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Posted: 16 years ago

#321

may your friend sister will be alright soon!!great story.....yar i can imagine this all !!!!!!!!this is so good!!!!plz update soon...............great job...................................

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rbb88

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Posted: 16 years ago

#322

As usual the best one...looking forward to read next part.

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Tafseer

@Tafseer

Stunner

Posted: 16 years ago

#323

it was a sweet n cute update ...a very nice part..........
sorry 4 late reply.coz i was very busy these days........
i hate Simran.........y she always enter their room???? chalo will be waiting 4 da next step of Simran........

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ZumSrK.

@ZumSrK.

Stunner

Posted: 16 years ago

#324

it was really good...conyinue soon..

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Richa

@cutie_pie21

Voyager

Posted: 16 years ago

#325

very very nice
loved reading it
cont. soon
very very nice
awesome
fantastic
well done
keep up the good work

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Drishti

@Drishti...

Rocker

Posted: 16 years ago

#326

ohh god sweatha u r soooooooooooooooooooo sweet!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!...my god!!!!...thankyou sooooooo much....i tld srishti also bout it and she liked it a lot and asked me to thankyou fmr her side!..thankoyu sooo much sweatha...u r such a true frnd ans sis...u rthe best,.,,the ⭐️...thnku so juch,...im soo touched..u dnt noe...rlly..thnks thnsk...she is alot better now...but a bit of all..u mad emy day sweatha..thnksss

n ya i read all ur updates!!!...awesome,...fantastic..lovely..all the adjectives in the world...and u noe i always love watevr u write....uve got te most imaginative mind..woww.w....lovely stuff....

n yaaa im sooooooo sorry im sooo late to reply...sorry

but all the parts were rlly very nice....lovely...😃 😳 👏

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riyana

@riya_luv_sv

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Posted: 16 years ago

#327

awsome yaaara.......i hate that simran/...

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Fighting Spirit

@LegolasGondolin

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Posted: 16 years ago

#328

Originally posted by: Drishti...
ohh god sweatha u r soooooooooooooooooooo sweet!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!...my god!!!!...thankyou sooooooo much....i tld srishti also bout it and she liked it a lot and asked me to thankyou fmr her side!..thankoyu sooo much sweatha...u r such a true frnd ans sis...u rthe best,.,,the ⭐️...thnku so juch,...im soo touched..u dnt noe...rlly..thnks thnsk...she is alot better now...but a bit of all..u mad emy day sweatha..thnksss
n ya i read all ur updates!!!...awesome,...fantastic..lovely..all the adjectives in the world...and u noe i always love watevr u write....uve got te most imaginative mind..woww.w....lovely stuff....

n yaaa im sooooooo sorry im sooo late to reply...sorry

but all the parts were rlly very nice....lovely...😃 😳 👏

thnx for taking the time out to read it yaar!!
im also indeed fortunate to have a frnd and great sis like u!!
luv u both (u and srishti too)🤗

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Drishti

@Drishti...

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Posted: 16 years ago

#329

Originally posted by: nasco

thnx for taking the time out to read it yaar!!
im also indeed fortunate to have a frnd and great sis like u!!
luv u both (u and srishti too)🤗

awww thnkyouuuuuuu sooo much sweatha....u r sooo sweet n caringgg....thnks

ohh love u 2...😳 😊...ohh srishti also?...😡

hehe joking....(jealous)

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Fighting Spirit

@LegolasGondolin

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Posted: 16 years ago

#330

my sincere apology to u guys!! it's long since i had updated my ff. im really sorry
im not sure when i'll be able to update next.well i'll try to update soon.so here is the update.

rajshekhar told that dadaji wanted to meet naitik urgently and naitik went downstairs running.he knew his dadaji never entertained latecomers.dadaji asked naitik to sit down ad gyatri and rajshekra also came down.akshara went to the kitchen to make tea and dadaji was telling naitii about a new client who had approached the singhania industries .he was mr podolsky form the u.s who was interested in cnstructiing another branch of his company in india.he was interested in ajoint venture and had approached singhania's for it. but due to the lack of time he culdn't come over to meet them and so dadaji had decided to send ntik to the u.s.naitik was excited at this prospect as this venture if fnalised wuld take their company to huge heights .
akshara came with tea and dadaji told everyone about this.
everyone's face lightened up when dadaji tol them abt this contract and the clientbut aksara's face dropped when dadji told them about his decision to send naitik to the u.s.dadaji also noticed this and he asked if akshara was free so that she also could go with naitik.
but akshara had clasess to attendand her semester xams were coming up and she culdn't go with naitik.
but she told dadaji thatit was ok if naitik went to the us.but everyone culd notice the sadness in her voice.she somehow kept herself together till they finished talking abt this.as soon as this was finished she culsn't hold ehrself anymore and ran upstairs tears rolling down her cheeks.
naitik saw her and he also went upstairs.he went to his room and saw that the lights were switched off and only the bedside lamp was on.hsaw akshara standing near the window. the moon was up and she was leaning onto the window.naiik uld hear her sobs and he immediately went to her.
a cool breeze was blowing making akshara look more beautiful while her har starnds lifted in the air.naitik went behind her and he kept his hand on her shoulders.akshara who had tried to fought her tears culdn't take ait anymore and she hugged naitik.she cried hugging onto naitik holding him as if she was holding onto her life.naitik culd understand her and he too was not interested in leaving akshara behind and going alone to the u.s.but this project was really important to them.akshara cried all her pain out ,she knew that naitik wuldn't go if she went weak and so she wiped her tears and asked anitik whne was he leaving and naitik said that if he was going he had to leave tmroe and akshara said that he should go!! she said it with sooo much determination that naitik was really surprised.
akshara and naitik went downstairs ,dadaji asked them about their decision and akshara said that naitik was going to the u.s .mr. podolsky had his own chartered flight and so naitik din't have to bother about booking tickets and all that.
they all had dinner together and akshara tried to look as cheerful as she culd .after dinenr dadaji ,rajshekar and naitik sat talking abut the project and their views on it.while akshara went to their room and
she sat on the sofa for sometime crying hugging a pillow.she heard footsteps and she stood up opened the cupboard and took out naitik's clothes and other things.naitik meanwhile met reshmi on the way and had a little chat with her. akshara kept naitik's clothes ready .she took a stool and and got on it to reach for the tracvel bag.she was about to fall off frm the stool due to the weight of th bag when naitik came to the room.he saw akshara's stool swaying and he ran to her and helped her down.hey had an eyelock session and naitik culd see the pain in akshara's eyes.he asked her if she was sure that he should go!! akshara told him that this was important for him and he should go!!
naksha started packing things and naitik hugged akshara from behind while akshra was keeping his clothes in the bag.he turned her to face him and he kissed her cheeks.akshara pushed him back and sh continued with her work.akshara told naitik hat she had kept a sweater and a shawl for him in case it was really cold .finally when they were done.naitik took his bag and kept it in the corner of his room. closed the door and scooped akshara up.he tok her to bed and stated kissing her allover her body.he knew well that he was not going to be with her for some days and this pained him too.akshaa also din't object and she also reciprocated his kisess and they forgot the world in nooo time...............

Edited by nasco - 16 years ago