Samaina os: I will love you enough - Page 4

Originally posted by: Princesswarrior

Inspired by all the talented writers on this forum and samaina's magic, I couldn't resist myself from trying my hand at writing. I hope this one was worth your time. .

Happy reading !!

Hello my dear Inayat you finally have me here! I am really sorry for being so late here and also for breaking our MPK rules again! Do forgive me dear!

I WILL LOVE YOU ENOUGH

She found the door ajar.She gave the African cherry wood door a slight push to open it further and quietly entered the room to surprise her man. But, instead of him, she recieved a shock. Her man was crying. Not that crying was a bad thing or her man had never cried before , but what shocked her was his state. His eyes were red, with pain, tears and anger, he, sitting on the floor sobbing ,clutching something, probably a frame, close to his heart.

Okay I love the subtle minute detailing you have done here. 👏 Sameer crying just hurts so much! Also 'her man'

"The frame must be his. Get hold of yourself naina, you have to be his strength right now, not his weakness.. He needs you. "thinking so, She plastered a smile on her face.

One line and you have somehow managed to summarise SamAina's bond, Sameer's love for Naina and her for his. How Beautiful! 👏 Because they are each other's strength through and through

She advanced towards him. He felt her presence. He looked up to see his reason for living, smiling at him tenderly with tears in her eyes. She raised her eyebrows asking him what's wrong. But that was futile. She asked a question of which she already knew the answer..

Ahh I absolutely love that he could feel her presence so strongly. The tears she has in her eyes because of seeing him in tears. The way she understood him so well. You have captured their beautiful bond so brilliantly here. 👏👏

She walked towards him and caressed his face. She was about to wipe away his tears, but he held her hand mid-way. And instead, gave her a bone-crushing hug with his arms around her waist and his head on her belly and he started crying hysterically.

This proximity did not cause butterflies to erupt in her stomach neither did her eyes shut due to shyness nor her heartbeat became eratic ,like it did to her usually. Rather, her belly felt wet due to his tears, her eyes were very close to losing the battle of keeping tears at bay and her heart writhed with pain to see her man so devasted.

Oof I love the way you have submerged Sameer's tears as a part of Naina's own body. These reactions are so beautifully elucidated. I am in awe already

"But it was best for him.", she reminded herself.

She knew he would have been sad today or would have been talking to his photograph,but never in her wildest dreams did she imagine or hope to see him like this. Broken. Shattered. These were the first thoughts that came to her mind after seeing him.

She constantly rubbed and patted his back and ruffled his hair,all the while assuring him that she was there for him. After half-an-hour or so, she felt his sobs subside and he moved back, distancing himself from her a bit. Both felt the lack of warmth. She slid down, taking support of the mahagony wood of which the bed was made, she sat with him in silence against the bed as he had been sitting.

I LOVE your characterization of Naina here. The way she is comforting him, soothing him without saying a word. Marvellous 👏👏

Although his wails had subsided, he was still sobbing. Naina was constantly caressing his cheeks, his head on her shoulder.

"Why? ",he asked sobbing. "Why nanu? Why was nanu chosen by god?",he asked like a 5 years old child questioning his mother as to why he was not given a chocolate.

"Because he was a noble man. God thought that he would be happier with him in the heaven. Moreover he would be able to meet Nani, the love of his life there. Don't you think he will be much better off there? ",she replied to him in the sweetest voice, just like a mother would have replied to her child.

OOf all this pampering and attention..my heart aches for his grief but also happy that the poor boy deprived of motherly love all his life is finally receiving tender, love and care so ardently.

"No, I don't think he'll be happier there. I need him. I love him. I want him by my side. ", he told clearly disliking naina's explanation for his question.

"But not everything can happen according to us.. Right? And wipe your tears. I am sure nanu would not like you crying, grieving for him, particularly not on his birthday .",saying so she wiped his tears and with her forefinger and thumb, applied pressure on the side of his lips, hoping he would smile.

But nothing changed. His cheeks became wet with fresh tears streaming down his face .

"Sameer, sweetheart I know nobody can ever take his place in your life, not even me for that matter, not that I want to. I am well aware of the fact that I can never love you enough as much as he did but I will surely love you enough.. "

Okay first, I know its absolutely wrong timing but 'Sweetheart' ☺️ I love how naturally she used that endearment. And now to the main thing- I will love you enough and with this you have my heart dear. That one life stands out in the fog of grief. Just the perfect thing to say. And I know this was written way before but that recent episode of Vishaka leaving him, it became so clear that all Sameer craved was someone to love him like Nanu and he has started seeing that immensity in Naina's love too. So bravo for this my dear! 👏👏

"To let me go.. Even you want to leave me?",he spoke before she could complete. With this, anger surged through his veins.

