FF: zindagi ke safar mein IMP NOTE ON pg 28!! - Page 3

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.Divyaa. thumbnail
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Posted: 13 years ago
#21
Awesome part...
I loved d precap...
Thanks for d PM...
Update soon...
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Posted: 13 years ago
#22
thanks 4 pm
its really a nice concept
plz continue ur ff
waiting 4 next part
awesome ff

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Posted: 13 years ago
#23
i dont read ff but i was bored so opened your's up great intro thank god ss family arent in here 😆 naksh cousins i dont find it weird cause my parents are first cousins and were comp strangers and fell in love 😆 loved the first 2 parts hehe akshi replaces his tie chalo it was good for natik atleast they talked friendly precap looks good cont soon
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Posted: 13 years ago
#24
Awesome part mayo...
waiting fr d nxt part...
thnx fr d pm...
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Posted: 13 years ago
#25
super nice intro of naksh and tie game
pre cape super nice touch
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Posted: 13 years ago
#26
thanks everyoneee!! i will update next part soon😉
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Posted: 13 years ago
#27
thnx for pm
nice part
waiting for next part

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Posted: 13 years ago
#28
here goes


PART 3
naitik, shaurya, akshara and varsha leave for ice-cream. varsha sits next to shaurya in front and naksh are in the back seat!
they go to the ice-cream parlour..
they are ordering.. shaurya says 'strawberry'
varsha says 'vanilla' and then naitik and akshara together say 'chocolate'
akshara: ap ko bhi chocolate pasand hai?
naitik: haan bohot!😃
then what happens they decide to take their cups of ice-creams outside to a park nearby..they pay and leave..
varsha : akshara woh dekho RABBIT!
akshara: kahan, she quickly puts some ice-cream on akshara's face..
akshara notices after she feels something cold on her face
akshara: varsha! pagli,and she runs after varsha: hahaha!
akshara pretends like she's gotten hurt so varsha stops running and comes to see, then suddenly akshara puts the chocolate ice-cream on varsha's face.
they then go back to where the boys are sitting
varsha: dekha shaurya! apki behen kitni bari dramay baaz hai.
akshara: akhir behen kiss ki hoon😛
naitik is observing all this and he's noticing how akshara is so cool and chilled out.. not bothered about the rest of the world, he begins to notice her more..
when they go home, naitik keeps thinking about her and her smile.. he's a little spell bound. he's thinking about her when he hears a laughing sound he realizes it's aksharas.. he goes outside and sees her sitting in the garden with anshu.. he also begins to think about how attached she is to everyone in the house.
in the morning, he wakes up and he thinks that maybe yesterday he was too free thats why he started thinking all this! he doesn't think he likes her, he just likes her way of interacting with people.. but he isn't able to accept that he likes her
then he goes downstairs and sees akshara dancing.. he freaks out🤢
then akshara sees him and says ''aao! naitik hum dadu key sangeet ke liye practice kar rahe hain''
naitik: mei dance nahi karta
akshara: tum kitne bore ho!
naitik: bore tou nahi hoon bas mujhe dance karna acha nahi lagta
akshara: liken dance karte huwe kitna acha lagta hai, poori dunya ko bhool kar ke..gaane me kho jane kar jhoomne ka maza hi kuch aur hai
naitik: zyada filmi dialouges mat maro!
akshara:😡
just then it starts to rain
akshara starts jumping
chalo naitik bahar chalte hain!
naitik: mei geela ho jaun ga.
akshara: tou? pagal ho gaye ho kya! itna maza ata hai baarish mei
naitik: nahi, ap chali jaao!
akshara: ap ko baarish achi nahi lagti?
naitik: theek lagti hai liken wahan U.S mei tou har roz ki baat hai baarish
akshara: sach? agar mei U.S mei rehti tou mei tou har roz baarish mei nahati!
naitik: ye sirf kehne ki baat hai, har roz ko kiss ko bheegna acha lagta hai
akshara; mei sach keh rahi hoon!
she drags him outside and says:
tum U.S ki baarish mein bheege hoge yahan ki baarish mei bheeg kar tou dekho.
he goes outside and sits under a shed so he doesnt get wet where as akshara on the other hand is completely soaked with water. just then a few cheap guys go on a bike in front of them they see akshara and start whistling..naitik comes and tells akshara to go inside.
they both go inside,
akshara: aise dekhte hain jaise ke kabhi kisi larki ko kabhi nahi dekha.. itna ghussa ata hai mujhe aise larko par!
naitik: haan, sach mei woh larkion ki bilkul izzat nahi karte.
akshara gets touched by what he says
and says '' aur ap karte hain larkion ki izzat?''
naitik: haan bilkul..meri maa bhi ek aurat ya larki hain aur mera maanna hai ke har larki izzat deserve karti hai
akshara gets impressed
then she goes upstairs and thinks about what he said, she realizes that american boys aren't so bad after all..

the next day, akshara goes and asks him ''tou kitni girlfriends thi america mei?''
naitik ''ap kuch zyada hi frank nahi hain''
akshara: haan, maa bhi yehi kehti hain ke mere moon mei jo ata hai woh mei bol deti hoon
naitik: woh tou dikh raha hai
akshara: kiya matlab hai apka? waise ap ne mere sawal ka jawab nahi diya?
naitik: wahan ki larkiyan tou mujh par fida thi lekin mujhe hi koi achi nahi lagi aj tak..
akshara: kia baat hai!
naitik: mei chalta hoon.. mujhe maa ne kuch larkion ki pictures dekhani hain
akshara: tou un pictures ko yahin lekar aao, saath mei dekhte hain..mei tumhe help kardoon gi😛
naitik: acha
he brings the folder
and akshara brings popcorn they both sit and observe every girl like theyre watching some movie, they talk abt each and everygirl.. then comes on the next page a very fat girl..
naitik: uff! mei kabhi itni moti larki se shaadi nahi karun ga
akshara: moti hai tou kya hua? tumhare saath buri nahi lagrahi
she teases him.. they dont even realize but the whole afternoon goes by...and then when clock strikes 5 they both get up.
akshara: chachi se kahun gi ke ye moti larki bohot achi hai aur tumhare liye bilkul perfect hai
naitik: tum aisa kuch nahi karo gi
he starts snatching the folder from her but accidently akshara's foot slips and she falls down, naitik's feet get entangled with akshara's and he falls on her. this the first time their hands touch.. they both feel the feeling but then naitik gets up feeling awkward

PRECAP: NAITIK SAYS :KIYA AP MUJH SE SHAADI KARENGEE TO AKSHARA?😲😲😲

PART 4 will be updated soon

HOW does AKSHARA REACT TO THIS?
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Posted: 13 years ago
#29
Awesome part...
Luvd it...
Superb precap...
Waiting for d next part...
Continue soon...
Tnx for d pm...
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Posted: 13 years ago
#30

Awesum part...so both ve started observing each other wowww...
Waiting for d next part...
Do update soon...
Thnx for d pm...

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