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Posted: 6 years ago
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Nice update continue soon please...train journey... very excited
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Originally posted by: Rahul126545

Nice update continue soon please...train journey... very excited

Thank you Rahul😛

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PART-6

Naina-Sameer Tum pehle kabhi trekking pe gaye ho?

Sameer-haan

Naina-Main nahi gayi lekin ye mera sapna tha. It's part of my bucket list. Tumne khane ki chijen li hai na?

Sameer- Maine packing khud nahi ki hai.

Naina- Are waah! Tumhe ye bhi nahi pata ki tumhare bag mein kya hai..Lucky man..sab kuch kiya karaya milta hai..( Sameer did not say anything) Acha ye batao ki tumhe konsi hill-station pasand hai..

Sameer-Shillong

Naina-lekin wahi kyu.. India me to itne saare hill stations hai jaise Shimla Manali, Kullu, Mcleodganj, Auli, Sikkim, Darjeeling, Kufri aur bhi bahot saare..

Sameer- yuhin.

Naina- Acha yesab rehne do..Ye batao ki tumhari family me kitne log hain?

Sameer-Twelve..

Naina- Tum sabse bade ho apne bhai behen mein?

Sameer-Nahin

Naina- Ruko, main na tumse sawal hi galat tarike se puch rahi hun shayad isliye tum aise one word answers de rahe ho.. Mujhe aise puchne chahiye tha.. Write an essay on my family or describe your family in 200 words or List the name of your family members describing them... Kya yaar Sameer..bas haan..naa..yuhin.. aise kon baat karta hai.. aajkal to unlimited talk time ka jamana hai..Driver uncle aap batao ye hmesha hi aise rehte hain ya sirf mere liye special treatment hai.

Driver- Bitiya Sameer baba to aise hi hain kaam se inhe fursat hi nahin ki kisi se baat karle..

Naina- koi baat nahi uncle jab ye Janaab wapas ayege na trip se phir dekhna aap inhe pehchaan nahi payege (Naina was smiling childishly looking at Sameer, Naina slided down the window glass and began gazing outside) Subah subah ye duniya kitni khubsurat hoti hai na Sameer, jadatar log so rahe hain.. kuch log apna pet bharne k liye itni subah uthkar apne kaam ki shuruat kar rahe hain.. dekho wo sabji wali lady ko, wo itni subah uthkar sabjiyo ko tod kar market jayegi apne pairo pe chal kar yaha se kaafi dur wahaan jakar apne chhote se baithak (sitting) area ko saaf suthra karegi phir din bhar apna kaam karke wapas lautegi apne ghar jaha iske bache iska intejar kar rhe hoge... Subah subah sab kuch kitna acha hota hai na.. sukoon sa mehsoos hota hai.. mere papa daily morning walk pe jate hain mujhe kehte hai jane ko but you know na Iam very aalsi.

Sameer- You are not lazy.. tum bahot se kaam karti ho..

Naina- Tumse to kam hi karti hun.. Acha ye btao wo jo bird twi twi twi awaaz kar rahi hai uska naam kya hai..

Samee- mujhe nahin pata

Naina- Kya? Tumhe nahin pata.. Sadly mujhe bhi nahi pata.. wo us chhote puppy ko dekho kitne pyar se apni mumma ke paas soya hai.. Mujhe bhi apni mumma k paas sona hai (making puppy face) I miss my parents. ( then Naina began humming the song)

Nindiya se jaagi bahaar
Aisa mausam dekha pehli baar
Koyal koohke koohke gaaye malhaar
koohke koohke gaaye malhaar

Kab kya ho nahi aitbaar
Aisa mausam dekha pehli baar

Sameer thinking itni ajeeb hai ye ladki pal mein bachi ban jati hai aur dusre hi pal kitni gehri baatein karti hai..Pal mein khush aur dusre hi pal udas ho jati hai..


Naina-Sameer wo dekho.. The dawn has endowed its beauty even on a steel manufacturing mammoth. Sameer tum to kabhi kabhi night shift me gaye ho na..btao na kaisa lagta hai..


