hamaara pyaar...part-10..pg-37..updated - Page 10

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Posted: 15 years ago
#91

Originally posted by: Drishti...

hey shama!!!...first of all im rlly rlly sorry for commenting soooo late...but i think u knw i was out of town :D

i read both the parts and liked them soooooooo much...they were rlly rlly good...keep it up
and im eagerly waiting for their romance ;)...awww wow!
thanks :)

its ok drishti....i can understand......😊
thanks a lot my friend..........🤗....will try 2 update it soon.....😊
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Posted: 15 years ago
#92

Originally posted by: shamasallfav

its ok drishti....i can understand......😊
thanks a lot my friend..........🤗....will try 2 update it soon.....😊

awww thnku so much for understanding Smile
ure most welcome shama...n u write rlly well 😃
yaa pls try to update soon
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Posted: 15 years ago
#93
amazing update dear........
do cont soon........
and dont forget to pm me
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Posted: 15 years ago
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hey shama...
awesum update yar.!!
loved it truly...
next part wud be a lot more interesting..
waiting eagerly.. continue soon.!!!
take care..
bi.!!!
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Originally posted by: aksharasingania

amazing update dear........

do cont soon........
and dont forget to pm me

thank u so...much shreya🤗....
will surely PM u.......😊
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Originally posted by: Nakshilu

hey pls update soon 😊

thnx friend.......will try 2 update it soon........😊
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Originally posted by: moonlight08

hey shama...

awesum update yar.!!
loved it truly...
next part wud be a lot more interesting..
waiting eagerly.. continue soon.!!!
take care..
bi.!!!

thank u soo.....much.....🤗....
hm...will try 2 make it better......😊
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Thanks to all 4 supporting and encouraging me by pressing like button n by leaving ur precious comments'.hope ur encouragement and support will be there till the end'once again thnx 2 all'.

PART-4

(akshara busy in the kitchen'n suddenly naitik's voice raises up')

N:akshara'.,akshara'.

A:naitik..? aur abhi??

N:akshara'..

A:naitik..??aap yaha kaise? Aap office se itni jaldi kyun aagayi..?aap tho abhi gaye the na'aur daddaji aur bavuji voh log kaha hai'??aap kuch bol kyun nahi rahi naitik?

N:aap agar mujhe bolne degi thabhi tho kuch bol paoongi'voh akshara meri bohoth zor se sir dard ho rahi thi aur phir daddaji ne kaha ki khar jaakar aaraam karo'

A:kya..? ..lekin aise achaanak se kaisi sir dard'

N:pata nahi akshara'.bohoth zor se dard kar rahi hai'( )

A:accha naitik aap yahi beithiye mein abhi baam leke aathi hoon'

N:nahi akshara'mein aaraam karne ke liye kamre mein jaa rahi hoon'aap vaha aayiye'

A:theek hai naitik'mein abhi aathi hoon'

N:hmm'.

(naitik lying down in their bed in NAKSH room')

N:ye akshara bhi..kaha tha ki abhi aayegi'lekin'

(akshara enters 2 the room)

N:akshara aap itni der thak kya kar rahi thi?

A:voh mein maa ki kamre mein baam dhoond rahi thi'accha naitik mein aapki sir maalish kar dethi hoon'kam ho jaayegi..

(naitik keeps his head in her lap n she starts putting baam n suddenly naitik holds her hand and says')

N:akshara,agar mujhe pata hotha ki sar dard hone par kisise itna aaraam miltha hai tho kash ye dard roz aayi hoti'

A:matlab??

N:matlab' ' .matlab' kuch nahi akshara mein tho bas aise hi'.

A:accha..tho sar dard ki bahaana kar ke office se choron ki tarah bhaag ke aayi hai'ha??

(n she pulls him from her lap..)

N:kya akshara meri tho sach mein bohoth sir dard ho rahi hai'

A:ab tho mein sab jaan gayi hoon'ab aap uthiye aur office chali jayiye'

N:kya akshara'daddaji khud mujhe bejha hai'phir aap dar kyun rahi hai'

A:accha..tho aapne unse kya kehke aayi hai'ki mujhe apni beevi ke saath ghar mein beithna hai'ha??

N:kya akshara'aap bhi'

(now she pulls him towards the door..but he holds her hand n says')

N:soch lijiye akshara'aise mauke baar baar nahi aathi'

A:(in her shy expression she says)dhak'

N:kya dhak akshara'aap aayiye'

(n he takes her into the bed n naitik lays down on the bed n he holds akshara's hand around him' )

N:akshara'kitni dinon ke baad hum aise akele saath mein beithkar thoda pal bithaarahi hai na..

A:ha naitik'.itni din sablog kitna pareshaan raha'aur aap bhi tho din raath kaise maayoos rehthi thi'

N:lekin ab sab theek ho gayi hai na'aur ab tho mein bhi bohoth ghush hoon..kyunki aap meri paas hai'(he suddenly gets up n asks akshara..)aap mere saath mere paas hamesha rahegi na akshara'?

A:ha naitik'hamesha..har pal har mod mein, main aapke saath rahoongi'zindgi mein chaahe jaisa bhi mod aaye mein aapka saath kabhi nahi chodungi'ye aapse meri vaada hai'zindgi bhar ke liye'

(n they hugs each other with lots of love n trust in between'. n naitik kisses to her 4head' )

N:I luv u akshara'

A:I luv u too naitik'(n then she hugs him..)

N:akshara..,ye pyaar bhi kitne ajeeb hote hai na'

A:ha naitik'voh sirf ek baar hi hota hai'aur jab voh hota hai tho voh do pyaar karne waale poore duniya bhool kar ek dusre ki khayaalon mein khoye beiththe hai'

N:accha tho aap itni achi se bathaa rahi hon tho kya aapko kabhi kisise pyaar hua hai (he asks in his naughty shaghty smile 😉 to akshara..)

Romance and akshara's answer will be continued'''.

Hope u ll lyk it'if u lyk it then pls press LIKE button'n ur comments n suggestions r always welcome'

Thank u'..

Regards shama'..

Edited by shamasallfav - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
#99

yay!!!!....im the first one to comment!..hurray

the update wass rlly rlly good shama...keep it up
i rlly liked it...sooo romantic 😳 👏 😊
Edited by Drishti... - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
awesomeeeeeee am
so romantic 😳
cont soon 😍

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