My First FF-In Lamhon ke Daaman Mein- Pt12 @ Pg134 - Page 7

Originally posted by: saru.g

oh woww... u imagined now itself... 😆😆... then make their marriage fast n then write it... write it now itself n keep it aside or else u'll forget later... 😆😆... btw I'm glad u liked it...

lolzz.. yup di.. i was imagining wat u wrote.. and then thot chal na mere ff ki SR bhi imagine kar lun.. omg.. its sooo romantic!

Originally posted by: fazeel

wow saru your ff was nice yaar

i loved each and very line of your ff and i imagining all scence yaar

akshara was also going with gay3 on godhbahrai you dont mention

kya tha use letter may naitik uthna shock hogaya yaar wiating for next part tum b serial thara suspence may chodiya yaar any ways waitng for next part

really saru it do not look like first ff you done fab job 👏yaar

no yaar... akshi is not going with gayatri... naitik said they will stay naa... all of them will go expect naksh... mein kaise akshi ko bhejtha hu leaving our munna alone????? 😃... no way...
n to know what it in the letter that naitik gets shocked instead of surprising is suspense... u have to see it in nxt part... n btw... thanku so much for loving my part... 😃

Originally posted by: stuti_naksh4eva

lolzz.. yup di.. i was imagining wat u wrote.. and then thot chal na mere ff ki SR bhi imagine kar lun.. omg.. its sooo romantic!

haa write it soon... n update ur ff fast... I am waiting for it...

Gr8 start saru di.it is simple nd beautiful.ur naksh nd yrkkh naksh r same na.if cvs chahe tho aapke ff ko copy kar sakthe hai.kya kehte hai di?koi copyright tho nahi hai na?aapne jo bhi likha hai wo sab mein apne aankhon se dekh bhi li.u r a gud writer di.u have a gud imaginative power,that reflects in ur ff.i luvd naksh's dood peene ka scene.i always expect this scene in yr.whenever akshi naitik ko dood lekar aa jathi thi muje lagtha tha ki ab ye scene milegi.lekin ab tak nahi mili.lekin aapne meri wo icha bhi poori ki.show mein bhi ye mila tho im too happy.naksh's convo also vry beautiful.each nd every line of them was so true.morning scene is also too cute.akshi naitik k cute face dekhkar baitthe hai,wow i luvd it.kiss nd hug was super cute.ab naitik k bahana.muje laga shayad naitik button thod dega,usse bhi acha scene milega na.lekin apne my expectation se bhi zyada acha scene dikha di.happy that us bandariya kuch tho kaam aayi.ab sirf naksh.soch kar hi goosebumps ho rahi hai.i have full faith in ur saru di,u will definitely give us a naksh treat.sach bathau di,im not at all tensed abt akshi's letter.but naitik shocked kyun huyi ye bahut jald hi pata chalega tho acha hoga.i think u understand what i wanted 2 say.der4 w8ing di.one more thing ur typing presentation is attractive.luvd d font nd color.thanku so much 4 d pm.(ps-i wanted 2 give u a longer commen.der4 i reserved d post.how is it?)

Originally posted by: saru.g

haa write it soon... n update ur ff fast... I am waiting for it...

ill update soon!

now saru dont say that u r nt a good writer,,,,,u hav written so nicely...👏⭐️⭐️👏👏👏👏

naksh as usual r brilliant😳,,,aksharas concern fr naitik is so good...☺️
singhaniyas goin out is simply gr8,,,,,naksh alone😍😍,,,ur nxt part will be so mch awesum,,,no doubt in it...😆😆,,,n ur endin is also so nyc,,,,leavin suspence fr us...😉nw jst want 2 know wat is on the letter...😍😍
so continue soon,,,,,😃

ss.. check ur fb chat box!

saru awesome update dear 👏 i loved it...oh so bandaria ki godbharai keliye pure ss khandan jaa rahe hai...sirf apne naksh ko chodke 😍 kuch milega na😉 continue soon...tum tho mujhe tension mein daal diya...vo letter mein aisa kya hai...pm karke bata dena 😛

Originally posted by: pvlaks

saru awesome update dear 👏 i loved it...oh so bandaria ki godbharai keliye pure ss khandan jaa rahe hai...sirf apne naksh ko chodke 😍 kuch milega na😉 continue soon...tum tho mujhe tension mein daal diya...vo letter mein aisa kya hai...pm karke bata dena 😛

haa lakshmi di... this bindiya is coming to ss n staying for months here... then I thought y dont these singhania's go there n stay there for atlest 4 days... so sent them there... now my naksh r alone... thanku for liking it di... dont worry di... u'll get something... n haa for that shocked part u have wait till my nxt part comes... it is a suspense...

gud start...😛 now naksh r alone @ home waiting for tere romantic scenes...😳