My First FF-In Lamhon ke Daaman Mein- Pt12 @ Pg134 - Page 6

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Posted: 14 years ago
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good intro, continue soon.keep rocking
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Thanku so much for ur lovely comments guys... these really encourages me in doing better parts... n not only comments ur valuable suggestions are also welcomed...😊
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Originally posted by: saru.g

Thanku so much for ur lovely comments guys... these really encourages me in doing better parts... n not only comments ur valuable suggestions are also welcomed...😊

ur welcome ss... lolzzz... c told u na.. sab ko achcha lagega!😉
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Originally posted by: stuti_naksh4eva

ur welcome ss... lolzzz... c told u na.. sab ko achcha lagega!😉


haa chotu... u told... n so sweet of for many things... but no thanks for u... lol...😆😆
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Part 1:

Naksh in their room: Akshara and naitik were so tired looking after relatives and the arrangements for rashmi's marriage. Akshara gets a glass of milk for naitik.

Akshara: aaj aap bahuth thak chuke honge... ee doodh peelijiyee... aur aaram se so jaiye... (she gives him milk)

Naitik haves a sip...

Naitik: aap bhi bahuth thak gaye honge...hum doodh share karenge...

Akshara: nahi naitik mera man nahi hai...aap peelijiye...

Naitk: chaliye... aap nahi peeyenge toh mein bhi nahi peeuungi...he makes a fake anger face...

Akshara: acha teek hai... aap naaraz math hoyiye.. mein peelungi...

They both share the milk together by looking into each other's eyes...

Naitik: Akshara... mein ek baath kehna hi bhool gaya...

Akshara: kya???😕

Naitik: aaj aap bahuth sundar hai... who sky blue color lehanga aap par bahuth jaj rahe hai... aap roj roj itni sundar kaise dikhthe hai... I can't turn my eyes from u... bas subah se mein aapko dekhne mein bahuth busy hu...

Akshara: dhatt... 😳☺️

Naitik: aap ko dekh kar hamari shadi ka din yaad aagaya... aap kithne sundhar the us din... aapka who sundhar sa chehra mujhe abhi bhi mere aankhon ke saamne hi hai... aap bilkul nahi badali... wahi sharamana... wahi muskaan' wahi sundarta' wahi bholapan... ab bas mein yeh zindagi aapko isi tarah dekthe hi bitha saktha hu...

Akshara: par naitik aap mein bahuth badlaav hai... who mein mehsoos kar rahi hu... aap mujhe abhi ache tarah se samajhthe hai' aapne apna gussa bilkul chod diya mere liye...mein bahuth lucky hu naitik...

Naitik: aapne mujhe badal dia akshara... maine aapko kayi baar rula diya... mein...

Akshara stops him...

Akshara: naitik.. woh sab chodiye.... Mein aaj bahuth khush hu...

Naitik: Mein bhi...

N they both hug.... 😳

Naitik says he has a very important meeting in the ofc tomorrow and asks akshara to wake up early as he has to prepare some documents.

Next morning: Akshara wakes up at 5AM n wakes up naitik too. As usual he won't wake up. So akshara goes to get some chai n then wake him up. Akshara gets the chai n tries to wake up naitik again. He doesn't respond. So she think to burn his hand in chai as she everyday does. But while keeping naitik's finger in the chai she sees naitik's cute face while sleeping and she starts starring at him adoring his cuteness while sleeping. So she thinks to wake him up with love. So she bends and gently kisses naitik on his fore head and when she about to straighten naitik pulls akshi towards him. Akshara tries to get out of his arms. But naitik tightly catches her and kisses her on his cheek. Akshara blushes.

Naitik: aaj bhi meri biwi nayi dulhan ki tarah sharmathe hai...

Akshara: dhatt...Aap bhi na...mujhe chodiyee... aur jaldi uthiye.... Aap bhi toh kaha hai naa aapko important meeting hai...Toh woh meeting keliye achese prepare hojayiye...

Naitik smiles n leaves her...

After that akshara goes near the shelf and takes naitik's clothes. DJ comes and ask's naitik about the documents he has to prepare. He says he was about to finish them and he will show him as soon as he finishes. DJ says to prepare the documents good and prepare for the meeting well as they are going to meet a very important client in the office. Naitik prepares his documents within an hour and gets ready for office.

Akshara is in the kitchen busy in preparing lunch box for the men. Naitik wants to talk to akshara and wants her to wish him all d best as he has very important meeting that day. So he calls akshara making his regular bahana that the button was gone and needs to be stitched. Akshara comes to their room.

Naksh room: Akshi comes with thread n needle and she finds that all the buttons are alright.

