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SENORITA9999

@SENORITA9999

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Posted: 6 years ago

#761

One of the most beautiful story .Ekdum diferent and unique.love the development of both he characters.pl update soon.

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Khushiamaan77

@Khushiamaan77

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Posted: 6 years ago

#762

Hi dear

Waiting for ur next update

Plz update soon

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YUDKBHT

@YUDKBHT

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+ 4

Posted: 6 years ago

#763

Originally posted by: Labhya
Yayyy iska matlab jald hi update aaane waaala hai...
Accha jyada to nahi mangugi bs aap itna hi bata do ki next update me hm lalchi reader's ko kitna blush karwane ka irada hai aapka...????

Ha yaar very soon, pakka

Can't answer the second ques😆

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YUDKBHT

@YUDKBHT

Dazzler

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Posted: 6 years ago

#764

Originally posted by: SENORITA9999
One of the most beautiful story .Ekdum diferent and unique.love the development of both he characters.pl update soon.

Thank u very much😛

Glad u liked the concept of my story

Will update soon

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YUDKBHT

@YUDKBHT

Dazzler

+ 4

Posted: 6 years ago

#765

Originally posted by: Khushiamaan77
Hi dear
Waiting for ur next update
Plz update soon

Will update soon

Sorry I wasn't getting enough time to write. But will update soon

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alinaza

@alinaza

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Posted: 6 years ago

#766

I'm a new reader, just discovered your story.

I love it! Such a sweet believable story with all my favorite characters (adore Sameer, but I am a secret Munna fan lol).

Your writing flows so beautifully. I also appreciate that the majority of the story is in English, as I am not a first-second-or any rating Hindi speaker lol.

I am intrigued by the future plot and characters - the admirer Prem, is the Marwari caste going to be a problem, how will Arjun react, Naina has two years at college without Sameer, etc. So many plot lines to mine.

Looking forward to your update.

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YUDKBHT

@YUDKBHT

Dazzler

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Posted: 6 years ago

#767

Originally posted by: alinaza
I'm a new reader, just discovered your story.
I love it! Such a sweet believable story with all my favorite characters (adore Sameer, but I am a secret Munna fan lol).

Your writing flows so beautifully. I also appreciate that the majority of the story is in English, as I am not a first-second-or any rating Hindi speaker lol.

I am intrigued by the future plot and characters - the admirer Prem, is the Marwari caste going to be a problem, how will Arjun react, Naina has two years at college without Sameer, etc. So many plot lines to mine.

Looking forward to your update.

Dear new reader,

Hi, and welcome to this thread😛

Glad u liked the plot of my story and thanks for sharing your feedback!!

Its a achievements as a writer that u found my story to be believable and realistic. Actually I am more comfortable in writing in english since I read so many novels and I can use better vocabulary. Not sure if I can do the same in hindi but I do add dialogues in hindi, to give it an Indian touch.

Yeah, every part will get a proper closure, but for now I m focusing on the college. So caste problem is something that u may read in future.

Now coming to the next update. I have started working in it, and it will be very soon😛