FF: zindagi ke safar mein IMP NOTE ON pg 28!!

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-Maryam

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Posted: 13 years ago

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all of you guys have the same query that how can naksh be cousins

but dont cousins fall in love and get married, i dont know about india but it does happen in other countries.. and well you guys should take their relation as complete strangers because they have never met before so they dont exactly know each other or share the sister-brother relationship

wait and see how things will change later on in the FF. this was just the start, lots of things will change..between them

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-Maryam

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Posted: 13 years ago

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thanks all those who liked it!😊

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-Maryam

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Posted: 13 years ago

#13

Originally posted by: rasmi24
nice intro
thnx for pm

thanks rasmi😃

no problem❤️

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ammu4u

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Posted: 13 years ago

#14

hey mayo...nice os...loed the introductn n ist part...
do continnue soon

acha hua ki u avois saare ss pagals😆

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ANN91

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Posted: 13 years ago

#15

nice ff
continue ur ff
waiting 4 next part
and hanks 4 pm me 😃

Edited by ANN91 - 13 years ago

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-Maryam

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Posted: 13 years ago

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Originally posted by: ammu4u
hey mayo...nice os...loed the introductn n ist part...
do continnue soon

acha hua ki u avois saare ss pagals😆

lol thanks yes, i know the ss pagals make everything boring😆

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-Maryam

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Posted: 13 years ago

#17

Originally posted by: ANN91
nice ff
continue ur ff
waiting 4 next part
and hanks 4 pm me 😃

thanks ill update it by tonight hopefullyyy😆 np!

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kumaran

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Posted: 13 years ago

#18

Originally posted by: Mayo2424

thanks😳
and about that, i dont think everyone absorbed the idea of them being cousins .. but in many countries cousins do fall in love and get married, same will happen here so just wait and see how it does!

Wow lot of twist
eagerly waiting for your next one friend

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-Maryam

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Posted: 13 years ago

#19

so here goes,

PART 2

akshara comes home with her dress and shows it to everyone.. rj takes her on a side and tells her that the guests intend on staying for a long period of time so she will have to shift to the basement

akshara: kiya maa? agar woh log ruk rahe hain tou mei kyun shift hoon😡

rj:beta zid nahi karo,mehman hain acha nahi lagta ... balke dhaniya ne tou tumhari cheezain basement mei bhi rakh di

akshara: kia maa😭

it turns out that naitik is getting her room..

rj; sirf tumhari desk par rakhi hui cheezain nahi hataye, tum khud dekhlo

akshara makes a face and goes upstairs and takes out 4 books she keeps her dress on the bed and takes the books downstairs then she goes and picks her other two books and the dress then naitik comes and decides to help her.. he picks up the stationary and takes it after her but on the stairs akshara's foot slips and to help her naitik drops the stationary but he doesnt notice that black ink from the ink pot spills on her new dress. akshara gets very angry and sad.. she screams on him '' tumhari waja se mera poora naya dress kharab ho gaya''

rj comes, and says ''kia hogaya''

ak shows her the dress,

rj: koi baat nahi beta, aise nahi baat karte kisi se.. hum tumhare liye naya dress le ayenge

akshara gives him a stare and leaves

naitik feels very guilty so he decides to go and apologize but when he gets to the basement he sees akshara talking to varsha

akshara: pata nahi kaise pagal larka hai!?! mera dress khrab kardiya

varsha: relax karo akshara!!

naitik feels even worse and goes back

akshara decides to take revenge from naitik so what she does is she goes in his room and sees a suit on his bed, she picks up his tie and hides it and replaces it with a black tie with stupid silly smiley faces on it .. but akshara doesnt know that he has to meet a girl today for marriage

he comes up in ahurry and without noticing wears it..

he goes with his parents to the girls house, his parents like the girl but he doesnt

when they go to the terrace to talk alone. she gets all weird and tries to flirt with him thinking he's an american guy and he would like all this but she doesn't know being american he is so bhola then she looks at his tie and screams ''eww! what a horrible tie!'' she goes outside and says no for marriage..

naitik looks at his tie and laughs, thinking how he wore it and gets happy that atleast he wont have to marry this weird girl...

akshara is sitting on the stairs and she giggles again and says ''nice tie''..

naitik: tou ye ap ne rakhi thi?

akshara : hahaha! ye dekh ke tou koi bhi larki ap ko reject karde gi!

naitik: waise iss ke liye mei ap ko thank you kahun ga

akshara: thankyou? woh kyun?

naitik: asal mei woh larki bohot ajeeb thi, pata nahi mom dad meri yahan ki kisi larki se kyun shaadi kar wana chahte hain, mei wahin koi larki dhoond leta

akshara: acha

naitik: haan waise bhi yahan ki larkiyan kitni ajeeb hoti hain, american larke ko dekh kar flirt karna shuru hogaye

akshara: aisi koi baat nahi hai, yahan kuch bohot achi acha larkiyan bhi hain.. aur saari larkian ek jaisee nahi hoti...american larke itne bhi ache nahi hote.. ap ye khush fehmy apne mann se nikal dije

just then shaurya comes from behind and says ''ap dono ki dosti hogaye?''

akshara: haan shayad (laughs)

naitik smiles.

shaurya: chalo akshara varsha ko bulalo hum sub ice-cream khane chalte hain

akshara: dadu ice-cream tou ek bahana hai 😆

shaurya: jee nahi pagli😛

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