"No. No. No. Sshsh. Calm down sameer and patiently listen to me. I can never ever love you enough to let you go. No matter how hard I try, i won't be able to do that ever...",she paused for some time as she saw him relaxing after listening to her. She thought for a moment, an idea struck her to cheer him up. She continued ," But

Leaving this line here because the poem below is so beautiful I didnt have the heart to break its flow. You just closed the gap on Naina leaving Sameer and placating his insecurites and I love you for this. It was so satisfying as a reader and ardent watcher to find this dialogue. ⭐️⭐️

I will love you enough to trust you in all the situations, my entire life.

I will love you enough to guide you on the right track always.

I will love you enough to be by your side.

I will love you enough to hold your hand in front of the world, fearlessly because I love the way our fingers fit into the gaps between the fingers of the other.

Enough to peck your lips every morning as a good morning kiss, but that I'll do only after marriage. "

Naina knows exactly what to say to get to her Majnu doesnt she 😆

At this a small smile bloomed on his face, especially at the way she ended it. She felt her heart dance with joy after seeing the small smile on his face.

"Enough to share my ice-cream with you."

At this he chuckled and she followed him in the process.

"Enough to cook your favourite dishes everyday, at any time.

Enough to shut the whole world down if they say anything against you.

Enough to share all my secrets with you, even the most frivolous of them.

Enough to keep your secrets safe with me deep within my heart.

Enough to try to understand you always.

Enough to surrender myself completely in your arms, surrender my heart, soul and body to you.

Enough to help you forget all the melancholic memories of your past.

Enough to make millions of new memories which will be filled with joy, fun, love and romance. ", she winked at him and he blushed.

@BOLD he does often blush more than her but then flirts with her and makes us all blush

"Enough to get jealous of the girls you fake-flirt with to tease me. And also enough to give them a hug with a rope around their necks. "

Ahh Is this your work because I adore it. Absolutely adore, its at once about Naina, Sameer, SamAina and more than that its about dreams, love and butterflies in general.

And then there was silence for a moment or two. But love prevailed . And the room was filled with soulful and loud laughs, tears long -forgotten.

He looked at the ethereal beauty ,laughing whole-heartedly in front of him, thanking god for blessing him with his personal angel.

Ahh the beauty of this line though (I could totally imagine him staring at her passionately like he does often) 👏👏

She caught him staring at her and saw pure love in his eyes. She smiled . He stared deep in her eyes and she lost herself in the ocean of his eyes. They had an eyelock.

I love their eyelocks and I love the way you brought him out of the grief here..

Sameer was the first one to recover. Breaking the moment, he asked her ,"By the way, how come you got permission to come here? What lie did you make now? "

😆😆 oof Sammy boy knows his girl so well

"Excuse me? I think you are forgetting that we are getting engaged next month. Now we no more need to lie to our families to meet each other. I just told chacha ji that today is Nana ji's birthday and so I want to come here to celebrate it with you. And he gave the permission immediately.", she replied the moment he finished his sentence.

Ahh just the thought of SamAina getting engaged has my heart fluttering and I adore that you brought chachaji here too. Dil le lo for this dear 🤗

"Oh! I am impressed. ", he said. In return, she gave him a big smile.

"Oh no! ",she exclaimed,"while taking to you I completely forgot that I had brought a cake for the celebration. Sameer tum bhi na, bhulwa diya tha na mujhe. "

"Haww! Maine kya kiya? ",he pouted angrily. She pulled his cheeks and whoosh, his anger flew away.

OOf this is so cute and romantic at the same time it made me giggle like a school girl. I swear I used to be normal. 😆😆

"But naina, I don't think it is right to cut cake on his birthday when he is not there with us. ",he said dejectedly.

"Oho! You think alot sameer. And who said he is not with us? He is always there with us in our heart. And Of course it is an occasion to celebrate after all such a genial and chivalrous gentleman was born on this day! Come na.", saying so she pulled him up and together they proceeded to the drawing room with their hands intertwined .

Okay now I really think you should send this to the Cvs because the way Naina is helping him deal with Nanu's absence just shows her stellar character, personality and love.

Sameer was pleasantly surprised to see a cake lying forth him, a pineapple one to be precise. "Nanu's favourite. ",he remarked remembering him.

Again Love this small attention to detail you gave here!!

She tried to cheer him up," Come-on! Be fast. I cannot wait any longer to taste it. " He smiled.

Together they blew the candles, wished nanu to be happy wherever he was, cut the cake and fed each other.

Nanu I miss you 😭 But I love this celebration so much. Its somehow more intimate than a thousand other touches. Something so heady about them celebrating in his room on such a profound day. I love this concept so much!

