updated...

loved all the parts...loved ur writng...eagerly waitng 4 ur nxt part
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Posted: 13 years ago
#52
thanks 4 late commenting yaar
mujhe exams hai isliye
nice and versatile writting
love ur ff
update soon
thanks 4 pm
😃
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Posted: 13 years ago
#53
PART 5
so the whole night akshara and naitik lie awake thinking about each other..
in the morning naitik goes downstairs to have breakfast ..
he sees akshara in such a good mood
he decides to have some fun and says : mei ne jo kuch bhi ap se kal kaha woh tou meri galti thi mei kya koi bhi larka ap se kabhi pyar nahi karsakta
akshara😲 her eyes tear up and she says: kia mujh se kuch galti hogaye ?
naitik smiles but then seeing tears falling from her eyes so he quickly holds her hand and takes her outside
naitik: kya hogaya hai apko? ap rou kyun rahi hain, sab dekh lete tou?
akshara: ap ne aisa kyun kaha?
naitik: arey itni si baat par ap rou pari? mei tou mazak kar raha tha!
he laughs
she makes a face. ''mujhe aise mazak ache nahi lagte''
then she gets up and leaves but then she turns around and smiles
naitik smiles back!😃


then rj comes to akshara's room
rj: akshara beta! tum jaldi se tayyar ho jao. aj mehendi hai na aur dekho mei aj subha naitik ke saath jakar tumhare liye ye dress le aye... naitik ne khud pasand kia hai kyun ke usko bura lag raha tha ke uski wajah se tumhara dress kharab ho gaya tha

akshara: sach? she quickly takes it out!! maa mei abhi tayar ho jati hoon
rj goes outside and then ak quickly wears the dress and puts lipgloss and a bit of makeup
and then she looks at herself in the mirror and then she goes outisde
and goes downstairs t
the first thing she looks at naitik in ablack suit and smiles because he looks so handsome

he comes to akshara and says'' kyun, apko apna dress acha laga?''
akshara: apne jo choose kiya tha!😉
naitik smiles and then everyone comes and goes in the car
they take two cars but then they get full and akshara says ''maa mere liye tou jaga hi nahi hai''
rj: tou koi baat nahi beta tum naitik ki gaari mei uske saath ajao na
akshara; ok

she happily goes and sits inside his car on the back seat
naitik: gaari mei koi nahi hai, ap agay akar beth jayen
akshara: aur baaki sub kia sochen ge?
naitik: waise bhi unko lagta hai ke hum dost hain aur kuch nahi!
akshara sits in front..
he drives and then suddenly the car stops and aksharas hand accidently touches naitiks hand which is on the gear
she looks at him (EYELOCK)😳

and then she removes her hand.they reach there!
there varsha's cousins say that they want to play games with the larke wale!!

varsha's cousin divides the teams she puts naitik and akshara in one team and herself and her bro, rituraj in another team
they both have to tie a cloth on their eyes and make the other eat gulab jamun!
naitik quickly ties it around aksharas and his eyes
then ak whispers hame jeetna hi hoga!
then shaurya says ''ready set GO!''
akshara picks up the first gulab jamun and puts it inhis mouth
akshara: ye tou easy hai!
naitik haan then he picks up a gulab jamun and puts it on aksharas nose. akshara gets angry so she puts it on his forehead but they both cant see..and they keep putting the gulab jamun on each others faces😆
then the time gets up and they remove the cloth from their eyes and they see each others faces covered with gulab jamun and they both start laughing
vish and chacha notice this
vish: waise ye dono saath mei ache lagte hain!
chacha: haan sach mei, aj raat ko ghar jake in dono se baat karke dekhain, dekhte hain ye dono raazi hote hain ya nahi!

meanwhile akshara and naitik go to the washroom and wash their faces they both are laughing
naitik washes his hand and sprinkles some water on aksharas face
akshara throws someback
they somehow get wet!
akshara realizes
oh shit ab hum bahar kaise jayen ge! hum tou geele hogaye
naitik says ''chaliye mere saath''
akshara: lekin..
naitik grabs her hand and takes her to the roof where there is lots of wind..
akshara: pata nahi kitni dair lage gi sookhne mei
naitik: aur koi rasta nahi hai
akshara keeps roaming around the roof!
then suddenly naitik comes close to her and he tells her to go downstairs now but her dupaattta gets stuck in his belt while their talking, she starts moving.. and then she realizes she's stuck then she turns around and sees both of them pull away but then naitik pulls a little harder so akshara's whole body is flung on him and he holds her back, she keeps her hands on his back to prevent herself from falling but without realizing they both emerge into a never ending hug with back ground music playing from the mehendi 😳
then suddenly they both hear varsha ''akshara akshara''
they leave each other both looking down not meeting each others eyes!
then akshara slowly untangles and removes her dupatta from his belt
they both look away and akshara goes down
but she's blushing very badly
then varsha sees her and tells her to come with her, varsha takes her where everyone is and whispers in her ear ''kisi pe kya dil agaya hai, kahin us naitik pe tou nahi?''
akshara:'kia ? varsha tu pagal hogaye hai'
varsha: tere gal tou kuch aur hi keh rahe hain
akshara; tu bhi na varsha
and then she goes to the other side
varsha thinks to herself 'koi tou baat hai jo ye mujh se chupa rahi hai'
then naitik comes downstairs as well.. they both just cant bear looking at each other cuz both are madly blushing
shaurya: kia baat hai naitik, itna muskura kyun rahe ho?
akshara giggles!
naitik: woh, mein dance karun ga
akshara: ap aur dance, ap ko tou dance acha nahi lagta tha
naitik: quietly says, apke saath dance karna kis ko acha nahi lage ga!
akshara blushes
then everyone dances on the song 'mehendi laga ke rakhna'
after the mehendi they all go back home!
x THE ENDx


precap: naitik's dad and vish talk to them both about getting married
naitik's reaction: kia?? 🤢
akshara's reaction: mei us bandar se shaadi, kabhi nahi??🤢
why are they both hiding their feelings from their parents
to find out read part 6
will be updated soon
and thanks for the lovely comments you all!!😃

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Posted: 13 years ago
#54
really nice part ..waiting for next
do write soon ..thank u for the PM 😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
#55
Lovely os dear..
keep writingg...i luv it...
Edited by -Naksh4ever- - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
#56
Nyc Part!! :)
Update the next part soon!
Thnx for the PM :)
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Posted: 13 years ago
#57
Nice part
so investing and lovely thing
jamun and upstairs scene is nice
eagerly waiting for next one
thank for pm
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Posted: 13 years ago
#58
nyc part
loved naksh ka romantic scene
naksh r both entirely different frm show
loved ur ff
thanks 4 pm
and 4 ur quick update
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Posted: 13 years ago
#59
Thanks for PM dear &such a awesme part dear...plz cont soon
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Posted: 13 years ago
#60
Awesome part.
Eagerly waiting for the next part.

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