Sameer- jaisa din mein lagta hai bas insaano ke shor se jada machine ka shor hota hai..

Driver- lo bitiya pahuch gaye hum station..

Naina- are waah itni jaldi pahuch gaye..(she jumped out of the car like a 5year kid)

Sameer put on his bags and was about to take Naina's bag too when Naina said "I can do it on my own, Girl power you know.. Naina proudly pulled her trolley bag until she saw the stairs of the railway crossing..

Naina- Sameer tum ek ladki se itnaa bhari bag kaise carry karwa sakte ho.. ek kaam karo tum apni wo chhoti bag mujhe dedo aur ye lelo.. (Sameer obliged and Naina laughed) Tum na sach me bholu ho. Acha tum aage badho main kuch books aur khane ki chijen lekar aati hun.. (Naina went and Sameer said to himself "aur tum pagal ho Naina and he smiled)

{Suchna- Kalinga Utkal Express platform number -2 pe aa rahi hai}

Sameer- Itni der tak kaha thi dekho train aane wali hai..

Naina- aane wali nahin...wo dekho aa gayi..(naina turned her back to the train)

Sameer- Kya hua tumhe?

Naina-moving train ko dekhne se mujhe chakkar aate hai..

Sameer- Ab train ruk gayi hai, apna sara saaman mujhe do aur chadh jao train pe main tumhe luggage dunga side mein rakhti jana..

Naina got on the train took the luggage from Sameer, He was having problem in getting into the train because of the heavy backpack he had.. To help Sameer.. Naina extended her hand " Sameer mera hath pakdo aur upar aa jao The train suddenly started in a jolt and Sameer almost fell on Naina but they were saved by the hill of luggage made by Naina.. Naina took support from the hill and saved both of them from collapsing on the floor.. Sameer's one hand was tightly clasped with Naina's and his other hand was on her waist trying to save her from the fall.. both were breathless by the cute accident.. Sameer had never been so close to a girl. He did not understand why there was a sudden gush of euphoria within him. He was unknown to the feelings storming in him. Sameer was about to dwell in her fragrance of her hair when other passengers disturbed them to allow them to pass.. Both of them were lurched out of the trance feeling awkward..

Sameer- I am so..so.. very soryy Naina.. I am really very sorry ( Sameer kept mumbling sorry sorry sorry)

Naina- Calm down Sameer.

Sameer- I am very very sorry Naina, I did not intend to do that.

Naina- I know Sameer, now please calm down and allow the other passengers to go.. We are creating a blockage here.. (Naina rubbed Sameer's arm and said it's completely all right it was just a small accident)

Naina reached her compartment which had four seating, Kamya and Hema had already occupied it with their boyfriends. Naina tried setting in her luggage but..

Kamya- Naina tum yaha nahi rahogi tumhare sath bore nahin hona hamein puri journey mein.. Yahan main Hema Priyank aur Vicky rahenge.. Tum Priyank ki sleeper me chali jao..( Priyank's accommodation was with Sameer)

Naina- Lekin main waha akeli kaise rahungi aur agar seats change karne se koi problem hui to?..

Kamya- koi problem nahi hogi aur aur tum waha kaise rahogi wo tumhari problem hai. WE want to be with our boyfriends aur waise bhi Sameer to tumhara boyfriend hai na..

Naina- Kamya just shut-up there is nothing like that between us, do not try to tarnish our relationship or spread such futile rumours.

Sameer- Naina chalo yaha se..


Sameer was sharing his compartment with Munna and Pandit. They were from the junior batch hence they did not know each other.This will be their first meeting.



Munna and Pandit (together ) You are Naina Aggarwal right? You topped the training despite being from mechanical trade.. You are quite famous.

Naina- Thank you but aisa kuch nahin hai.

Munna- I am Manoj but please call me Munna. I am Asst-Manager at blast furnace.

Pandit- Call me pandit, I am Asst-Manager at Sinter plant-1. Its nice meeting you both..

Sameer- Hi! I am Sameer Maheshwari. I and Naina are Managers at WRM ( Wire and Rod Mill) Actually Priyank who was supposed to be here has changed his seat so Naina will be here wit us.