Naina went into the kitchen to bring spoons and plates. Sameer just looked at her retreating figure. He realized how by her mere presence and assuring words, his mood changed completely. An hour or so ago, he was bewailing over the fact that his nanu was no more with him and now he was grinning like an idiot. He was at peace somehow, knowing that naina loved him enough . He smiled recalling her words which were actually vows she took, a few minutes ago.

Naina has always been Sameer's breath of fresh air in times of suffocation and you have showed it here so beautifully I am shook 😳😳

Tick. He came out from his reverie when he heard her clicking her fingers in front of him

" London? ", she questioned.

"Huh? I didn't get you.", he asked innocently.

" You were day dreaming so I thought you would be dreaming us together in London.", she mocked.

"Hahaha ", he faked laugh.

She made a face at him and he showed her his tongue.

"Sameer, Tum na...", she said irritated.

Ahh such banter and antics..I love them so much..so innocent and pure just like our SamAina

"Bahut handsome Ho. I know that.",he said interrupting her in between. "Now keep your lips sealed and let me enjoy the cake. " Saying so he sat on a chair and started enjoying the cake. Naina stomped her foot in annoyance. She sat on a chair in front of him and started eating a slice of cake.

Stop you are killing me with all this cuteness. I can't take it 😆😆

They ate in silence. Out of the blue, sameer admitted his feelings," Thank you naina. Had you not come today I would have shattered deep within. Thankyou. "

Her eyes bore into his and she could see pure love and gratitude in them. To say she was touched would be an understatement. She stood up and walked towards him caressing his cheeks.

" I love you alot. Enough to die with you!",he continued speaking but was stopped short.

Sameer Maheshwari you gotta be careful with these words after today's episode I honestly am so afraid for our dearest SamAina

"Shh!", she put her finger on his lips." Never say that again. ", he observed fury in her eyes. She closed her eyes, calming herself down. Just the mere though of his death, caused goosebumps to erupt on the back of her neck and a shiver to run down her spine. She opened her eyes, now calmer than before and said, " I have an even better plan.", she smiled. " I love you enough to live my entire life with you. "

Hayyee this line has me slayed. In your comment to my fanfic you said you wanted to borrow a line. Can I borrow this one? Pretty please 😳😳

His heart danced with joy listening to that. He repeated with her, " I love you enough to live my entire life with you. "

And the last and the most important vow of their relationship was sealed by a bone crushing hug. No body knew, who hugged whom first or for how long they stayed there ,in each other's arms but one thing the couple was sure of was that they felt at peace knowing that they loved each other enough.

Ahassnindueoenbfiuwl!! I lost my mind here, this hug was so beautiful, neither knew who initiated first because they are so together in their souls, they react to each other on instinct. I love this so much! You said you are my fan but dear I am your fan now!

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How was it?? I hope it wasn't too cliche? Kindly drop in your precious comments .

Cliche? My dear it defined the perfection that is SamAina!

Appreciation, constructive criticism, jute ,chappal, Tamatar etc, everything is welcome. 😆

No honey all I am going to throw at you are bundles of warm hugs 🤗

Love

Inayat

Originally posted by: IamIbe

I was astounded by the beauty that is your OS so I decided to comment on the quoted part as a whole because it would give me the chance to reread my favourite passages. (so sweet of you😳) First of all, Inayat dear itne time se kahan chupakar rakha tha tumne apna ye hidden talent.(deep inside .😆... Aap jaise talented writers ne hi toh push diya mujhe to let it out)😃 Second, I want more of your works.( would surely try to keep you entertained) Third, I absolutely love your writing, it was poetic, simply Samaina, cute, tragic...shwocased every shade possible.(ah!! That's a huge compliment. I am flattered😳 )My dear, you are very talented and you must continue writing because you are an absolute star ⭐️⭐️(thanks for the wonderful appreciation sweetheart)❤️

Bundles of love to you,

Sims <3

P.S- My responses in blue because red like your deep heart is your colour. I am touched by this sweetie.. While red is for me blue is booked for you.😆 It signifies the endless sky like your boundless talent and imagination. It symbolises water , as beautiful as you and your writing.. 👏

P.S.S- You put me in the habit of PS too. I know.. And sorry. Can't help. 😆. But I am absolutely loving your PS...

P.S.S.S- please forgive me for the extremely delayed comment you apologise once again , I will do Katti with you.😆😡 I understand and now chillax. .😃

Originally posted by: Yudkbh

Yr wow I mean how can I express my feeling, this magic seriously hats off hai yr aapko, meri aankhe bhar aayi sameer ka pain dekhke and tabi uski angle aa gyi, naina sach me angle hai no doubt about it she nows how to make him smile how to change his mood and the best part she genuinely respect nanu, use nanu ke birthday pe aana hi yaad nhi tha balki unke lie cake bi le aayi 👏 and in last wo sabi wade jo naina ne sameer se kiye matlb ghazab yr man gaye aapko