Naitik : "what to do? I need to make a bahana to talk with my wife for some time. So told like this."

Akshi : "acha! Yeh bahana tha... aap bhi na naitik... mujhe kitchen mein bahuth kaam pada hai, aap jaldi tayyar hokar niche aayiye... mein aapkeliya naashtha tayyar kartha hu.."

Naitik again caught hold of her n says that akshi is looking so beautiful today. Akshi blushes n asks what is the reason he called akshi for. Naitik says he has an important meeting today so he asks akshara to wish him good luck with a smile as her smile is his strength and he can get success in everything with akshi's sweet smile. Akshi's blushes and then wishes him all d best with a sweet smile ... he says he wanted her to wish differently. Akshi asks what to do... naitik says he is not going to say anything this time n akshi has to understand by herself.. akshi thinks for a second n says "mujhe patha hai aapko kaise wish karna pasand hai... " akshi kisses him on his forehead n then on his both cheeks and comes near his lips. Naitik was exited. But akshi simply smiles and says all d best n then laughs... naitik was disappointed at first but then laughs seeing akshara laughing... n then both hug.

Again Akshara comes to kitchen n starts preparing nashta... she thinks that she hadn't concentrated on naitik these days as she was very busy in rashmi's marriage preparations. She feels very lucky to have a husband like naitik who is very understanding and supporting all the times. She thinks that Naitik didn't even get irritated with me though I haven't concentrated on him. This is the time for me to do something for naitik now. She thinks to prepare all naitik's favourite dishes for dinner and then thinks to plan something special for naitik.

Gayatri comes n enquires about the breakfast and also asks about the arrangements as rashmi is coming for phag pehera rasam. Akshi says that everything is ready and no need to worry.

Just then singhania land line phone rings. Gayatri lifts and finds that it is rituraj's mother on the line. She invites all the singhania's for bindiya's godhbharai and says that everyone has to come for godhbharai compulsorily and has to come there 2 days before and stay there for atleast one week as they always comes for singhania house functions n stays there for more days n this time this is singhania's turn to come to their house. Gayatri agrees and keeps the fone.

Gayatri informs to this all the people in the house. DJ says they had important work in the ofc n he says someone has to stay here and look after here. Naitik says he'll look after everything and they can go for rituraj's house. DJ agrees and asks akshara to stay here itself for munna n then says to all that they can leave for Jaipur today eveng after their coming from ofc. Akshara and Naitik look at each other happily. Akshi goes inside the kitchen wirtes something on the paper and keeps it in the naitik's box.

All the men have breakfast n leaves for office. Mean while rashmi comes for pag phere rasm n leaves immediately after having lunch as they have to make preparations for their going to USA.

Akshara is waiting for naitik call... but naitik is busy in the meeting from morning....so she worries whether she had kept the letter in the right box or not. Its already 2 in the afternoon. AKshara becomes more worried and decides to call by herself. She calls naitik. But naitik was still in the meeting and his fone was kept silent. So he couldn't see the call. Akshara calls naitik many times but gets no response. Naitik's meeting completes late in the afternoon at 3PM. He opens his lunch box and surprised to find a letter in his box. He was so exited to read the letter as he knows that it was written by his beloved wife. He eagerly opens the letter.

Precap: Naitik is shocked reading first line of the letter.

Edited by saru.g - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
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res!
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di.. aapne kuch add kiya hai? toh mein padhu.. waise i have read it twice😆

awesome part ss! loved it.. waiting for 3rd part...

btw di... i imagined naksh sr today... for my ff... u ppl will become red reading it
Edited by stuti_naksh4eva - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
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wow saru your ff was nice yaar

i loved each and very line of your ff and i imagining all scence yaar
akshara was also going with gay3 on godhbahrai you dont mention
kya tha use letter may naitik uthna shock hogaya yaar wiating for next part tum b serial thara suspence may chodiya yaar any ways waitng for next part
really saru it do not look like first ff you done fab job 👏yaar
Edited by fazeel - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
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hehe... 😆😆... I'm editing it yaar... first time editing naa... so it took more time for me...
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Posted: 14 years ago
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👏 woow what a start...👏👏 great...wasie akshi ne kya plan hai...truly very nice...keep it up Saru...
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Originally posted by: stuti_naksh4eva

res!
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di.. aapne kuch add kiya hai? toh mein padhu.. waise i have read it twice😆

awesome part ss! loved it.. waiting for 3rd part...

btw di... i imagined naksh sr today... for my ff... u ppl will become red reading it


oh woww... u imagined now itself... 😆😆... then make their marriage fast n then write it... write it now itself n keep it aside or else u'll forget later... 😆😆... btw I'm glad u liked it...

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