FF: zindagi ke safar mein IMP NOTE ON pg 28!! - Page 4

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Posted: 13 years ago
#31
nice and romantic
so interesting ,
pls try to use less Hindi words
Thnx for the pm
waiting for your next one
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Posted: 13 years ago
#32
Lovely Part!!
All the best for ur ff..! :D
Thnx for the PM! :)
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Posted: 13 years ago
#33
Thanks for PM dear both parts nyccc plz update soon
Edited by sameera_naksh - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
#34
awesome part!!!!
love them 👏
continue soon...
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Posted: 13 years ago
#35
thanks, will update next part soon!!😆
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Posted: 13 years ago
#36
Nyc part dear...
nyc precap...waitin fr d nxt part..
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Posted: 13 years ago
#37
nice part.waiting for next part.
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Posted: 13 years ago
#38

awsome part
thanks for pm
plzzz continue
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Posted: 13 years ago
#39
thanks guys😳
i'll do it tonight hopefully!
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Posted: 13 years ago
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PART 4

so.. after looking at tons of pictures of girls, naitik finally likes a pretty girl, her name is sneha😛
akshara: nahi achi nahi hai
naitik: kitni sundar hai, aur iski smile ek dum WOW!
naitik goes and tells his mom that he likes this girl... she talks to shankri tai who arranges a meeting of both the families.. akshara is in a bad mood the whole day.. especially after seeing how excited naitik is, he keeps coming and asking akshara how he looks..
naitik: acha mei usse kaise kahun ga ke woh mujhe pasand hai, abhi practice karte hain
he sits on his knees and gives akshara a red rose and says 'Kia ap mujh se shaadi karengee?'
for a second akshara forgets that he's just practising and gets lost in her eyes!
naitik: aise kahun?
akshara: haan phir tou woh mana bilkul nahi kar pae gi!
naitik: uff, mei kitna beychain ho raha hoon us se milne ke liye..
akshara just leaves without saying anything.. she doesn't know why she's reacting like this, she's happy that naitik finally likes a girl but why isn't she feeling good! she's confused😕
naitik goes there and meets sneha, she likes him aswell..
he gets back with a very big smile and can't stop smiling.. he tells his mom he likes the girl very much. a few days go by their rishta gets pakka but akshara still feels weird..she falls ill and the doctor is called he says she has to be admitted to the hospital..
meanwhile naitik is going out to the park to meet sneha. he goes to the park but then he gets a call from shaurya saying that akshara is in the hospital and he starts panicking
naitik: sneha, mujhe jana hoga woh akshara..
sneha: woh, apki cousin?
naitik: haan woh hospital mei hai
sneha: tou humari date ka kya, makes a face..
naitik: mujhe jaana hoga
sneha: ap ke liye mujh se bhi zyada zaruri woh akshara hai
naitik: nahi woh .. im sorry
sneha: tou jao! liken ek baat yaad rakhna mei tum se shaadi nahi karun gi
naitik:🤢
sneha: haan mujhe tou aisa pati chahye jiss ki life mei meri importance sab se zyada ho..
naitik is already in so much tension and then this hurts him so much, he says: theek hai. mei jaa raha hoon
he gets in the car and rushes to the hospital
.. he goes inside the ward and finds akshara all pale on the bed. he doesn't know theres a very weird feeling in his heart .. she's sleeping so he quickly closes his eyes takes his hand and says ''i love you'' 😳
and then he goes outside, what he doesn't know is akshara was very much awake only her eyes were closed and she heard his whispering voice saying i love you
she gets so HAPPY all of a sudden!
she realizes he really likes her...it gives her a good feeling
two days later she's discharged from the hospital... she keeps thinking about naitik
he comes to meet her
and he sees the bowl of soup placed on the table untouched he quickly takes the spoon and starts feeding it to her
she's touched by his care!😳
he doesnt meet her eyes on purpose..
rj sees naitik feeding akshara; she smiles..
she comes from the back
naitik gets all confused
and then says: dekhain na maasi ji meri dost apna bilkul khayal nahi rakhti..kitni kamzor hogaye hai
that makes rj thinks their just friendly with each other
then naitik leaves. in afew days time akshara gets normal.. then naitik comes to her room at night and admires her
she's staring out of her window, he stands next to her and says: aisa bhi kya hai bahar jo ap itne gaur se dekh rahi hain
akshara: kuch nahi, main bas kuch soch rahi thi
naitik: kya?
akshara: kyun bataun😉
naitik: waise mei ap ko kuch bataon?
akshara: haan!
naitik: mera aur sneha ka rishta toot gaya
akshara:KYAA!?!
naitik: haan, he tells her what happened
akshara: apne aisa kyun kia? ap us ke paas ruk jaate na, mei jaanti hoon ke ap usko kitna pasand karte hain
naitik: karta tha. aur waise bhi, mei pareshan ho gaya tha
akshara: ap ko inti fikar thi meri?
naitik: haan
akshara changes the topic 'waise aj mausam kitna acha hai!'
naitik puts his finger on her lips and says 'ap se zyada nahi' and
akshara: ap mujhe se aisi baatain kyun kar rahe hain, mujhe ap ke irade theek nahi lag rahe?
naitik: i love you!
akshara almost gets lost in the moment 😳 and then she smiles..
naitik: mei sneha ke saath bhi khush nahi tha, meri zindagi mei koi kami thi! woh aapki thi akshara, jab se mein yahan aya hoon kisi na kisi waja se mera dhyaan apki taraf aya jaraha tha.. aur sach mei mujhe apki hassi aur muskurahat bahut pasand hai
akshara just keeps on blushing
naitik notices so he leaves.
after that he comes and lies down on his bed,he feels so good and relieved by telling her how he feels about her
akshara also lies down on her bed she realizes she really has been waiting to hear this from someone and she's very happy that naitik finally has told her!
she blushes so much thinking about him

PRECAP:
naitik: mei ne kal jo bhi ap se kaha woh sab meri bohot bari galti thi.. main kya koi bhi larka ap se kabhi pyar nahi karsakta
akshara :😭 (heartbroken)

their very first fight after confessing their love. how will they sort it out to find out read part 5!
will be updated soon
xx

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