FF: zindagi ke safar mein IMP NOTE ON pg 28!!

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-Maryam

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Posted: 13 years ago

MY VERY 1ST FF. 😊

HOPE YOU GUYS LOVE IT😃

INDEX:🥱

intro + part 1- pg 1

part 2- pg 3

part 3-pg 4

part4-pg 6

part 5-pg8

part 6-pg 10

part 7-pg 11

part8-pg13

part9-pg15😳

part 10-pg 17

part11-pg 19

part 12-pg 20

part 13-pg 22

part 14-pg 24

part 15-pg26

intro

shaurya and varsha are getting married, so many guests are coming for the wedding..

akshara's chachi and chacha also come from USA along with their son and they stay at their place..

akshara:

she is the same as she is in the serial, just a bit more argumentative and confident..and she is very friendly aswell..she is her parents ladli, unmarried, single girl

naitik:

is from U.S.A, is a sweet guy but he also argues a lot. he is akshara's cousin. a

varsha: akshara's friend and soon to be bhabi

shaurya: akshara's bro, same as in the serial.. is going to get married to akshara's best friend varsha

all the characters are the same but there is no g3, bma, rb, dj 😆

PART 1

akshara is coming home from college.. she is in a very terrible mood

varsha: akshara akshara! kia ho gaya? tera mood itna kharab kyun hai?

akshara gets in the car, varsha sits beside her

varsha: ab kuch bolo bhi

akshara: kya bolun, itna ghussa araha hai mujhe maa'm par! maine project ke liye itni mehnat ki thi jab bhi un ho ne mujhe us par C diya hai

she reaches her house and gets off the car..

varsha: ye lo akshara juice peelo, itna ghussa mat karo. ek bekaar sa project hi tou tha

akshara: nahi chahye mujhe!

varsha puts the glass in her hand forcefully..

then akshara is about to enter from the gate when a young guy about two three years older than her stops her..

he says ' ap andar nahi jaa sakti? ap kon hain?'

akshara: hato mere raste se ( she thinks he's some hooligan from outside)

he doesnt move, and says: mei apko andar nahi jaane desakta.. apko kiss se milna hai?

akshara: kiss se milna hai kya matlab ye mera ghar hai

he still doesnt move so she spills the orange juice on his face and goes inside, varsha is shocked but she follows her..

akshara: pata nahi kon pagal tha. she is very furious.

varsha: akshara, calm down!

then varsha goes home..

akshara cools down in a while listening to music

then suddenly dhaniya comes

"akshara didi, ap ko bari maa neeche bula rahi hain"

akshara: acha baba, arahi hoon

she goes downstairs and meets her chachi and chacha and greets them 😊

then they introduce her to her cousin,..she looks at him and her mind goes completely blank...

...

its the same guy she threw the juice at! 😲😲

he says ' yeh tou wohi.. wohi'

vish asks: kon woh?

he's about to tell everyone that shes the one who threw juice at him but then he looks at her face which has an expression which makes him think that shes sorry so he decided not to tell everyone

and says 'wohi jo mujhe gate pe mili thi'

chacha: acha tou ap dono pehle hi mil chuke hain

the elders go and sit in the hall

then chacha tells vish that this time he intends to stay for much longer and they want to get their son married to some indian girl.. chachi tells rj that she talked to shankri tai to find some suitable girl

rj says: haan ye tou bohot achi baat hai

meanwhile akshara meets her cousin

he puts his hand forward and tells his name ''NAITIK''

akshara shakes it and says ''akshara''

akshara: woh i'm sorry about the juice actually us waqt mei bohot ghusse mei thi..

naitik: acha tou ye baat thi

akshara: sorry,and thanks for not telling bauji warna aj tou meri shamat ajati 😛

naitik(giggles)

akshara: ok see u!

then she leaves for varsha's housee..

she tells her how the guy she threw her juice on was naitik her cousin😆

akshara: waise bhabi ji apke mehendi ke kapre ban ke aye ya nahi?

varsha:haan nanad ji agaye! aur maa ne tou tere liye bhi ek jora banwaya hai

akshara: arre! uski kya zarurat thi

varsha's mom comes from behind

and says: zarurat nahi thi liken tum tou meri beti jaise ho aur mera mann tha

and she shows akshara the clothes,

akshara: wow masi ji! ye tou bohot sundar hai😊

she gives her a hug

and happily goes back home with her clothes

its a very nice green coloured lengha...

xTHE ENDx

to be continued soon😊

-all comments are welcome

love, mayooo😳

PRECAP: NAITIK ACCIDENTLY DROPS DARK BLACK INK ON AKSHARA'S MEHENDI DRESS...

Edited by Mayo2424 - 13 years ago

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sonu.

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Posted: 13 years ago

hey grt introduction.,very wll written..
Per if naksh r cusin's how can thy becum couple,,???

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Sakshi

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Posted: 13 years ago

vry well written..
naksh cousins hain??????agar wo cousins hain to unme pyar kaise ho skta hai??

Edited by -Naksh4ever- - 13 years ago

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Divya

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Posted: 13 years ago

Heya gr8 introduction!!!!
N tnx for d PM
r naksh cousins????then how can they be a couple??????

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kumaran

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Posted: 13 years ago

Nice introduction
super but nakash are cousin how ?

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Sameera Badar

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Posted: 13 years ago

Nyccc FF dear plz ryt next part soon...i wish in ur FF Akshara married to Naitik

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sona_naksh

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Posted: 13 years ago

Nice intro but naksh cannot b cousins ...

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-Maryam

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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: kumarandils
Nice introduction
super but nakash are cousin how ?

thanks😳

and about that, i dont think everyone absorbed the idea of them being cousins .. but in many countries cousins do fall in love and get married, same will happen here so just wait and see how it does!

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-Maryam

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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: -Naksh4ever-
Btw thnx fr d pm..

no problem😊

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-Maryam

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Posted: 13 years ago

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Originally posted by: kumarandils
Nice introduction
super but nakash are cousin how ?

thanks😳

and about that, i dont think everyone absorbed the idea of them being cousins .. but in many countries cousins do fall in love and get married, same will happen here so just wait and see how it does!