Munna and Pandit together- that's good we will have fun together.

Sameer settled all their luggage. Naina took her seat beside the glass window. Sameer sat beside her and Munna and Pandit were on the other seat. Sameer was about to take out his laptop but kept it back on getting a look of disbelief from Naina. Naina called Preeti and informed her that the journey had begun.. Sameer got a call from his Mom. His mom instructed him to do no work in the trip and just relax and enjoy.. Naina noticed that there was a message from unknown number in her phone. The message read " I was waiting for you.. Acha hua tum aa gayi.. we will have good time together Naina ignored the message.

Naina- Let's have coffee, Munna Pandit tum dono bhi loge na.. Lena hi hoga main jo bol rahi hu. ( Naina took out the flask and paper cups. Pured it for all of them)

Munna- aap to kafi jugadu hain Ma'am

Naina- Don't call me Ma'am. Call me just Naina. ( Sameer was smiling throughout , This girl had the magic of making Sameer's heart light. Her presence washes away all the worries and tensions of Sameer. He rejoiced her presence)

Pandit- Cheers to karo sabhi..( all of them cheered in unison and began sipping the coffee, they were chitchatting trying to know each other better)

Naina's phone buzzed again and the message read: "Mujhe bhi tumhara ras pina hai Naina was disgusted on reading the message..

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Edited by suma_yudkbh - 6 years ago
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Posted: 6 years ago
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Edited by suma_yudkbh - 6 years ago
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Posted: 6 years ago
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Nice update, really loved it
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Posted: 6 years ago
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Loved it fantastic update bahut maza aaraha hai train journey Kamal ki hai ...Aur Naina ko Kon disturb Kar raha hai...par kkoi baat nhi Sameer hai Uske saath Kuch galat hien nhi dega Sameer...I enjoyed it...please update asap...jaldi karna please yeh bahut late update hua tha ..isliye next part soon
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Posted: 6 years ago
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Nice update Suma. Naina is indeed a bright lightning spirit who can make her near and dears life bright with joy and happiness. It is very sad when people misunderstand those nature of ladies. You are nicely showing the issues ladies can face in a working environment.
One way it is good that she was made to sit with Sameer. That means her savior is always there with her to save her from prying eyes. Loved how unknowingly Sameer is getting affected by her. It will be really interesting to see how their train journey is going to be. Pls update soon.
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Posted: 6 years ago
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Originally posted by: Ashusanj

Nice update, really loved it


Thank you very much😊





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Posted: 6 years ago
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Originally posted by: Rahul126545

Loved it fantastic update bahut maza aaraha hai train journey Kamal ki hai ...Aur Naina ko Kon disturb Kar raha hai...par kkoi baat nhi Sameer hai Uske saath Kuch galat hien nhi dega Sameer...I enjoyed it...please update asap...jaldi karna please yeh bahut late update hua tha ..isliye next part soon


Thank you for reading and your comment..
Naina ko kon disturb KR RHA hai it's not difficult to guess still I will reveal it in the next part.. Naina has a support from Sameer.. but a villain is a neccessity to bring hero and heroin closer😉
I hope you will enjoy the next part too..
Thank you for being a regular reader.
I will try updating the next part soon
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Posted: 6 years ago
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Originally posted by: JaySee

Nice update Suma. Naina is indeed a bright lightning spirit who can make her near and dears life bright with joy and happiness. It is very sad when people misunderstand those nature of ladies. You are nicely showing the issues ladies can face in a working environment.
One way it is good that she was made to sit with Sameer. That means her savior is always there with her to save her from prying eyes. Loved how unknowingly Sameer is getting affected by her. It will be really interesting to see how their train journey is going to be. Pls update soon.


Thank you very much Seema for reading and for your loving words.
Yes such girls are always misunderstood by the people and society sometimes even by their own family.. there are plethora of issues faced by working women.. but we women have the mettle to overcome them and become the pioneers in creating a notch for themselves and in securing position for other women to be part of the working environment..

Sameer with Naina is a good thing.. thanks to Kamya..
They are on the journey to love and self discovery.

I will try updating soon

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