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shwetha

@LegolasGondolin

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Posted: 15 years ago

#311

Originally posted by: -Love_Naksh-
AS usual it was very nice dear ...................... take your time to study n update when u have time ................u r doing a gr8 job👏
it was very nice ( they were embarresed when naitik was helping akshara have the tonic 😳😳😳)
overall it was cute 😉

please post long comments like these
thnx for reading and posting the comment.😊

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shwetha

@LegolasGondolin

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Posted: 15 years ago

#312

Originally posted by: shristi sarda
hey a really cute part........
keep updating like this.........

thnx for reading and posting the comment.😊

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ekta

@skfan

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Posted: 15 years ago

#313

hey dat waz so sweet!!keep up!!!

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niki

@niyati45

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Posted: 15 years ago

#314

i know i m silet reader
i will try to post everytime i read
but can u plz update it soon

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iHeartMoi

@iHeartMoi

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Posted: 15 years ago

#315

I really liked it want u 2 upload the next part faster. i am very curious 2 know wats gonna happen now. i kinda started hating simran. I want u 2 add more of naksh scenes widout any1 interupting them. Loved ur ff. why dont u write abt naitik taking akshara out somewhere or something like dat. It was just my opinion. Anyways, thanks 4 the part 16 waiting desperately 4 the next part. If u want any help feel free 2 ask i am always there. keep up wid ur gud work.

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Edited by 2112ization - 15 years ago

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shwetha

@LegolasGondolin

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Posted: 15 years ago

#316

Originally posted by: 2112ization
I really liked it want u 2 upload the next part faster. i am very curious 2 know wats gonna happen now. i kinda started hating simran. I want u 2 add more of naksh scenes widout any1 interupting them. Loved ur ff. why dont u write abt naitik taking akshara out somewhere or something like dat. It was just my opinion. Anyways, thanks 4 the part 16 waiting desperately 4 the next part. If u want any help feel free 2 ask i am always there. keep up wid ur gud work.
👏

thnx for the comment yaar!!will post the update soon!!

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shwetha

@LegolasGondolin

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Posted: 15 years ago

#317

note:-
this is a request from me to all of u guys .one of my frnd's sister is not well she is having high fever. all of u please pray for her so that she gets well soon and can write her xams !!🥱

akshara woke up in the middle of the night .she opened her eyes slowly and saw that naitik had dosed off in the sitting position.he looked cute while sleeping and she culdn't take her eyes of him.she was everything to him,she loved him unconditionally .she looked at him for sometime , she felt thirsty and she was getting ut of the bed when she felt someoen pulling he hand back.sh turne tos e enaitik rubbing his eys and he asked her if she wanted anything. akshara said that she was feeling thirsty and naitik asked her to sit and rest.he got up and took the jug ad poured a glass of water for her.he fileld it up to the brim and she took 2 sips but the dcotor had advised her to avoid driking water for sometime after taking the medicine.
akshara was abt to keep the glass on the bedside table when he took the glass from her and drank the water.he looked at akshara with a smile.he got on the ebd and lay down next to her and pulled akshara close wich akshara did without any objection.

akshara was alrigh the next day when she woke up.naitik was curled up next to her.she got out of the ebd his time extra careful not to wake naitik up.she took a quick showe and went downatirs .gayat was happy o see her.sh came o akshara touched her forhead with ehr plam and checked ig she was having fevr and akshara understnading his told her that she was allright.akshara went twith gayatri to the kitchen she made tea for everyone and she took one cup upstairs for naitik.
while naitik woke up sloely and he searched for aksaar next to him.he found her place empty and understood that she had woken up and then he heard footsteps.he covered his head with the blanket and
acted as if he was sleeping. he pulled the person towards and hugged her tight. he was still under the blanket . and akshara came with tea fo naitik and he scene she saw.
HOW DARE SHE??AKSHARA'S STOMACH TWICTCHED AT THE SIGHT OF SIMRAN BEING HUGGD BY NAITIK.SHE FELT A MONSTER RAGING IN HER!! SHE STOD THERE SHOCKED
naitik was hugging simran and simran saw akshara too.she acted as if she wtrying to free herself and she kept on pullin his hands.naitik got irritated and said what's this akshara? im ur husband and why can't i hug u?? akshara was angry and embarassed at the same time.simran din't repl and naitik pulled of the blanket. now it wa he who got shocked!! he immediately let got of his hand and asked simran tum??
im sorry!!i . i though it was akshara.....naitik looked at akshara who was atndng at the door .smran went out of the rooma dn she gave an evil smile to akshara.
naitik came to her and stood n front of her.she looked upa t him and naitik culd se a hint o jealousy in her eyes.he was also really embarassed.he said sorry and akshara turned to he othe side.naiti mad her turn to his side and brought his face close to her. he held her byt the wait and she felt her legs going weak.thier faces nearly touched and gayatri and rajshekar chose this time to enter into their room. they came inside naksha saw them and they broke apart.rajshekar and gayatri also felt awkward.
they had come to tell him abt some important work dadaji wants him to do

precap--- what wuld be simran's next plan??
post ur comments guys!!

Edited by nasco - 15 years ago

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iHeartMoi

@iHeartMoi

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Posted: 15 years ago

#318

Yaar it was awesome as usual...... only god knows how many times ppl hav posted the same thing saying that it was waesome but wat 2 do it was really great........... as usual luking 4ward 2 the next part pllz post it soon......... i hope watever the simran's plan is she fails in it!!

thanx 4 the update